IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 548

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, in many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, which means that humans prioritize their personal goals and desires over collective interests, and this has both positive and negative development.

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In Some Countries An Increasing Number Of People Are Suffering From Health Problems As A Result Of Eating Too Much Fast Food

People are from some countries experiencing severe health issues due to the large amount of fast food consumption. This essay will discuss this statement in terms of why people consume too much fast food and what are the health problems they are facing.

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both views: family influences the children’ development Discuss both views: some people believe family influences the children’ development; however, some argue that other influences (movie, music, friends…) more affect children.

A number of individuals think that the biggest contributor to children's development is their family. However, there are still some who believe that other influences such as movies, music, and friends more affect children. From my point of view, other influences besides the family have a great impact on children's growth process, and in this essay, I will discuss both perspectives.

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more and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using techology for communication

Nowadays, communication is going through a new approach where technology is the core of it. Many people started to use means of technology to socialize and build their business, and they prefer such a method over the direct way of communicating. Because of this occurrence, multiple advantages and disadvantages arise in society and, thus, they will be discussed thoroughly in this essay.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

One of the widely discussed issues is that some people believe that universities should graduate students with all the knowledge they need for the future workplace, however, there is an alternative opinion of those who instead have a notion that knowledge should be taught for its own sake. This is undoubtedly that a university degree is an essential part of people's lives, nevertheless, everyone wants to contribute their labour properly to have truly meaningful outcome in their life, not just a diploma that they can show to their future boss, who will presumably choose someone with a background of experience in a real workforce, rather than a student.

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City living 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that nowadays people who live in big cities experience a lot of stress and do not have any benefits. I completely disagree with this statement, and believe that life in the big city provides them with many opportunities.

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In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problem might this cause in society?

In recent years, the young are likely to show more disrespect towards the older generation. There are various reasons for children’s misbehaviors, and those might spark some issues in our community.

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The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger drivers and to lower the age limit for aged drivers. Do you agree ?

To reduce the number of traffic accidents happened, it is better to raise the minimum age for young drivers and lower the maximum age for old drivers. I totally agree with this statement as for adolescents to drive can be dangerous due to their reckless behaviours and for seniors due to their ability to drive have dropped.

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Ambition is being emphasized in today’s society. How important do you think it is for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

In the realm of accomplishment, today's society values an ambition as a must-have mentality to succeed in life pursuit. In my viewpoint, to some extent, ambition plays both crucial and significant roles as a strong drive for someone to pursue almost anything that they want in life.

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In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods.This is having a negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

No one can deny that international fast foods are constantly on the rise in many countries. Even locals population are enjoying international foods more than traditional foods. In this paragraph , I totally agree that this will lead to negative effects on both families and societies in health implications, as well as on environmental concerns.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that it will be the responsibility of the young to be punished at the mature people’s level if they commit some felony, such as robbery or violent acts. I would contend that I partially have a consensus with this conception.

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Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

Expression of oneself through art such as music, dance etc. is considered an essential part of being a well-rounded individual. Although it is important that art should be incorporated as a part of the school curriculum for children, it should not replace other subjects being taught in schools. This essay partially agrees that art should be taught to school children and would discuss reasons it should not supercede the tutoring of other equally important areas of study.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two given maps illustrate the Grange Park in its past form in 1920 and its current expansion.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, it is commonly thought that it is essential to enhance people's life with help of science. I completely agree that science can bring a lot off advantanges such as tackling environmental issues as well as to improve human's welfare.

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In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

A mother's role and a father's role in how to treat its family could be difference in some parts of the world. Cultures of a country where the couple live in, among other aspects, is the main reason of why this circumstance rose. However, as the time goes by, I think this situation might be changed since there are a lof of contradictive stories as references for the couple.

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NOWADAYS, PARENTS ARE ALLOWING THEIR CHILDREN TO USE TABLES AND SMARTPHONES TO ENHANCE LEARNING. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS DEVELOPMENT OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

Almost every parent, nowadays, not just allows children to use tablets and smartphones as a mean of learning, but also encourage them by giving these devices as gifts, like on their birthdays or on the Christmas. Using electronic machines has many advantages, as well as some harmful consequences.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe having a high income is crucial when selecting a job, while others consider having a good working environment is more important. This essay will discuss both views and writer’s opinion.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Since the technology has improved and mobile phones have become more popular among people, payment methods will be changed from using cash to electronical money transformation by means of cards or smartphones. This trend has proved to bring more convenience to people's life and be beneficial to the environment as well, so it can be predicted that paper money will be disappeared in the future. However, lack of knowledge and literacy with regard to electronic devices may have caused some inconvenience for older generations that they still prefer to use cash.

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in many developing countries ,there is a problem with decline quality of air and water from both industry and construction .what measures could be taken to prevent this ?

Human needs and wants lead to new advancements in technology. The developments in industries and constructions cause detrimental effects to the quality of air and water in many developing nations. To avoid such adversities, it is crucial for both the society and the government of the nations to take immediate measures and this essay will explain the solution.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.

Raising fuel prices is the best way to address the environmental issues facing the planet.Numerous issues affect the environment,and the majority of them are primarily the result of human activity.Same argue that raising the price of fuel is the best way to protect the environment because it would discourage the ownership of private vehicles and rein in unchecked industrialization.In this essay,I will argue that there are many different aspects to the global environmental problems and that raising the price of fuel is not the best course of action.

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