IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 511

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this view?

In this era, extreme sports are more popular than past, therefore many claim that some of them like skiing and sky diving are dangerous and they should be banned by government. From my point of view, although this sport might be dangerous or lead to death of athletes, they should not be banned because they have some positive effects on mental and physical health.

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many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course in university education. Other claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experiences in the world of work. How do you agree or disagree with the above views?

whether the only pathway to guarantee the student's work future is to continue and complete a course in university or work after school in order to obtain experience is a controversial issue. I opine that, although experiences play a pivotal role in finding a good job and saving time and money, without knowledge about them you will choose the wrong pathway and you can not guarantee your job’s future.

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The growth of the online shopping one day closure to shopping stores in cities. Do you agree or disagree with this.

Nowadays, online shopping is increasing rapidly, and that is leading to a decrease in sales of offline shopping stores. I totally agree with the fact that fewer consumers coming to the stores will lead to the closing of many shopping complexes.

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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

Although, certain segments of society think that reading news from papers is more convenient for us. However, I agree with people who prefer media because accessing the news through media is easier and not dependent on most conditions.

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Many cities are loosing natural environment due to the effect of over-population and ubranisation. In this essay will delve in to the benefits for protecting these places and put forward some practical solutions to tackle this issue

Many cities are loosing natural environment due to the effect of over-population and ubranisation. In this essay will delve in to the benefits for protecting these places and put forward some practical solutions to tackle this issue

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What measures do you think might be effective?

Economy is growing fast and we need to be fast too. A lot of people uses cars for transportation. This results in traffic and pollution problems. While our government is finding ways to solve the traffic by building more roads, bridges, tunnels, etc., and the pollution by involving us in recycling and planting trees - these solutions are for long term. A suggestion to increase the price of petrol was provided and I would like to disagree.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

A significant number of people do not like their jobs, and worse, they do not have any expertise in them. This is due to the fact that most of them have not discovered their passions, and while they are applying to some jobs they do not like, they will have bad performance outcomes.

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Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion asserting that increasing the price of fuels is helpful for air pollution, and accordingly the environmental issues are solved. Although I agree that it is important to use fewer private vehicles, I do not think that it is ample reason for addressing so-called problems.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The quality well-being of the citizen has been a contentious topic for a long time. It is thought by some people that raising the amount of activities, such as sports, would enhance the health conditions of people and recognised as an optimal way to foster healthy habits. On the contrary, opponents of this view point argue that a more comprehensive way must be introduced to cultivate healthy society and creating more sports facilities are not sufficient. Both parties represent merits , however, raising awareness, educating people along with fostering more sports related opportunities is a proper way to increase healthy habits among people which in turn ensures quality public health.

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please describe the process of brick manufacturing?

The given chart illustrates the stages of manufacture of bricks.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology that can prevent and solve crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Crimes have always been an impediment to the development of society. Over the ages, as the range of violations has increased, the investigators have refined the ways to solve the transgressions. As a result, it is true that the crime rate is decreasing due to progress in technology that is used to resolve criminal activities.

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Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness. Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views.

It is often thought that some people believe that money is a very important factor in achieving happiness. However, some say that such a mindset is not related to people’s emotions. In my opinion, I believe that wealth does affect our emotional state. This essay will list the debatable statements of both sides.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

Nowadays, there is an increase in the number of youngsters involved in social problems. Does this issue causes by a lack of attention from parents? While some people believe that it does not affects their children’s morale, in my opinion family situation plays a pivotal role and should be taken into account.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Generally, people consider media, pop culture, and friends to be fundamental aspects of children's development. On the other hand, some people claim, the biggest significant development of a child comes from their family itself. In my opinion, a combination of the two has many effects on children.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Certain undergraduate students attempt to gain diverse knowledge on multiple streams while the rest believe specialization in one aspect makes them more qualified. In my opinion, studying hard in one field can lead to job insecurity, and working more than one stream would produce more work opportunities and create more entrepreneurship. Therefore, in my conviction, quallifcating different subjects would make a better future for students.

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Some people think that parents should limit their children’s time to watch TV and play computer games and encourage them to read books. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals argue that parents should set a schedule in order to limit children's screen time, such as watching TV and playing computer games. Therefore, the youths are encouraged to read books instead. I firmly agree with this stance and think that this is a pivotal action which should be taken by every parent.

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Many people nowadays decide not to work for a large company but to become self-employed. What problems might this decision cause? What can they do to solve these problems?

Recently, there are many individuals that make a decision to become an owner of their own company or they work for themself instead of working in a large company. This essay will express what is the root of this circumstance and how the big company should address this issue.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In line with the shift in time and growth of the trip facilities, international traveling has become more convenient than before resulting in the attraction of a significant number of tourists to various countries. This trend causes exceedingly controversy among individuals as there is a widely held belief that visitors are obliged to obey local customs while others reject this belief and suppose that the host country should accept its guest the way they are. I want to be on the side of those thinking that destination countries must welcome cultural differences.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. others believe children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a widely held view among some parents that upbringing kids with a sense of competition resulting in their progress in the future. Despite the fact that latest surveys indicate that if youngsters follow cooperation instead of competition, they will be more effective adults. In my point of view, internalization of collaborative habits can have a significant beneficial consequences in all aspects of their lives.

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there is an increasing trend around the world of marriage couples deciding not to have childern.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Marriage is a process of joining a male and female through a sex relationship and bringing children for the next generations. Nowadays, we can see that many couples do not want children for many reasons. In this essay, we discuss about the pros and cons of this statement.

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