IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 551

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, violent behaviours are prevalent in video games and movies. While a group of indiviuals presents the view that engaging in such activities is a great form of leisure, I strongly agree with those who believe that since these games and movies have several adverse effects for our community, they should be restricted by the governments.

Nowadays, violent behaviours are prevalent in video games and movies. While a group of indiviuals presents the view that engaging in such activities is a great form of leisure, I strongly agree with those who believe that since these games and movies have several adverse effects for our community, they should be restricted by the governments.

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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

Language has been the dominating factor for human to interact and communicate with others. Especially with the globalisation that happenning, it requires more people from different backgrounds and countries to meet and discuss to solve and work on a specific topic. To do these really well, everyone needs to understand each other by a language that most people are capable of, which is English. Although in fact, the most spoken language in the world is Chinese, yet it is mainly spoken by Chinese. Furthermore, English had chosen as the international language by our precedessors in doing conferences, billateral meetings, etc. Through this history, the existance of English has become the influencing factor for most people to learn, which also reflects to the country development of english-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain, and America. This reflection gives new hopes and promises new opportunities that may not exist in non-english-speaking countries. For taking the aspiratio...

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that people have to face some difficult situations in their lives. While it is a commonly held belief that it would be better for us to accept bad situations, there is also an argument that trying to improve such situations would be better. This essay will discuss this topic from both points of view, and express my opinion.

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In conclusion, poor countries are supposed to raise the salaries of their dexterous sectors which will help them earn well in their own hometowns or states. And there should be a law that working in the home country is made mandatory for every graduate. Therefore, these problems are vital to be noticed and solved in a proper and productive manner

Medical experts and educators are in high demand in many countries due to the increasing of hospitals and universities. While poor nations are being left by many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, as they preferring to work in development economically states. This essay will discuss what kind of problems can be faced in poor country and what solutions to tackle these situations.

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Some people believe that pupils should be given less homework, others say the opposite. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People hold different views about giving assignments to teenagers. While there are some positive aspects to reducing school assignments, I believe that providing work is more beneficial than.

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Some countries have introduced a law to eliminate working hours for employees. Why is this law introduced. Do you think it is a negative or positive development.

Several countries launched a new regulation to reduce employee working hours. In this essay, i will explain the reason behind these changes and why this should be perceived as a positive trend.

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In modern society, International enterprises are rising at gigantic rate in most developing nations. There are various advantages and disadvantages behind this scenario, I will explicate those in upcoming paragraphs with suitable examples and thus will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

Due to advances in technology and the job market, many people who worked in small companies nowadays work for large ones. Certainly, there are positive and negative points in both places. This essay will discuss what are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a huge business.

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Some people belive that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Urbanisation gives an adverse hurdles to jungle life. However, individuals opine that steps are taken to save the animals and birds from extension such as wild life protection act, opening of zoo ,and education among citizens. I concur with this phenomenon. I will discuss my reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There has been an increasing trend where people rather seek for alternative medicine than visiting the professionals to deal with various health issues. In my view, I believe that this is a negative development due to these two reasons.

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Some people work for the same company or organisation during their whole working life,while other say that it is better to work for different companies and organisations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Whilst certain individuals prefer to remain loyal to the companies that they work for many years, others claim that changing the employers provides a faster career advancement. I personally uphold the view that each option has its own plus and minuse effects.

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People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable, but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People nowadays are working hard to buy more things. Even though this trend has made life simpler, people are imploring that it has hindered traditional values while promoting materialism. This essay will emphasize that the said statement is incorrect.

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In many modern societies , grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of this?

Nowadays grandchildren can't speak with grandparents.I think it's a little bad. Because of loss outcome.Everybody by himself.He is busy with work. Not taken into consideration owing to throw children to nursing home.

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Many people believe that teachers should take the responsibility for the students to judge what is right and wrong and behave well, others feel that teachers should only teach academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern educational sector, the issue of teachers taking the responsibility foron teaching students to make judgements except focusing on academic subjects has sparked a considerable debate. While I accept that the top priority for teachers should focusing on the academic curriculums, teachers are also responsible for giving the right guidance for students to behave right.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

Nurturing animals in captives has always been an issue for a lot of people. However, certain groups believe that the are advantages for both the animals and humans provided by it. I personally think that keeping the animals in captivity, in most cases, is helping the animals.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views anf give your opinion

In this contemporary world, parents encourage children to attend school at the very young age for some reasons. This phenomenon has led to a division of opinion, with some persist that the parents should follow common requirements to enter primary school. This essay will elaborate further on both perspective, ultimately delivering a supportive stance from both sides.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages? Bạn đã gửi

Nowadays, the number of people using smartphones has increased too much. The author of this essay believes that the benefits of owning a smartphone outweigh the drawbacks.

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some people think that the development of technology help to decrease crime and other people think that would encourage crime to discuss both views and give your opinion.

Technology has flourished by leaps and bounds in everyday people's lives. While some express that the crime rate is diminished by the development of technology, others say that the technology would provoke offence. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As time goes by, some countries are developed as fast as lightning. However, it seems that there are also some poor countries which unable to be well developed and it might due to financial problem. This will cause wealthy nations often donate money to less developed nations, yet this does not end poverty. Therefore, despite providing financial aid, wealthier nations ought provide help in the other ways to developing nations. In my opinion, developed countries should utilize other non-motery measures including educational opportunities to eradicate poverty.

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in today's world many people own a smartphone. do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, almost people around the world all possess one or more than one smartphone. The writer of this essay believes that despite our people owning a smartphone, the benefits offered greatly outweigh any and all drawbacks.

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