IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 272

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people believe that a country’s wealth is dependant on the health of its citizens. Other people argue that education is a better indicator of a nation’s wealth and well-being. What is your opinion? What are some other factors that contribute to the growth and prosperity of a country?

There are numerous gauges to the country's overall wealth. Some might argue that the citizen's health should be the primary indicator of a country's well-being, while others believe that education is a better measure. Personally, I believe that education is the rightful measure to assess the country's financial state, however, other factors like infrostructure should not be overlooked.

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As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been a commonly discussed topic that science and technology has become a most important aspect for the growth of the society the students who study science subjets should get more financial support from governmant than management and art students. I partially agree with the said statement.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction, do you agree or disagree?

One of the most burning issues of today’s world is whether wages are more necessary than employment happiness. This essay disagrees with the given phenomenon. Job satisfaction is key factor of every work. And it contributes to the amount of work is done.

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Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children while others claim it has positive effect for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Television impacts children due to channels such as history channels or movie channels, However, it depends on whether parent permits kids to watch TV also it is effective for children or not Moreover Proponents of television viewing argue that it can have several positive effects, while critics believe it can be detrimental to children's health and development.

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Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages？

Health services have been significantly developed in comparison with the ancient time. In this regard, recently, there are various types of clinics in all over the world, such as private hospices of which privatizing is a major issue which has opponents and advocates. This essay will express the benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.

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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Explain your choice by using specific reasons and details.

Starting using computer from young age can benefit children in many ways. This can have many advantages as well as, many disadvantages.I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and then i will share why advantages are more than disadvantages.

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First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

There are plenty factors based on job selection ranging on excellent profile to sheer luck . It can be argued that the interwiev forms a crucial part of the hiring process , but I dont thinks so thats the important . I contend that the individuals achievements and professional experience of the candidate are more important in this process.

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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that modern technology development play a critical role in the ratio of crimes. While it is a commonly held belief that technology improvement declined crime, there is also an argument that opposes it because they considering technology shore up the level of crimes. This essay will analyze this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the reasons that cause stress, and effects?

It is an irrefutable fact that, in the contemporary world, stress become the main barrier in the growth of different countries. Such a trend comes with alot of problems, which demand immediate consideration. This essay will analyze the reasons like the competition level and the high inflation and the impact of these problems on the human being such as mental health issue in the upcoming paragraphs along with examples.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

These days many careers such as healthcare provider and tutor are migrating to work in the developed world for a better future. Although there are several problems related to this matter, solutions are on hand to address them.

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, increasing number of people work away from their families and friends. I believe that this situation has benefits and handicaps because their relationships with their relatives and friends might affect on a negative way. By contrast, they might earn more than their old occupation.

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In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?

Besides my backgrounds and experiences in all scenarios, namely academic, work, and research, not only my critical thinking and problem-solving skills have developed faster but also the relationship between the technological field and medicine has awakened my interest. Therefore, I am undertaking a virtual Postgraduate Program in Artificial Intelligence at The University of Texas at Austin, which has given me tools aimed at Python Programming Code, Machine Learning, and Neural Networks in addition to Linear Algebra, Statistics, and Data Analytics.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is widely acknowledged that modern technology has brought people together, but there are also others disagreeing with this idea. As far as I'm concerned, I partly agree with this idea.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music in an excellent universal instrument through which people can convene in one place and share their ideas, emotions and stories. Owing to the issue of popular gatherings, many believe that music serves this purpose the best and I totally endorse this viewpoint due to music’s universal reach and fun nature.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, societies favor academic success better than non-academic. As for that reason, people demand that non-academic related subjects as for physical education, art, and cookery to be erased from school's curriculum. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Owing to the controversial issue of environmental challenges, some believe that the priority outght to be given to the extinction of specific types of plants and animals, while others mention that we should draw our attention to more imminent dangers. I strongly agree with the second group and argue that all attentions should be focused on the mortal pollution problem.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Owing to difficult conditions including unhappy professions or scanty salaries, many argue that adating to the situation is the superior policy, while others are of the opinion that one should strive for a more satisfactory opportunity. I strongly support the human instinct for breaking the barriers in order to shape a brighter future, regardless of obstacles.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, there are numerous number of cars on roads in UK due to a huge development starts from 1888. To begin, there is a discussion whether substitutes and legislation for car s are required or not. I personally agree that restriction for vehicles are needed, as well as boosting other transport methods such as a bus and a train.

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People have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion by governments. Some think it can be solved by building more train and subway lines, while others believe building more roads and widening existing roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue whether to build more train and subway lines leads to decreased the traffic jam. I will explain why building subway lines are more vital than expanding the current road.

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Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as sky diving and motorcycling. Are you in favor of them? Use examples to support your opinion.

There is no doubt, that some people captivated by having dangerouse hobbies such as diving or motocycling. I am not fan of those activities and believe that this phenomenon has negative developmend.

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