IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 223

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays enormous people try to compete become successful in the future through their career or education. There is a lot of discussion about the meaning of success and it will be different among others. I believe to become a success are getting high education level and bring positive impact and contribute to the society.

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In many countries today, both men and women need to work full time. Therefore, some people think men and women should share household takes equally (eg. cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that nowadays both parents are working full time to provide basic needs to their children namely foods, medical care, housing and education. Therefore, in term of household , some might argue that this task should be equally divide by two parties or just maintaining on the traditional beliefs. In my perpective, I totally agree with the statement above which I will explain in the next paragraph.

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Some people think that best way to reduce crime is to sentence long term prison.However,others think that there are alternative way to reduce crime describe both view points discuss your opinion.

Crime reduction has always been a crucial concern for societies worldwide. While some advocate for harsher sentences as a deterrent, others argue for alternative methods. This essay will explore both perspectives, ultimately supporting the view that alternative methods are more effective in reducing crime. A detailed discussion will be presented to illustrate this position.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are some countires where more than 50 percent of their workforce is filled by women. However, the higher position at companies does not reflected the same percentage. I believe that special quaotas should be an option to create gender equality inside oldest business or predominant male industries.

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Dicipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools.Some people think that dicipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while others think this is the role of parents. Dicuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is cruical that students' discipline can affect their whole-personal development. However, the responsiblites to nurture students with their discipline are judged. Some people agree that teachers should take these, while some people suggest that parents should take the role. The essay would discuss on both sides of opinion and I would give my point of view.

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Schools have the social responsibility to discourage children from eating junk food. Others think it is the parent's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since due to the increased prevalence of processed food items among children, health has become one of the gravest global concerns. While some individuals claim that educational institutes should address this problem, others believe that parents should take the responsibility. Nevertheless, I firmly am of the view that it is parent's primary duty to monitor their children's eating habits by actively participating in their daily routines. This essay explores the reasons supporting why a proportion of society renders the issue as school's responsibilty and why the remainder reckons the otherwise.

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, working environment has been changing rapidly than ever before due to innovation of the technology. Some believe that work from home it would be better than travelling to a workplace every day. I think working from home has more benefits than drawbacks. This essay discusses it briefly for the further explanations.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

Few individuals are of the opinion that doctors and engineers should practice their profession in the nation they got trained from, while their counterparts think that such professionals must posses the freedom to work in any country. I vehemently oppose the view of learned professionals being restricted in the country they acquired their work experience from, as that would hinder the personal growth of an indivual.

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Some people think that best way to reduce crime is to sentence long term prison.However,others think that there are alternative way to reduce crime describe both view points discuss your opinion.

As people can feel more satisfied living in a city with lower rate of the crime, they come up with different ways to reduce it. In my view, severe punishments are possible to avoid people to challenge the law.

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Music can be used to connect different people from different age and cultures

Aesthetic is a field of recreation which is a paramount necessity for the human and place a pivotal role in the human needs' hierarchy. Thus,music to bears a significant value in the society, regardless the age or the culture. There is a societal debate as some are claiming that, music is an ideal mode to gather individuals from any age gap and any cultural background while, others contending on the opposite side of this notion. I totally agree with the former view and the following paragraphs will illustrate a clear overview on my opinion .

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some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Introduction, Nowadays the amount of fresh water is decreasing day by day and a lot of people waste f

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Some people say that the idea of having a career with one company is an old-fashioned one. To what extent do you think having several different jobs or career is better than a career with one company?

Nowadays, the concept of having multiple career options is a new trend with several advantages like multiple income sources, a secured future, and a better lifestyle. I strongly agree with this psychology as it inspires the individual to grow continuously in his/her career.

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In many countries people of all ages do sports and exercises a lot. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvanatges? Give reason for your answer and include examples from your own experience and knowledge.

In multiple nations, nowadays people of all ages are practicing all type of sport activities, this essay believes that advantages outweigh drawbacks. Practicing a comparison, we can enumerate many advantages. To begin with, people are healthier as they are practicing physical activities. On top of that, individuals are happier, since sports are a natural antidrepesives and finally, the community become much more social, as many sports are practiced in a group, therefore individuals can build a trust relationship with other ones. Analyzing the other side, this essay cannot see or notice any disadvantage related to this trend.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both theses views and give your own opinion

Part of people believe that parents should teach their children to participate in the activities, which involve multiple children and others think children should learn to enjoy their own company by getting involve in such activities that just include them only. However, I firmly believe with the idea of pushing children to get into team activities because they would be able to make connections with others as well as get a chance to learn something unique from others.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some groups of individuals who contends that students in tertiary education should only be allowed to learn science and technology as it would benefit the nation, however, there are opposing group saying that student should be allowed to pursue any studies they like as it will contribute to diversity of society.

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Some people spend most of their lives close to where they were born. what are reasons , what are advantage and disadvantage .

Hometowns play a considerable role in human development.Therefore , there are some section of society that lives their whole life at their birthplace.There are numerous reasons behind this situation which have their own merits and demerits.

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some children spend most of their free time taking part in clubs and other planned activities do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, parents tend to attend their youngsters in several classes. This trend can end up fine for children, but it can also damage them. I personaly think that the drawbacks are more than the benefits. In this essay, I wil consider both views and give my opinion.

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In many places around the world more and more people are suffering from stress-related illnesses. What are the causes of stress and how can the problem be tackled?

Over the last few decades,the number of diseases which relates on stress has increased sharply.It is considered that the majority of people are suffering from some illnesses with stress resource.This essay will look at some reasons of stress in the world which needs to be tackled urgently and also I will propose some significant solutions.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Certain individuals claim that presence of good salary sign of comfortable life, while others believe that satisfaction at the job is more crucial than amount of money. This essay will argue although high earning can create better circumstances, it will not work if people do not like their profession.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Technology has been improving tremendously more than ever before, especially media sectors. Some people believe that traditional method of newspaper is the best way to learn news while others say that there are other panedia is to be considered to learn better news. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following explanations.

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