IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 495

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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in some countries,more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exersice classses what are the reasons for this? is this a positive or negative development?

Thanks to some cultural and personal reasons, many people have been practicing sports in their own homes with their own professional trainers. There might be a variety of reasons for it. It seems to me that there could be both positive and negative sides to it.

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Some people feel that music should be taught in school while others believe it is better to focus on the sciences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no different type of objective fact that this statement about some people agree that music should be taught in school is prevalent in our reality because of its importance. Most people agree with this statement because of its many benefits. Some of the people highlight its disadvantages. I would like to discuss the advantages and the disadvantages in my next paragraphs the same.

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Are higher taxes or lower taxes better for society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no different type of objective fact that this statement about higher taxes or lower taxes better for society is prevalent in our reality because of its importance. Most people agree with this statement because of its many benefits. Some of the people highlight its disadvantages. I would like to discuss the advantages and the disadvantages in my next paragraphs the same.

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Studying the English language in an English speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Many people argue that learning English in an English speaking country is the most effective way to mastering the language, although it is not the only method. I am completely agree on this thesis and I will elaborate my perspective in this essay.

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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

English has become the dominant language for many education programs. And in many other countries, where English use as a second language, proficiency in English is often a prerequisite for many job opportunities. Therefore, many people try to move to English-speaking counties to improve language skills.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the past few years,the proportion of people using social media has become very commonplace.In the past,it was impossible to navigate the route in the artificial reality,and see friends in the different places,these inventions made a huge contribution to the community.In my opinion, it also has some drawbacks as I will discuss both sides in the following essay.

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STUDIES SHOW THAT CRIME RATE ARE LOWER AMONG THOSE WITH EDUCATION DEGREES. THEREFORE, THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE THE CRIME RATE IS TO EDUCATE CRIMINALS WHILE THEY ARE STILL IN PRISON. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Scientific observations in many countries conclude that the rate of criminal is lower among people with higher educational degree. Moreover, there is a suitable option to tackle this problem through giving prisoners some learning to educate them while they are in jail. This essay agree about that statement following with some highlighted key points.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, education has become more important than vocational training in some countries.Overall, some families tend to teach their children to the last stage of education and prefer that for them instead of vocational training,therefore. I personally believe that there should be a balance between the two things, therefore, this essay will be explained further in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Life expectancy has increased significantly in many nations around the globe, making many people believe that this trend poses a threat to governments while national prosperity will be sparked by the graying population in the view of some. Despite bringing advantages in some aspects, the disadvantages are more significant. ( 2 sentences )

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Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

Recently, people started to learn some foreign languages such as English to travel around the world or to work in foreign companies. However, some people argued that there are more reasons that we should learn some foreign languages, therefore; these arguments will be helpful for someone who is studying other languages for the future.

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Some people believe that technology has made maan more sociable. To what extent do you agree ar diagree.

It is true that technology has flourished by leaps and bounds around the world, as a result, it assists to human become more sociable and enhance their's social connections through technology devices. I strongly agree with this statement because it is easy to access as well as it avoids geographical barriers. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed by some that buying a few expensive clothes are more appropriate than buying less expensive clothes. In my view, I completely disagree with this statement as cheaper clothes have the ability to make someone look fashionable as well as giving them the option of buying more outfits for better value of money.

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Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than working together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It cannot be denied that in schools and colleages teachers teach individuals to motivate their selves for the hard work to make their personalities exceptional as compared to the others, However team work is less perferable instead of pervious assumption. This phenomenon has its pros and cons, as far as I am concerned, I believe that benefits are overwiegh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that humans can use animals for their benefits. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

An ongoing debate regarding utilizing animals for the benefit of mankind is heating. Some believe that such practice is inhumane while others thought that it is beneficial to optimize them. While both arguments have some merits to it, I strongly believe that it is perfectly fine to engage in that particular activity.

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that women make up over half of the workforce in many developed countries, and men hold most senior roles within companies. Therefore, some people argue that female candidates should be expanded. I do believe that encouraging more women in top jobs can help companies do better, however it might not be fair for everyone who deserves the job.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some regions, the seniors are of the great appreciation, whereas in others, the younger are considered more valuable. In my individual, although the process of a nation rely on young contributions, elderly should be appreciated for their dedication in the past and the valuable experience will provide for next generation.

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Ordinary people copy famous people whom they see on TV and magazines. Do you think it is a positive development?

Individuals tend to act, look and live like people they see on media and I believe this is a negative situation because it influences us to look like them and it creates a financial state that most of us cannot reach and feel bad about it.

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Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are most successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Society's perception of achievement varies from person to person. While some find human who have a lot of cash achievement, everybody else find human who contribute to society achievement. This essay will examine both these things also then i will give my own idea.

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People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries. This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are using the internet to explore and learn more about other country’s cultures and heritages. This means that they don’t need to travel around the world to get knowledge and I totally agree that this option is crucial for some particular reasons, such as saving the public money and time. This essay will explain in detail about those ways.

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Some people believe that money spent on space exploration is not justifiable. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some countries spend enormous amounts of money on exploring of space, while some people feel that investments will be useless and have other ways to spend the money for advantages than this way. In my opinion, I believe that the data for exploration leads to developing and advanced knowledge to use in the future.

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