IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 506

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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A magazine asked its readers to send in stories about a time they had a problem when travelling. Write about a journey where you had a problem to send to the magazine

During the term break, when I was studying Bachelor Degree in University, my friends from the faculty of Architecture and I decided to go to Phu Kradueng for the first time. It was the sudden decision to participate the group since I heard that it is the place where I would go once in a lifetime. Phu Kradueng is very welknown by the stunning sceneries amongst the teenagers and university students.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your experience.

There is a view that children's extracurricular activities should be done for educational purposes, while others opinion's is not. I totally disagree with the statement. In my opinion, children have right to enjoy various activities, not just educational events. This essay will discuss why I oppose to the statement.

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“The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is no denying the fact that learning new languages is crucial these days. While It is a commonly held a belief that studying with English teachers is the best way to learn the language, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that there are a lot of other effective ways to learn English.

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question about increase in fatality rate despite advanced in medicine

There has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals questioning the high fatality rate despite the current developed healthcare system. One of the main reasons for this worrying trend is due to the fact that not enough funds are allocated to the research to develope better vaccines. However, there are solution readily available to tackle this issue such as the government planning educational workshops and supporting the scientific research.

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Nowadays many people have easy acess to computers and a large number of children play computer games. what are the negative impacts of playing computer games? what can be done to minimize the bad effect?

There has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals questioning the bad consequences of playing video games for children. One of the main dangers of this worrying trend is linked to the deterioration of academic performance at the schools. However, there are solutions readily available to tackle this issue such as parents monitoring their kids playing duration regularly.

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“Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree?”

It is argued that spending money on technologies supplied by public libraries loses the little money support that they receive as a local place. Instead of this, they can invest in more physical library supplies. This essay disagrees with this statement because I believe the library is a big support for different students and a lot of them need to use different tools to learn. Besides needing to be at the forefront of new software - tech.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.

Nowadays, internet has been globally used by a lot of people for daily life. I believe the widespread use of the internet is impacting people in a positive way for at least two reasons. Firstly, it gave us access to a lot of informations, and secondly, it allow us to communicate easily with our loved ones.

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Some people think the latest technology for home entertainment such as sophisticated TVs, high-speed internet connections and tablets are having a negative impact on people’s lives, especially young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argued that the technology products at home for entertainment purposes have a significant drawback for teenagers. I partly agree that the negative impact of technology or electronic products on teenagers would be a good idea or aspect.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Innovation in technology enables people to get the information through e-book, online book, without buying printed newspapers or books. Unfortunately, there are still some reasons that people in the future will still need hard file to get knowledge or news, such as isolated location and health condition. This essay will explain why printed newspapers and book are still needed in reading.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss bothe these views and give your opinion.

In recent times, a plethora of information is available in many realms such as research, coorporations, and education. Under the circumstance, there is ongoing contention whether all of the information stored or discovered in the fields should be shared with the public as freely as possible. This essay will argue both prons and cons regarding the issue before coming to a conclusion that there should be a certain level of limit on sharing information.

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Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Many people that most parents want to study their children at the extra classes after studying at the school. In my point of view, I totally disagree with that statement. I will point out why I disagree in this essay.

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Advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Many children are exposed to a large number of advertisements today and persuaded to buy things like snacks, toys to name but a few. For their safety, it is necessary to impose restrictions or even a ban on advertising aimed at school-age children.

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Some people say that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, say that life for the elderly nowadays is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different views about the life of older generations in this capital worlds. Even though elderly can be conventional enough to make them up with the recent development, I completely agree several technologies have been assist them to improve their productivity.

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Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many city planners believe that trees are essential for modern city development prioritizing them over residential buildings. I agree with this view despite recognizing the benefits of increased housing in cities.

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overpopulation in many major urban centers around teh world is a major problem. what are teh causes of this? how can this problem be solved?

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of people concentrated in the major cities globally. One of the main reasons for this worrying trend is due to the fact that employment opportunities are commonly available within the big cities. However, there are readily available solutions to tackle this issue such as the government setting plans to encourage individuals to move to suburban areas.

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14.With computers and the Internet, people can study and work without going to school or a company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays some folk think that Internet is a great way to study and job from home or, work on a desktop rather than going out to study and task. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages related to this subject and try to draw a conclusion as well.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?

There are too many countries in our world dependent on the tourism sector for a wealthy economy. Sadly, tourism can also be an issue if not controlled as well.While this approach offers certain advantages, it is essential to consider the accompanying disadvantages as well.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that all students in university should pursue subjects aligned with their personal interests. Meanwhile, others think focusing on science and technology related curriculums will have advantages on their future career. The latter perspective is useful in some cases, but I believe that studying subjects of personal interests is more beneficial to them.

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With the development of online media, this is no future for the radio. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, the internet widely spreads all over the world. While some people say that there is no room for traditional radio because of online media, I partially agree that online media development is only a new trend for the future.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is a huge gap between the highest and lowest wages of an employee in many parts of the world. Despite some agreements with this inequality, many including me, believe this might lead to many unpleasant consequences which affect the workforce in a negative way. In this essay, I will discuss both ideas and express my agreement with the latter one.

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