IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 490

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but they should be concerned about the quality at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern age, people dress according to their own style. While this has become an issue in the world of professionalism, many believe that the point of focus should be the quality of their work. Therefore I agree with the latter part, instead of pushing a ridiculous agenda, companies should count on people who have a great educational background and discipline work ethic.

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Many student choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are a number of young people who decided to take a gap year before entering college, whether to have an adventure in another country or simply just to gain other experience, such as applying for new jobs. While some believe that there might be a risk of wasting time, many people think that it is far more advantageous. In my opinion, taking a step back before starting a new life in university can be beneficial while due with big responsibility.

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The most important thing of science is to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Science, and many things that led to more important inventions have already helped our mankind in countless ways. While many people believe that the most crucial purpose of it is to improve our lives, there are some who agree that those statements are not the main point of science itself. In my opinion, I stand with the latter part, as I genuinely think that it is not the most important thing of the issue.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

In this modern age, there are countless possible ways for someone to land a job. While many people decided to work independently, some thought that the only path towards success is to be employed in a company or organisation. Amidst the on-going recurrence, this essay will discuss the causes of it, and the downsides that might be experienced by the subject of this issue.

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The government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The growth of the counrty is accompanied by the actions taken by the government. The country's economy solely depends on the investments made by the government professionals. Although investing in arts, music and theatre will maintain the culture and tradition of the country, it is important that the public gains services which would add more value to the country's exponential growth. In this essay, I will point out few reasons to point out my agreement towards the funds of the government from which the public could benefit.

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Some people say that social media is a digital drug that has left many people addicted enhanced their lots of valuable time while others say social media has Enable Connectivity with the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion on the topic.

Social media has been bringing numerous benefits to individual's life in recent years. While some people believe that this novelty leads to waste of time for individuals, others advocate people may connect easily via social media. This essay will explain the both sides, and support idea of connection amongst people may support by social media.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children’s time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by many individuals that all educational institutions should consider making extra-curricular activities as vital part of their syllabus while other suggests that the time spent on theoretical subjects is more favorable to kids. In my opinion, sports activities are as important as the academic subjects so they should be given an equal preference.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages fir young people who decide to do this.

Youngsters are provoke to do some job to get experience but some people believe that they should travel and enjoy their spare time before further studies. I will describe some pros as well as challenges face by young adults.

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Nowadays, we are surround by advertising in our daily lives. Some people believe this has a positive effect on society. Others, however, say that it is a negative development. Discuss with both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that advertisements are everywhere. A faction of people hold the notion that it is a positive development, others believe that it is a negative development. This essay would delve in to both view points and explain my support to the latter view.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Humans live in the contemporary era, where It is no longer a trend for both students and workers to run their activities in a traditional way. As technology is more advanced, it is accessible and efficient for the majority of people to use it in the daily basis. This phenomenon is undeniably a positive growth for the society and this essay will extend the adavatanges of it as well give some related illustrations.

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A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?

A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and cinema influences the young generation and therefore makes the violence number rise significantly. Even though I believe that portraying violenceviolance on TV has a detrimental effect on society I totally disagree that it can cause such an increasing number of criminality in society.

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3.Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before being allowed on public roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It has been proposed by experts that passing a test for those who ride a bike should be compulsory in order to be allowed to cycle in on public roads. I totally agree with the idea of enforcing a regulation regarding the success of cyclists’ examination cyclists’ examination success.

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people say that crime reports on TV and newspaper have many disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, felony reports are one of the most delectable sources of entertainment. Gruesome details of many prosecuted cases are shown freely on popular newspapers, and open television channels without any prior warning. Moreover, due to technology moving very ahead of time, even children as small as a 12-year-old could have access to these portfolios. However, not all of this leads to a bad ending for an individual, therefore ahead I will be discussing my views on this.

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Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks can lead to fundamental variations in both professional and personal aspects of life. As we know, there are vivid advantages to taking risks, like achieving new opportunities and improving life levels, otherwise, there are irrefutable negative aspects, including isolation from society and financial bankruptcy.in total I think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages.

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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern world,smoking is prohibited in some places.Many folks argue that the usage of smartphones is as antisocial as smoking.So,they urge the government to treat the usage of mobile phones in the same way as smoking.I completely agree with this notion and this essay will try to explore the merits of banning mobile phones in certain places.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

In today digital's age. the influence of social networking to private relationships and public is a recurring argument. This writer argues that the benefits of making new friends around the world and updating many news outweigh the drawbacks of potential social media distraction.

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Companies now prefer to hire people with good social skills as well as good academic qualifications. Do you think that social skills are now getting more important than educational qualifications?

Finding the best qualifications for companies to hire their employees has grown to be a pressing matter lately, and some companies contend that hiring people with excellent social skills and good academic aspects is a priority. Responding to the issue, I tend to believe that social skills play a more essential role than academic ones because social skills such as adaptability and resilience skills may have profound impact on employees’ productivity.

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the process of Pu-erh Raw tea and Ripe tea. make a summary regarding the given diagram

The given flow chart illustrates the steps of making Pu-erh Raw Tea and Ripe Tea. Overall, it is readily apparent that the processes of making Ripe Tea and Raw Tea are the same in the first three steps, but from that point onwards, there are few differences that are apparent in both processes.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course in university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Nowadays the employment market is full of vacancies, where an educational degree can be either required or not even mentioned. It leads me to believe that employers are more oriented on personality traits and work experience.

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Some people believe that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Being able to speak multiple languages is very common these days. In some countries, it is even a necessity to be able to speak more than one language. Learning a foreign language is highly encouraged, even more so from a young age. Whether to start learning a foreign language at primary school or secondary school, has both advantages and disadvantages. Although learning a foreign language at primary school has its disadvantages, it is my belief that those disadvantages do not outweigh the advantages.

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