IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 559

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that employees should stay in the same job for the rest of their lives. Others think they should switch jobs at least once during their career. To what extent do you agree / disagree?

In today's world, a debate has sparked with regard to employment. Some individuals believe that people must stay focus only the same occupation for a long period of time meanwhile some think employees should change their job atleast one point during their line of work. As per my opinion, more than staying focused in one job for a long time, people should explore their options or follow their passion therefor I believe that people should atleast try changing their occupation at least one time during their career journey. In this essay I will elloborate two reasons to support on what extent I agree followed by a conclusion.

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When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or famous. In your opinion, what are the qualities that characterise a successful person? Why do you think these should be the criteria? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is very common for people to confuse success with popularity or wealth. In my opinion, hard-working populace who also display the unyielding attitude towards their ultimate aim, are most likely to be unfazed in challenging times and pursue with same enthusiasm for their goals.

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Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments.

In many parts of the world, there is a growing focus on building houses, and these developments often come at the expense of a city’s natural environment, such as parks and farmlands. While this can help address housing shortages and revitalize areas, the loss of green spaces in cities can negatively affect the environment and people’s mental well-being. Therefore, it is a negative development overall.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The transformation of people lives are caused of recent technologies and ways of purchasing and selling. Based on my personal perspectives, I strongly agree that this condition brings the better improvement to consumers’ lives.

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You have seen an advertisement in an english newspaper for a job working in the city museum shop during the holidays. you decide to appy for the job. . Introduce yourself .Explain what experience and special skills you have . Explain why you are interested in the job

I am writing this letter to apply for the job. Yesterday, I saw an advertisement in the English newspaper,your company is hiring people in the city of the museum shop.

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More students travel abroad for further education do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater then the drawbacks

Nowadays, education has become an integral of everyone's life with it people cannot achieve goals. Therefore, to get the best study students are migrating to big cities. I totally disagree with this statement for some reasons. This essay will explain all points in forthcoming paragraphs with relevant facts.

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Some people believe that university should be free for all students. Others think that fees are necessary to support high-quality education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The graphical representation offers a comprehensive exploration of the intricate dynamics surrounding the integration of renewable energy into the broader landscape of total energy supply across four distinct nations during the temporal intervals of 1997, 2000, and 2010. A discernible trend emerges, portraying Iceland as a frontrunner in its unwavering commitment to renewable sources, consistently outpacing its counterparts. Notably, Iceland's trajectory unfolds as a steadfast ascent, initiating at 45% in 1997, escalating to 60% in 2000, and culminating at an impressive 70% by 2010. This remarkable consistency positions Iceland as a vanguard in the global pursuit of sustainable energy solutions.

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although the purpose of university education is believed to help their graduated students get an ideal position in the company by several citizens, others are convinced that both individuals and society can receive numerous beneficial impacts from the tertiary education. From my personal perspective, the main goal of education in the university should be job related.

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Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether adults should rigidly put children’s behavior under control or allow them absolute freedom to act has long been called into question. This essay shall illuminate on the fact that while both approaches have certain benefits, their drawbacks greatly outweigh the advantages. Society should form a middle ground on this matter which lets children freely develop while abide by adults' teachings

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It is observed in many countries that less and less people nowadays go to the cinema to watch movies. What could be the possible causes and the solution to this?

It is undoubtedly the case that urban areas around the world increasingly suffer from fewer and fewer people nowadays going to the cinema to watch movies.There are several reasons for this problem,and various measures could be taken by cinema and governments to improve the situation.

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Demand for oil and gas is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity.do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

An increasing surge in natural resources like oil and gas paving the way to explore these resources in unexplored areas becoming a concern. Despite these natural resources possessing a variety of advantages, their disadvantages outshine the benefits.

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The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting the total energy from 1971 to 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram above illustrates the proportion of renewable energy in the total used in 6 countries over 40 years

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Topic: Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down

There has been discussion of knocking down the current building and replacing it with a brand-new one. Since the establishment, like everything else, has a finite lifetime, I completely agree with this remark. The advantages that accrue to human beings from engaging in this activity will be greater.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Job satisfaction is believed to be an essential facet of one’s self-satisfaction and a joyful life. To be satisfied with a job, many expectations need to be fulfilled, and it is a matter of debate if work satisfaction exists.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The Shortage of food supply across the globe causing people to ponder over their heads to look for other alternatives , especially insects. But, many oppose this view as insects affect both the environment and humans. There are many advantages and disadvantages of eating an insect.

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Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The ever-evolving state of technology comes with mass market adoption that have allowed itself to be accessible to anyone of all ages, including children. This level of mass adoption as well as proliferation of technological capabilities moves at a speed that is forced to be reckoned with, and due to this, some well-meaning parents are of the opinion that children should have a limited access to the use of mobile phones, while the rest have no qualms about their children owning the very same device.

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Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the best way to increase road safety is by improving the minimum of the existing law. I totally agree with this notion because the fact of driving laws are not evenly distributed in several cities and the consequences formulated in today's law show ineffectiveness in making people learn one's lessons.

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Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Waste production and management have been a cause of concern globally. These days there has been a significant increase in the amount of rubbish. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how the problem could be alleviated.

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Some people choose to be vegetarians because they believe it improves their health and has a positive effect on the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are numerous individuals who believe that being vegetarians would be good for their health and also beneficial for the global environment. I strongly disagree with this statement, not only because of the importance of eating meat for our body, but also because of the economic impact on the society.

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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

First of all, we have to understand the overview of society, in every society has a group of people that have differences, for instance lifestyle, culture, religion etc. Actually, every society has both rich and poor people. I agree with the thinking that rich people have to aid people who are very poor, due to the reason that the rich people have more resources in order to help poor people. However, not all rich people have the compassion and generosity to give many resources to another. Some rich people desire to help but some do not. In fact, it is are a lot of ways to help other people, even though we are not rich people, because people in society need different things, someone needs physical help but someone needs mental help. Therefore if we are not rich people, we can help other people by mental help, such as we can help them by encouraging and inspiring them to practise meditation that it's very good for their mind, talk to them about good memory. By doing this, it can make ...

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