IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 333

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Living in a society, our identification are usually strongly influenced by others' opinion and reaction. While it is true that we often define ourselves by others' perspectives, it is also crucial to avoid the social tags from confining us and our possibilities.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, more and more highlights are given to the young while the money of authority should be expenditure on outdoor activities for youngsters. It is the opinion of this writer that it is better to administration to spend the income on the leisure activities of the child rather than give too much for schooling because of stress in learning and lack of social skills.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays , some people believe that the government should be invested money to break time activity of the young that becoming an important decision to young people education. From my perspective, I totally agree with the statement for some reasons.

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In some countries old age is highly valued, while in others youth is emphasized. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought by some people that the elderly is highly appreciated in some nations, while others believe that youth is important. The writer of this essay argues that young workers are more essential than the old due to their plenty of health and the wide range of soft skills.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activities of young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People argue that should use government budget to invest on leisure activities for the youngster rather than concentrate too much on education. This essayist is fond of such state and will give reasonable evidence.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

It must be acknowledged that the number of fauna and flora is diminishing from all over the globe. The writer believes that it is due to the overpopulation in human society and this can be addressed by raising public’s awareness and punishing people who pose a risk on the ecosystem.

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Parents will provide food and housing to their children throughout their lives. However, when parents become old, many children do not want to take care of them, and will instead send them to a nursing home or leave them alone. Do children have a duty to take care of their elderly parents? Or should someone else be responsible?

Although taking care of elderly parents is a crucial mission of the children, there is still some rejection coupled with sending the older to social houses among those children. This writer believes that the children should assuume the responsibilities of maintaining a sustainable living standard for their parents instead of the government owing to proving the humanity along with the reduction of financial burden on the local authorities.

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Too much emphasis on is given for educaton of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern age, especially living in the ceaseless developments of the world, education becomes the compulsory obligation of young generations. Therefore one supposes that it is worthy to spend money on education while there is a controversial opinion about the insufficient handout of leisure activity for

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is decling. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Recently, flora and fauna throughout the world is getting more and more deteriorated, which results in the decrease in their amount. This problem has occurred for a long time due to human activities in fulfilling desires. Despite that, it can be resolved by organizing preservation both in lab and nature.

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In many countries, the number of animals adn plants is decling. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

The assumption of wild animals and plants are being decreased. Due to having deforestation without permission, the problem is becoming worse. However, the problems can be tackled by generating some heavy rules with significant punishment.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Numerous nations around the world are suffering the trend of youngsters who have high qualifications can not be recruited . The writer of this essay believes that the problem is caused by the appearance of technologies as well as individuals having less soft skills than before. Nevertheless, (idea B3) <pursuing daily trends can solve this problems>

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Modern fofrm of communication such asemail or messaging have reduced number of time people seeing their friends.To what extent doyou agree or disagree?

With the advancement of technology ,pupils use virtual ways of communication and spend less time with their friends and family members in face-to-face meetings.This trend brings some positive as well as some negative effects on the social lives of individuals.I completely agree with the statement but it has more merits than demerits .The following essay will discuss it in details.

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Some people feel that private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over whether it is suited to openly sharing the private lives of celebrities by the social platform or not.In my opinion, I would consider myself an supporter of this idea.

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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

While it is widely claimed that experiences based on pre-school phase are vital for the children development in later time, others argue that experiences accumulated in aldolescent era, to be specific, from school, are much more influential. Both point of views and reasons why I agree with both of the statements will be elaborated on in this essay.

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People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, watching entertaining programs without having company is more likely to be selected.

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In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

In many parts of the world, the reduction is plants and animals I becoming more significant. This writer believes that the reason for this problem is because of the human impacts and can be tackled through an increase in determination.

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You should spend about 40 mins. Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

The issue of banning mobile phones at public places has been a recent topic of debate among the nation. Some proponents of society believe that smartphones should not be allowed at public areas such as libraries, shops and public transport. However, I disagree with this notion and this essay will analyze my views by taking examples to demonstrate points to prove arguments.

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Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

In the eyes of some, focusing on the early chosen career path guarantees satisfaction in their working lives. In my opinion, as modern technologies develops really fast, job markets may vary through time, hence, people should be able to adapt to changes, especially professionally. In addition, maintaining work-life balance and securing a job with colleaguses who share the same values also plays an important part in the acquire of a satisfying working life.

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In many countries are investing in new technology to deal with public. Why is this happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of government money?

Nowadays, technology causes the drastical changes in the person's life. However, some contries contribute more wealthes in the technology to deal with public. It will be succor government in future to makes their work effortless. I deem that, it is the right investment of money by the government. I will elaborate on my opinion in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

there is a problem in some nations that highly qualified graduates have no job. the writer of this essay believes that employers are looking for other abilities, so employees must alternate to adapt to requirements.

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