IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 507

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. in what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The fourth industrial revolution has created the world with many sophisticated communication technologies; hence, people nowadays can communicate instantly even in a long distance which affect on the ease to make a friend. Although I acknowledge that the aformentioned phenomenon has some shortcoming(s), I firmly believe that it offers more positive impact(s) to(on) human development.

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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered area of the world should be opened up to access more resourced. To what extent do you agree?

The world indeed is constantly experiencing an enormous demand in oil and gas. Since these two natural resources cannot be maintained for a long time or forever, people on earth should discover a sustainable solution. One solution that is mostly being talked about is discovering new areas of the world that can be opened up to access and dig up more resources.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Issues related to education development are frequently discussed these days. Although some believes that the authority to design course syllabus should belong to students, while others criticize this and argue that universities should play crucial roles in providing the practical subjects, such as those related to present day society. In the following paragraphs, both sides of this statement will be discussed and will bring further examples and explanations to support my viewpoint.

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Some people argue that only talented children can become successful musicians or athletes in the future. Others believe that children can be taught to succeed in music or sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often thought that only talented children can become successful musicians or athletes. However, some people believe that they can be taught to succeed in music or sports. In this case, i prefer to agree on the second statement, saying that children can be taught to succeed in nonacademic things. This essay will discuss the debatable statements of the issue given.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closure of shops in cities and towns Do you agree or disagree

High school students who are graduated recommended to take a gap year before officially starting university studies. There are different pros and cons to this approach, I will discuss in this essay.

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Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the music is able to enable ameliorate emotions and affect on mood. In this essay, I will have a contention about the agreement in effectiveness of music on the reduction of stress.

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Teamwork offers a lot of benefits in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary society unity of people provides plenty of advantages. The benefits are like meeting new people, advance your personal skills and eventually enhance as a team. In this essay I will demonstrate positive impact of teamwork to modern society.

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Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries ?

The debate surrounding about the rising number of young population could potentially lead to various effects especially for the long term risk. On one hand, younger people is perceived as a challange to create social unrest. This essay posits that the benefits brought by an younger populace significantly outweigh the drawbacks, could lead to a vibrant and innovative society.

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Some people say that studying at school is not important because most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree?

As learning can be done everywhere, some individuals argue that classroom learning is not important because people can autonomously learn things outside the school. I firmly disagree with this stance and think that going to school is of the utmost essence for every person.

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As a result of electronic invention such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent so you agree or disagree?

It is often seen that many people are beginning to do their activities from home as the impacts of technology become cheaper and more accessible. Personally, I agree that this gives a negative impact which includes the interpersonal relationship both for adults and children and also gives bad impacts to their health. I will explain my reasons in this essay.

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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today's fast-paced and modern world, there is a growing concern that the true meaning behind traditional or religious festivals is being overlooked. It is often argued that during festival periods, people nowadays are solely focused on enjoying themselves rather than understanding and appreciating the deeper significance behind these festivities. While it is true that the nature of celebrations has changed over time, I partially disagree with this viewpoint.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with health issue involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, worldwide health departments have been focusing on the increasing number of obese people. Although the majority of individuals believe that an ideal solution to overcome this situation is by implementing more physical training in school, I would argue that this is not the only way.

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Some peple think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and guve your own opinions.

Few individuals have a perspective that living in urban areas are benificial, however other suggest to spend their life in rural areas. Life in cities is quite different, busy and artificial, while life in countryside is pure and traditional. But they both have their own benefits as well as negative impacts. In my perspective, spending your life in towns develop your personality and also keeps you update, also its provide many job opportunities and cultural experiences.

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Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded?

Raising a child to be a good citizen is a big responsibility. Some people believe that physically enforcing kids will help them to become a better person in the future rather than nurturing them in a positive way. I strongly advocate in growing little hands with full of love, respect, support, and compassion as punishing them at such a young age will impact their brain very badly. Therefore, positive environment is a fundamental right for every little kid rather than threatening surroundings.

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The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.

In this modern era, there are many social spaces between the wealthy and the poor people in our society. This essay will discuss about the causes and solution of this situation.

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Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person's knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student's own country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studying abroad and opting for domestic education both offer distinctive advantages, igniting debates regarding their merits among a large number of people. While some support the idea of studying in one’s home country for career prospects, other argue for a foreign degree and a better understanding of the world. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives. Although I generally agree that studying abroad is often considered to be a great way to broaden the horizons of students from all over the world, I don’t feel like it should be a must for all students.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few humans are in the favour of expending their lives performing the exact activities and ignore to do different activities. However, the others think that change in life aways comes with benefical improvements. In my perspective, a person will get bored with doing the same activity and can be stuck in his life by avoiding change. Everyone should know that how changes brings positive impact and happiness in our lives.

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Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's lives. Some people say that advertising is positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views include your opinion.

It is considered by some that broadcasting has become a downside parts of their lives, while there are others who think that it is an upside section of their lives. A lot can be inferred from the way of their thinking. This interpretation might give us about their personalities. Although I agree that it is important to display products or services, I cannot ignore the negative sides.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction.What measures could be taken to prevent this.

It is important to consider that a great number of advanced countries are facing with poor quality of air and water which arise from industry and building sector. This essay will explane some steps that could be taken to avoid such problem.

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For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

For millions of children, school become the first step of their education. Some people might think that nowadays teachers have a bigger influence on students' intelligence and social skills than their parents. I'm totally disagree with this extent and going to explain why in this essay.

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