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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people feel that playing computer games has a negative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it has a positive impact. Discuss both views.

Computer technology has been developing for a while, especially computer games. Many people consider that brings a lot of effects, such as young people's health and social skills but others hold different views. I will discuss both sides and claim it is true that computer games give many disadvantages to young people.

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The mass media, such as TV, radio and newspapers, have an influence on people, particularly on younger generations. It plays a pivotal role in shaping the opinions of people, especially teenagers and young people. To what extent do you agree with this? Please give examples.

These experiences of involvement in projects and industrial exposure were both deeply insightful and in fact, were contributing factors to my growing enthusiasm for the aircraft systems and flight performance field. Now, I am eager to delve deeper into this specialized field, working to develop an application that can enhance the safe operation of UAVs through accurate trajectory planning and optimization. Additionally, I am committed to promoting gender diversity in engineering. Even at my undergraduate level, through my positions in student bodies such as Business Manager at the Society of Mechanical and Aerospace Engineering Students (SOMAES) and Webmaster/ Social Media Manager at SEDS-Pulchowk, I have actively participated in motivating the younger generation into STEM, especially women. A graduate degree will not only enhance my technical expertise but also position me as a role model and advocate for women in engineering.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose higher taxes on this kind of food.

Nowadays, fast food has become one of the most popular meals for people who live in metropolitan cities due to its convenience and affordability. However, most people are concerned about health problems caused by fast food. In my opinion, I do not agree to increase the tax on this type of food.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social life.

Nowadays, the development of technology has given birth to many modern forms of communication, which decreases in our real-time social interactions and has a sparked debates on its impact on our social life. Some people believe that it has negative impact on interpersonal relationships, I partly agree with this opinion.

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some countries encourage foreign companies to open in their country. many people think that government should focus on encouraging local businesses rather than foreign businesses. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, world business has rapidly developed. People always improve their skills and knowledge to be the best in the marketing field. The quick improvement in business has prompted challenges in most entrepreneurs especially in small and medium enterprises. In my personal view, I agree with people who think governments should support local businesses more than foreign enterprises.

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Every year, several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Throughout the mankind's history, humans are an inexorable march of progress that has consistently generated development. Notably, the proliferation of languages has emerged as a pivotal factor in the potential demise of humanity. Diverse linguistic systems have been devised by disparate communities to facilitate intra-group communication. However, as time passed some languages died out owing to factors such as dwindling populations or other causative agents. Personally, I dissent from this assertion, as I contend that the adoption of a limited number of languages would invariably give rise to a multitude of predicaments.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views anf give your opinion.

While some people believe that schooling should begin at an early age, othes claim that children should learn when they become older. In my opinion, I strongly agree that they should start their learning process in their young age because they can absorb information quickly and develop multiple skills by learning. This essay will discuss both views and my opinion in detail.

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Conveninence foods will become increasingly prevalnet and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of prepration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, processed food is increasing widely due to which some individuals believe that traditional cuisines and the way they get prepared will get replaced by conveninence food. I largely agree with this statement. Although, people still believe in cultural food due to the freshness and authentic taste, effortless cooking and easily availablity of food is changing it.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Tourism serves as a major source of livelihood for people in many countries. However, poor tourism management approaches can cause problems that may affect many economies around the world. In this essay, I will outline what I consider to be the potential advantages of tourism, as well as some of the negative outcomes that I feel are likely to occur, and explain why I feel that there are more significant advantages.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In these days, taking risks for both professional and personal lives is controversial issue. Some people argue about its advantages while others contest the disadvantages. In this essay, allow me to discuss both views and draw my conclusion based on my observations.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that the primary environmental problem of today's world is the loss of certain species of flora and fauna, while others believe that there are more pressing environmental issues. This essay will discuss both views and my personal opinion regarding this matter.

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Being a celebrity, such as a famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

To be a well-known person, such as a popular movie star or sports celebrity can be both problematic and beneficial. Although stars make a lot of money and have power, I believe that to be a famous person brings more disadvantages than benefits simply because it affects mental health and stars lack privacy.

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Some People believe that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some society think that it is better for kids to begin learning a foreign language at primary school than secondary school. This essay believe that learning foreign language have big advantages that outweigh the drawbacks since in the age of primary school would be helpful for kids to absorb the knowledge

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that should focus on subjects that they are good at or that they find the most interest discuss both side and give your opinion.

Nowadays, young adults receive many kinds of subjects while learning at the schools. However, some people argue that the students only need to concentrate on subject they particularly find interesting or good at it. I would argue that teenagers should learn all subjects that are given at schools in order to know the basic knowledge that will be useful for their daily lives. They can focus on certain subjects when they take an undergraduate school.

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The internet has made a postive impact on our life. Do you agree or disagree?

Technology is flourished by leaps and bounds in each and every field. The internet makes people life easily nowadays, as a result, internet dominates peoples' everyday life. I strongly agree with this statement because the internet provides a positive effect on society. This essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine.However,at best these methods are ineffective,and at worst they may be dangerous.To what extend do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, different medicines are in trend and gaining massive popularity as they are effective. There are arguments that these methods are ineffective and are dangerous. In the minds of many community, alternative treatments are not harmful and they can cure diseases because they have good effectiveness.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

kids are usually taught working hard leads to achieving aims. I discuss on pros and cons of this motto in this essay.

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Despite the fundamental use of fossil fuels for generating electricity, and supporting industry and transportation, that energy is limited resources. It will be pointless when all the world's fossil fuels have emptied. As far as I am concerned, societies and governments need to cooperate in preserving and finding the alternatives of these resources.

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The rise of online shopping has led to the decline of traditional brick-and-mortar stores. What solutions can be implemented to support local businesses and maintain vibrant communities?

Due to improvements in the technological era, there are some impacts on businesses and industries especially on the way of customers' preferences. The online option is ease for buyers in terms of material and immaterial. Thus, the rising level of online shopping has led to the decline of offline stores. Some options might be applicable for supporting local businesses and maintaining enthusiastic communities.

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The influence of AI is growing rapidly. Some people are excited about the possibilities while others are terrified. What is your opinion about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

AI technologies are becoming more and more powerful over the last twelve months. Some people believe that they create new markets and will be a boon for the global economy. Meanwhile, others think that we are in grave danger. It is partly agreed that generative artificial intelligence can be a hazard. This essay will shed some light on the issue and provide some suitable examples to support the writer's position.

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