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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit, while some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both points of view and give your own point of view

Subsidies is a form of finacial assistance given to people by the government in order for a better living standards.I strongly believe a sum of money should not be given to people,as it may cause lesser productivity and a decline in a incentive to work .
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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Traveling has become a trend among people so, they travel diffrent countries with their loved ones. But, these days in some extend it has become an issue due to some reasons, whereas it also bring various benefits for nations in many ways. This development has a number of advantages than disadvantages which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with some relevant explanation in brief.
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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As time marches on, we find it more difficult to maintain cultures as we are now, more than ever before, are in contact with people of other cultures, and it is only natural that this exposure have effects. In my view, while it is important to maintain our way of life, it should not hinder relation with people that are different.
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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Parenthood could be challenging as it mentally and physically changes a person , it prepares them for world of new experinces , an important role for a lifetime . Most people would essentially at a start of adulthood or parenthood tend to be nervous and have intrusive thoughts which is completely normal.
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"Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Some people believe that individuals are responsible for solving environmental problems, while others think that it is the responsibility of governments and international organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion."

No one can deny that the environmental pollution are one of the most concerning matter in this modern era. It is debatad among the people that who should take care of such issues whether the government, global corporation or communities. I think it is every individual's role to maintain a better world to live.
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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Many working people do not spend enough time to exercise, which lead to multiple health problems. How to tackle these problems and make these people to exercise? These problems appear because they don’t have enough time to do sports, or too tired to exercise after busy working the whole day. Hence, they can solve the problem by allocating a time to exercise and joining the sports community which they loved.
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Some people thinks that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people thinks that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Some people say that shops should sell food products from the local area rather than sell food imported from other country's.Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that supermarkets have to sell products which is made by local manufactures or farmers instead of marketing with overseas food. Personally, I completely disagree with the idea of restriction foreign products, and would prefer to taste the cultural food of abroad countries.
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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teaching children to cooperate through team sports at school is the best way. Although I partially agree with this statement, there are other ways to teach children to cooperate.
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In some countries, prison is seen as the solution to crime. However, some people believe that giving people a better education is a better way to prevent them from committing crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these ideas? Give your opinions based on your knowledge and expeiences.

There is no doubt that other nations still practice jail time to solve felonies. However, it is debated among the people that they should provide education to reduce violation. I totally agree that education as prevention to avoid them on committing misdeer.
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Nowadays, more and more employees choose to work remotely, for example from their homes. Many view this as a positive development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Working from home is the new phenomenon that was almost unheard of five years ago. However, during the pandemic it grew in popularity becuase of the fact that working in close quarters was not possible. Now, however, many people argue that doing a job remotely while workspaces are safe will affect the job in a negative way.
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Some college freshmen find that the subjects they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes for this? What can be done to solve the problems. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some students in college have a wide awakening of the fact that the subjects they are already studying are not meant for them. This is so because they read a subject to pass it, they also want to please their parents and finally they are not knowledgeable. This essay will also give solutions and to the problems.
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Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth.

As I mentioned earlier, when I was in the school era, I sell things that were trending at that time. Not only that, in the college era, I was working as an intern for 5 times. Starting from being a marketing team in a startup, project management, sales and business development, and the last one as a management consultant. Outside interning in some companies, I like to learn new things that are far from my specialization, such as coding classes and I found that I didn’t enjoy coding that much. From knowing that, I was satisfied enough because at least I know that coding is not my thing, so I can focus on my strengths. I kept tryring to find which specialization that suits me the most. Try another one and keep looking and trying new things. Luckily, later I realize that I actually like understanding every aspect, not in a deeper level, but I can connect the dots between all of it. As the more I understand myself, I can be more selective on which specialization that I want to focus on....
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Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve.

Since elementary school, I used to sell accessories and stickers to my friends and it kept going until I got into junior high school, high school, and college. I sell things that were trending at that time. I always look for opportunities that might be a good way to get money. Moreover, My Dad was also a full-time entrepreneur since I was 14 y.o. Unfortunately, his business bankrupt 8 years later. It just makes me feel curious why his business failed. I was thinking that he might offer not a product market fit or as simple as he was not really passionated on his business. Until, when I still on 5th term on college, exactly when pandemic hits us, I found people tend to use Zoom and subscribe Zoom monthly on Zoom's website, because the minimum subscribe is monthly, but in fact, they only used it like 2 or 3 times in a month. So, I offer a service to people that they can rent Zoom in daily or even hourly rate and it will be more effective and save their money. I have been 4 years on ...
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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s society, there are contrasting views on whether people should focus more on cooperating or competing with one another. In my opinion, cooperation can lead to better results.
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More and more people are working from rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days many individuals work from home and it is debated among the people whether it provides a upside or psychological factor to the households and the employee. I believe that work from home provide benefits and I will explain in detail in the following paragraph.
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Some people believe that children should spend all of their fee time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Nowadays, many agree with the fact that the younger generations should devote as much of their time to their relatives. While some argue that this can be benefitial, others find it to have a negative effect on a child's well-being. The purpose of this essay is to provide arguments and illustrate why I personally believe, that children should not spend all their leisure time surrounded only by close family members.
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At the present time, thepopulation of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is certainly true that some countries have a majority of youngs than old people. However not all the effects of this innovation have been positive, although, it has certainly some advantages.
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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside this vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

There is the long-standing debate about whether in future driverless cars will be more appreciated and exceeding current vehicles in every side. Whereas some believe that this practice would bring more metrics, others, including me, believe that this change would lead to some serious demetrics as job losses and vulnerable system, which could be hacked.
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Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest for this issue?

In recent years, the media has been developing as a vehicle to connect people with each other and also to propagandize information. The image of young thin women is promoted as an ideal image for women to pursue. This problem can cause shaming in everybody's minds about women. In my opinion, the solutions of education is the best way to diminish this phenomenon.
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