IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 329

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people nowadays live longer than before and many societies argue that it would be burden in some points. However, there are communities that assume this could be benefit them especially among scientist because they could have more specialist. I wholeheartedly agree that the advantages of having eldery outweigth the disadvantages.

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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that school should award students who have the best academic achievement while others argue that rewarding students who show improvement is more important.Although the students who have the best scholarship will receive the award due to their ability to earn something that they can do better than others,I believe that the pupils who present themselves as a improvement person should deserve the award too because it points out that they have the effort

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some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods.while others aruge that customers should avoid buying goods with alot of packaging.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

nowadays , the lifestyle of many people can play a crucial role in consuming different types of goods in their lives. some people think that many companies and markets have a great responsibility to decrease the rate of packaging of goods while others believe that customers ought to avoid shopping for foods with a little packaging. In my opinion, I consider that factories and markets can help to reduce the rate of packaging by introducing goods with low cost.

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in the future nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

There is a notion that hard copy of books and newspaper will not be available in the future, due to the fact that people will be able to read these documents in internet for free. There is some basis for this belief, however, I think it will not be the case entirely. Because people will pay for something if they want to read it on their own volition, on top of that, the algorithm to protect piracy is becoming stronger.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The human population has been growing globally. It is argued that this phenomenon is the most challenging issue of the current era. There are a number of causes leading to this problem. This essay discusses the underlying reasons and my own point of views sating why I agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that sport is very important for human life. Some hold the view that sport is main part of education system, whereas others believe that children should choose sports according to their own preferences. This essay will discuss both views and state my own position.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is probably better to have the place where you work or live clean, some would say. A proper environment may be a source for creativity or even for keeping you organised. I have to agree with this point of view and this essay will provide the right arguments.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand Humans life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People learn a lot from the past. Some individuals think that it is necessary to look at the past as the navigation to face the future, however, some think otherwise. In this essay, I will delve into both perspectives and provide my opinion on that matter.

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Some people are born to become leaders, others believe leadership can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is an ongoing debate about whether some people have the capacity to lead people when they were born so leadership skills can be taught. Although the former is crucial, it is important for the latter to be prioritized.

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the process below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

the diagram illustrates the information pertaining to the salmon life cycle

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Children nowadays watch TV programmes more than ever before. Is watching television good or bad for children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In this world of technology, the most influenced are adolescents who are spending a lot of time watching screens. Many argue that this habit has only disadvantages, while others disagree and believe that it is beneficial. In my opinion, it is extremely harmful especially for young children for their health and because of icreased rates of mental disorders . This essay will discuss the downsides of being addicted to TV shows by children.

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•Parents will provide food and housing to their children throughout their lives. However, when parents become old, many children do not want to take care of them, and will instead send them to a nursing home or leave them alone. Do children have a duty to take care of their elderly parents? Or should someone else be responsible?

Parents will provide food and housing to their children throughout their lives. However, when parents become old, many children do not want to take care of them, and will instead send them to a nursing home or leave them alone.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young children. Moregovernment money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The emphasis on studying has been increasing gradually over the past decade, and young children feel burdened by this immense pressure. It is arugued by some that, authorities should be funding leisure activities of adolescents. I, absolutely agree with this notion because, children feel a lot of stress and want personal time to disconnect from problems and relax and want to indulge in other activities for relaxation and growth. This essay will discuss the reasons for implementing free time activity.

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Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the country side. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Companies and Factories located in the major cities have problems such as congested and increassed demand in housing. In my opinion I firmly believe that indiustries do bring certain issues such as pollution and accidents, which leads to increased motor vehicle deaths.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting is very importance to people.

As in modern society owning a home rather than renting would bring quite good value to residences.There are several factors we should consider when we purchase the land or a apartment such as weather conditions facilities Accommodation facility etc. When we talk about the advantages of having your own land the factors are as below let's discuss them one by one. The owner has a comfort zone. Since the home is belonging to himself he or she has a free mind about the situation of having your own home. More there won't be any dough about security and a better protector place for them. Another key is Individuals can replace and arrange in order since the perfect personalization is in control. Therefore owning a house would be easy for community depending on their economic status or Job status.

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Some people say that the main environment on problem for our time is to loss of particulare species of plans an animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

People believe that the major issue related to the environment is the extinction of rare animals but others argue that there are many problems more urgent than. The writer of this essay agreed that the disappearance of uncommon animals is not the most instant problem.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. what is this case? Is there any benefits for this ?

There is a fact that several higher education students find literature tedious and unessential. For the perspective of the writer, the primary cause for this is come from the poor teacher systems but it has many beneficial effects on human lives.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Many individuals say that the new era of technology has divided people, whereas others think that due to it we can stay much closer between each other, rather than before. In this essay, I will explain both points of view.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays there is more choice for the consumers then ever in the past. Most small towns have a large supermarket and you can buy any product on the internet with just the click. This might be good for consumners but small local shops are competition and they have to close, in my opinion we need to protect small shops by closing.

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some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give yout opinion

A number of university students are interested in taking optional courses beside their main ones. While the rest believe that all their time and attention should be spent focusing on what is primary. Variety knowledge would be beneficial for those who want to pursue a generalist career. In the opposite, being a specialist would require a deeper understanding on a specific discipline. In my oppinion, it would be more strategic and easier to do the former one.

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