IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 494

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people spend a lot of money attenting cultural or sports events. Is it a good or a bad thing? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

Cultural and sport events are so significant for almost all individuals. Therefore, a lot of citizens spend much money attending these events. In my opinion, this situation has a lot of benefits for people. This essay will explain those below.

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Wild animals hace no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

It is true that wild animals play a crucial role in this planet. Some say that protecting wild species is a wste of money and resources in these days.Instrongly disagree with this statement because wild species help to function ecosystem and protect the natural resources. This easy discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to the younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many think secondary school students should give back to the public by rendering mandatory services. I disagree with that because, even though, partaking in these tasks is good. It can however, be exhausting, time consuming and also have a negative impact on their academic performance .

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In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discu

There is an ongoing debate regarding high salaries earned by a small number of individuals in some couu. A group of individuals have argued that , this will help a nation to grow more so , it is in benefit for a country. However, other are counter claimed that , the authorities should manage wages and also place a limit on the sum of money people can be paid. Both the viewpoint are discussed further in the upcoming paragraphs with my opinion in conclusion.

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some people believe that in a city, the best way to travel is by car, while others argue that bicycles are a better way of travelling in a city. discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people emphasize that the best way to travel around a city is to drive a car due to their convenience and promptness, others believe that bicycles are better means of transportation to take adventure. Although these two statements seem to be reasonable, I would argue the latter group of people as riding a bicycle is more beneficial for physical and mental health.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some would argue that children should appreciate for their competitive skills, while others deem that they should have to teach the benefits of teamwork instead of being competitive. While the feeling of competition always triggers them to be successful in their task, I believe that cooperation teaches them how to assist others.

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In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private cars owners heavily and use the money to improve public transport. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

The topic of whether the government should tax private van in order to develop public shipment is often debated. The writer believes that heavy taxes will prevent folk from buying their own car as well as improving harbor from taking that tax.

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Some people say that what children watch on television influences their behavior, while others say the amount of time children spend watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that children’s behaviours are impacted by either the content or intensity from television programmes. In my opinion, the content has a more significant impact on their acts because it can be adopted directly by them.

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In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss both views

In different parts of the world, there is a trend when a mature person continuously lives with parents even after graduation and finding a job. In my opinion, the pros of this outweigh the cons. In this essay, I plan to explore a few aspects to substantiate my point.

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23.Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write an essay with no less than 250 words.

Eduction is an essencial element for any society to florish and grow in today's world. Today's eduction system is contributing to nation by producting good worker as well as responsible citizens. I agree with the notation that these values are higher than indivual benefits. I will eloborate the same in coming paragraphs.

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In school or universities, girls prefer subjects related to art and boys prefer subjects related science. Should this tendency be changed? What is your opinion?

The importance of art and science has always debatable but now has become controversial. There are so many pupils believe that females should take art subjects and boys should prefer the science stream in school or universities. According to my opinion, this tendency should be changed. Every candidate has the right to choose his her profession whether it is an craft course or science.

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Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less control will help children deal with their adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many schools of thought have been advocating for more elders to loosen their authority on their children. However, others pose that offsprings should be taught in being polite and obedient to their parent's and teacher's set of rules. In this essay I will dwell upon both of these opinions, and then elaborate on why I think the latter option is more suitable for the construction of a better society.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. So, sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the prices of high-calorie foods should be beyond the limit of consumers' purchase limit. I completely agree with this opinion because lower consumption of such meals helps to lead a healthy life and reduce financial losses.

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Some people believe that when people become old and need help financially, physically and mentally, young members of the family should be responsible to take care of them. Do you agree of disagree with the statement?

Allegedly, old people assistance is given a significant attention. Some individuals believe not only can their children support their old parents in their financial problems, but they can also aid them in physical and mental disorders, so their families play a considerable role in this respect. I totally agree their children have a highest responsibility in old people's lives, but sometimes they need additional assistance from governments.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves?

It is assumed that affluent people are obligated to share their wealth with the impoverished, while others consider that the government is the one that should care about their residents. Further to this, the mandatory support from rich dwellers could motivate poorer individuals and innovate tailored solutions, when the government can implement large-scale programs and structural changes.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very importatnt for people. Why misht this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, people in some countries prefer to have their own home instead of renting one. This could be due to a lot of reasons since in those countries, owning a property is a great way to invest your money followed by other causes such as inflation which effects the rent fees. This essay agrees with those who make this statement and will discuss more about it.

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Somepeople say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?Give reasons for your answer and incl

Tourism is one of the major sector which contributing towards the respective country's GDP, especially in the today's technology focused modernized world. However, there is a significant drawback on the countries where people use to travel, in terms of influencing their traditions, culture and environment. This essay will delve into the root causes of negative effects on the countries and propose viable solutions to address these pressing issues.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is possible to note that there is a movement among young people in choosing the short path to their professional development. In other words, they are enrolling in work-based training instead of going to the university. This essay believes that the drawbacks of this choice outweigh the advantages in personal and global aspects as well.

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Learning at university would be more effective if men and women were educated separetely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that higher education institutions should separate their students by gender, in order to enhance their learning process. I strongly disagree with such measure, since it could widen the gender gap in education. In addition, I believe that every student should be taught equally, regardless of their gender.

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Hình minh họa cho thấy sô cô la được sản xuất như thế nào.

Nội dung trong đồ họa thông tin là thông tin liên quan đến phương pháp sản xuất sô cô la từ ca cao. Nói chung, đây là một quá trình khá phức tạp, bắt đầu từ việc chuẩn bị hạt ca cao và cuối cùng là sô cô la lỏng, sẵn sàng để phân phối. Giai đoạn đầu tập trung vào việc chuẩn bị hạt ca cao để sản xuất sô cô la. Quy trình bắt đầu với cây ca cao ở Nam Mỹ, Châu Phi và Indonesia, nơi có môi trường thích hợp nhất để phát triển. Sau khi vỏ quả đỏ chín, chúng được thu hoạch và tách riêng từ hạt cacao trắng. Công đoạn tiếp theo là hạt cacao trắng được lên men và rải ở nơi khác để phơi khô dưới ánh nắng mặt trời. Bước này hoàn thành khi hạt chuyển sang màu nâu, sau đó chúng được phân thành bao tải lớn và vận chuyển bằng tàu hỏa hoặc xe tải. Chuẩn bị sô cô la lỏng để tiêu thụ là trọng tâm của bước sau trong trình tự. Sau khi hạt ca cao đến nhà máy, nó được đặt trên khay và rang bằng lửa. Bước tiếp theo là hạt cacao rang được thả vào máy nghiền để loại bỏ vỏ cũng như làm cho hạt cacao có kích th...

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