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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The time that kids spend time with their phones is a lot today. I believe this is because the fact the level of technology we have reached. And it is a negative development. This essay will discuss technological development as a reason and why it is a negative development.

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Some people believe that entering the workplace after school is far more beneficial than studying at university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recently,many believe that attending university is not more useful than going to work after schooling.I agree that it is beneficial to go to work after school then achieve a degree at university.In this essay,I will explain my view with arguments.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can we do to address these problems?

Humans are putting more and more pressure on the atmosphere, this leads to environmental degradation. This essay attempts to shed light on the ways in which humans are destroying the environment before demonstrating some solutions to tackle this worrying issue.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Urbanisation would impact the population density in the city since the rural people move to the city. The increase should be supported by the development of basic infrastructure including settlements, water, public transportation, and health facilities. As a result, urban citizens are provided with their basic needs. In reality, the development of urbanisation is faster than the development of basic infrastructure , especially the developing countries. Consequently, these circumstances have impacted the environment. For instance, Jakarta, the capital city of Indonesia, experiencing bad air quality and scarcity of drinking water due to massive urbanisation.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are those who believe that hosting an international sports event is beneficial for the country, while others disagree. I agree that hosting an international event excellent way because it brings income to the hotel. However, there is a preparation that country has to do that is to build stadium facilities.

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News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

The news could be considered to be an essential fixture and part of a person's everyday routine. For some, watching the news is just as important to them as having their dinner every day at the same time. For others, the news is the most reliable and accurate source of information, not only in a local sense but also on a global scale.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In this present world,home is very important and the importance of home is constantly on the rise.In many states,having a home is more important than renting one for individuals.I think that owning a home is a positive situation.Considering people's freedom as well as the wish of owning a home will prove this.

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Some people believe that watching television is bad for children. Other people believe that watching television is educational for children. Which opinion do you agree with and why?

According to some people, watching TV programs is hurtful for young kids, on the other hand, some people claim that there are some benefits of watching television for children in terms of education. I strongly agree with the idea that it has some disadvantages to children's habits of watching TV, since it is so harmful for their eyes to look at the screens for a long time and they can accept wrong ideas and lessons from TV as nowadays there are a number of telecasts which is not suitable for the young generation.

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Many parents these days choose to send their children studying abroad. What are the causes? Is it a positive or negative development?

The country being a developing nation, sees an opportunity outside the country to work and study. The main reason behind the cause is the lack of scope within the country after studying and achieving their dreams. In this context, I am pessimistic towards the approach. In the following lines, I will inform the details.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their productcts are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

For advertising purposes, company often market their product as always having something new, this is needed for the company to keep catching up to their competitor. From my opinion this is something that need to be encouraged.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Having an International sports experience which an argument for some people, the others think it is good to become a host an International sports event. In my view, I agree if we become an International occasion because there are many benefits.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, a wide range of subjects are taught at school. However, some people think practical lessons, such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork in which students can learn at home, should be deleted from the lesson schedule. Personally, I do not agree with this stance, and the following content will list the reasons.

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Some experts belive that it is better for children to begin learning a foriegn language at primary school rather than secondary school? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disaddvantage?

Some people argue that children should learn another language at primary school, while others believe that is better to wait until secondary school.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many individuals say that is a good step for the country to become a host in an international sport event, but other people think that is not good. I believe that hosting an international event excellent way because it brings income to the hotel. However, there is a preparation that country has to do that is to build stadium facilities.

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foriegn language at primary school rather than secondary school. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning a second language has become a common practice in almost all parts of the world. However, there are some debate about exact time when pupils should start learning it. Although, early studying a new language has some drawbacks, I believe that they are outweighed by several benefits.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

A recent study reflects the major concern regarding the crime rate after the completion of their punishment. People are indulged in the crime again after their release and no major change found. There are multiple factors responsible for this issue but at the same time, the remedial measures are also there to tackle this menace.

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some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than at secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning a second language has become a common practice in almost all parts of the world. However, there has some debate about exact time when pupils should start learning it. Although, early studing new language has some drawbacks, I believe that they are outweighed by several benefits.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? (Give reasons for your answers and include any relewant examples from your own knowledge or experience.)

There are those who think that having a large sum of money will make us happy. Regardless of whether some people believe there are more reasons to be joyful,. Contentment, in my opinion, can be earned by achieving goals.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion

The last decades have witnessed an ever-growing discussion concerning international sports events. In the popular perception, the vast majority of individuals affirm that international sports events give several benefits to countries. Yet, others claim having these events would cause several predicaments. It is worth ascertaining the upside and drawbacks of this dilemma.

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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Although many people believe that paparazzi should not focus on the celebrity's privacy, few reveal that there is a price value for their fame in sharing photographs on social platforms. I state that they should not reveal the privacy of a star person such as actors. However, it is prons and cons to have a debate on this paparazzi topic that will provide some views, reasons and examples in the following paragraphs.

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