IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 336

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for their children. Others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Some people believe that day -care services preschoolers the best things with are crucial for their ages, while other believe that family members such as grandparents will be suitable . This essay will discuss both view and agree with the farmer points

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Most people believe money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced personal life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced personal life , I will discuss the reasons and I will give my opinion .

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Issues surrounding living far from family and friends are a frequent topic of discussion in contemporary society. It is increasingly common for individuals to opt for proximity to their workplace rather than their hometown. While this trend offers certain advantages, I contend that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits. This essay will critically examine both perspectives.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Famous people have been in our world since long time ago, however our point of view about them has changed. The point of this essay is discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of having a popular and known name, and what can be the consequences of this.

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- Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?

Shopping is inseparable part of every individual. In the modern era, technology paves its path and makes it more accessible for everyone. By increasing the popularity of an online version, it is believed that the traditional one of marketing is eradicated. This essay will express the reasons for this phenomenon and its effects .

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a fact that many countries invest in development of top athletes, however they don't invest enought with the same efforce and financial resources in general sports.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Firstly, any help to the others is a great step to improve the world and get a world more compensed. However, to be honest, getting this world with the same opportunities for all is like an utopy.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

There has been an ongoing debate , whether practical experience is more important than academic knowledge . In my opinion , I beileve that there is not a singal approach towards this subject,because it depends on several aspects . In this essay , I will further elaborate my views in order to reach a logical conclusion .

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Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are there more negative or positive sides to this trend?

These days, more and more teenagers diminish their spare time to assemble together with their families. This issue has several negative impacts on the family relationship which I discuss here.

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In many parts of the world children and teenager suspending more and more their time indoor. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measure could be based to taken to solve it?

These days, adolescents spend more time at home and carry out indoor activities. Two key stems for this tendency; two practical remedies could diminish this issue.

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In many countries, truancy* is a worrying issue for both parents and educators. •What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?

Truancy is a huge problem and threat for both parents and teachers. There could me many reasons why students like this action. However, they might do this because they don't like the lessons or teachers or have an exact and reasonable cause.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Our knowledge about medical science have come a long way, yet a lot of people die every year from diseases we have already conquired, just because they are from poor nations and they can not purchase expensive medications. From my point of view, the pharmaceutical industries have a lot of works to do to minimise this price tag, not only because of humanetarian consideration, but also for financial reason.

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In many countries, truancy* is a serious problem for both parents and teachers. •What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?

Nowadays, in several countries, skipping school is a concerning issue for teachers and parents. This essay will ,firstly ,discuss the main causes of truancy, and secondly, predict common outcomes of this offense. Despite that truancy as an act of violation has various reasons ,we will go through the most obvious ones .

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In many countries, truancy* is a serious problem for both parents and educators. •What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?

In multiple nations mothers , fathers and pedagogues issue is that kids pretend to go to school but in fact go somewhere else. The main problem this cause is child not interested in school, what’s more is that several negative effects can take place.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in some nations, there are increasing amount of students are participanting in work training rather than attend college. In my opinion, this tendency advantages outweight disadvantages since young indviduals have to take certain gaps year for learning practical skills.

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Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages businesses to move to the rural. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Businesses which are concentrated in one plece have been severely impact traffic and housing problem in the city. Every year, more and more people are coming to town to find jobs, and it becomes overcrowded. One of the solution from government is for business owner to considerate rural area as the location for their company. Even though this might sounds complicated to do, I think this solution has more positive impacts than the negative one.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreing country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreing language. Discuss both these viers and give your own opinion.

Learning a foreign language has become a crucial skill required in all fields. Then, many people argue that it should be considered a mandatory task in order to find better jobs and different opportunities worldwide. Nevertheles, although it has many upsides related to the professional development, many other attributes should be considered. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my reasons in detail.

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Some people think that one should retire at the age of 60 or 65. Others say that people should be allowed to work for as long as they want to. What is your opinion about this?

In the work environment, it has been a rule that people in old age should take their retirement and finally enjoy their time at home with their family. While some people think this rule should be erased and encourage working people to be allowed to work as long as they want to, I strongly agree that retirement is everyone's right. Let me share some of my perspectives.

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It is important for people to tale risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks overweigh the disadvantages?

Some claim that taking risks should be essential part of people's both professional and personal lives. Despite certain drawbacks, I am more of the opinion that advantages surpass its disadvantages.

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In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study academic or vocational. what are the advantages of students and society of putting students into two streams at the age of 15?

Nowadays,It is becoming more and more popular for educational systems to put students to study either theoretical or occupational courses in high school.As matter of fact,in most countries the students might have a choise to select studying intellectual or professional lessons in secondary school.It is obvious that there are a lot of advantages for both sides pupils and community about studying this two various course in high school.In this essay,I will address some benefits of this educational way and also I will draw my conclusion.

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