IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 336

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Employers should give their staff at least four weeks holiday a year to make employees better at their work to what extent do you agree or disagree with this

In the Morden era, there has been a long-standing debate about whether employers should give their staff at least four weeks' holiday a year to make employees better at their work from my standpoint, it has a large percentage advantage. Furthermore, I endorse this statement. First and foremost, if employers give their staff at least four weeks' holiday a year will be better at their work. if the owner had given them would have been efficient. for me, it is a good argument because the staff have many workloads. workers are working ten hours or 12 Hours per day. Although some countries have at least six weeks of holiday a year thus other countries do have not at least four weeks of holiday a year. It is a debate point. On the other hand, it is good for the company's production. For instance, if employers did employees would be wo...

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Topic: Nowadays in many countries people are following the latest fashion, hairstyle and so on. Why are they so influenced by fashion? Is it a positive or negative development?

These days new versions of fashion, hairstyle and so on play the most tangible role in order to update the customers about new products because the advertisement for selling them are being increased annually in many countries; however, individuals are extremely influenced by them negatively.

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In many places, new homes are needed , but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

it is argue that due to population increase new residences are required , but countryside is only our availiblity , however some people have any idea that the protection of this area is more vital and new house should be built somewhere else. I beleive that counrtyside should be preserved in order to conserve animals habitat and less airpollution.

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nowadays eating habits of people around the word are changing, causing many health problems including obesity.why do people tend to eat so badly?what can be done to improve eating habits?

nowadays, many people have changed their habits of eating during these years, which causes many problems, like obesity. This problem originated from lack of time and increasing the costs of fresh vegetables in some countries. There is much that can be done to address this problem.

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Many people believe that individuals over 65 should not allowed to continue working others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A host of people indicate that people over 65 should be retired

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Throughout history, people have dreamed to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how what the ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? What can people do to achieve an ideal society?

From the ancient periods, most of the individuals in this universe are willing to live in a good organized community, whilst they don’t have any idea about the good society and it will like to be. My point of view, a perfect society is mainly depends on people dignity and they will mix and help to each other. This essay will delineate the important factors for the ideal society.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

Nowadays, while some university students tend to educate other subjects in addition to main subjects others opine that it is essensial to give all energy to studying for a qualification. In my opinion, the fisrt view contains some more inherent advantages than the second.

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Some people think that governments in developing countries should introduce new technologies to people in order to improve the quality of life, while others believe that in order to achieve that governments should offer free education for all. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that governments in developing countries should introduce new technologies to people in order to improve the quality of life, while others believe that in order to achieve that governments should offer free education for all. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.In recent years the topic of whether the governments should introduce new technologies to people to improve the quality of life has been regularly debated.On other hand, Some people believe that the governments should provide free education for everyone. I believe that both views are important.

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Some people think that media like newspaper should stop publishing the information about the people's private life , Others think that control to stop such publication should be put in place. Discuss both views and state you opinion.

News in the current generation spread like forest fire, which sometime affects innocent lives and people may placed guilty. This affects their personal image in the social presence. To this some suggest make a complete stop on publishing information about the private life would resolve the issue, to counter some argue that it is necessary to place a authority in charge to control these publication. Although the latter opinion suggest beneficial ideas to safeguard the an personal of society. I believe a balanced approach is needed.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

In this modernization world, televison has been playing a major role in all people life. Some persons thought, it will ruin the leisure time of many individuals also put them in lethargic and isolated from others. I strongly disagree with statement by giving the below mentioned points.

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the top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some people believe that generating profits is the most important element for businesses and I accept that this perception is some what justifiable. However, I would argue that public responsibilities are equally crucial for businesses.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on family life and society?

In modern life, many people make are decision to have baby later in their lives. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving factors behind this tendency before clarifying its detrimental impacts on family and community.

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At the present time the population of some country include large number of young adult compared with no of older people do ou think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Qualitative (Table 2) and quantitative analysis (Table 3) were conducted to study the range of compounds of Avicennia marina at different maceration time and organ. The results showed that phenolic and flavonoid compounds are present in all extracts of Avicennia marina, yet saponin compounds are not detected in both leaves and stems. This can occur because phenolic and flavonoid compounds have the same polarity with the solvent used, causing those compounds to dissolve easily in the solvent. This findings are in line with previous study such as Fajri et al. (2021) who reported that saponin belonging to non-polar compound can not dissolve in the polar solvents like methanol, ethanol, or water. Similarly, Manurung et al. (2017) reported that phenolic and flavonoid are detected in all different parts of Ficus deltoidea extracted using methanol solvent, while the saponin compounds remained absent.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that people are more dependent on others in nowadays, while others think dwellers hold the opposite point. From my perspective, I consider that individuals rely on others more often than before.

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The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media? Đ

Nowadays, more and more people take advantage of social networking sites to express their anger and disagreements. This essay attemps to shed light on this tendency before clarifying its updowns for those people.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

This argues that banning all animal testing is crucial. Even though this approach benefits scientific progress and can lead to valuable discoveries about specific creatures, I believe that the law should justify and grant animal rights.Animals deserve justice because they possess life and feelings. They are submissive and occupy the most disadvantaged position on our planet. That is why people have a mission to protect poor animals, which have the potential to suffer under animal testing. For example, in some immoral countries, they organized the animal control, then caught the stray cats, dogs, and raccoons to do experimentation and sell them to certain establishments. Such places force animals to contribute their blood, eyes, and every part of their bodies to the operation without providing any means for them to express their distress. To prevent that kind of tragic incident, people should take action for justice.To overcome it, scientists have to invent non-animal testing approac...

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The persistently increasing population has been regarded as the most important issue encountered by mankind in today’s world. While there are several causes for this growing number, it is in my view, one of the very significant concerns that needs to be addressed immediately. This essay will state the causes and come to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others beleve this may have negative effects on a child's development. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the technology era, many people believe that more t time spent on electronic devices can be more beneficial for children. While othes believe this could have bad effects on children's growth.I believe the negatives outweigh the positives of using technological devices for children.

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Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?

In the modern era, money is the most valuable resource. Many people think that money can be the reason for happiness and others think that it cannot be. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, some wild animals are extinct while others are close to the same end. There is a spefic reason which has been caused this situation, but there is also a solution. In this essay, I will explain both.

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