IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 604

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays a lot of young people use social media. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the society of technology, it is not difficult to use networking, especial is younsters. In my point of view, there are more benefits outweighing drawbacks and this essay will discuss the reasons.

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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV,vido games & other types of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled?

Recently, violence spread by TV shows, video games or online entertainment has increased parents’ concerns. This may be because children would imitate the behaviour in those media, since they are too young to self-critic what is acceptable and what is forbidden. This essay will first discuss how this process negatively influences Children, followed by a potential solution.

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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on the other planets.some people think that it is wastage of money and government should spend more money on addressing the problems of public.To what extent do you agree?

Some argue that the government is wasting money to discover life outside Earth and the money should be spent on solving problems in the society instead. I believed that as there are no significant discoveries despite the never-ending increase of budget, and there are more urgent matters in our communities, I totally agree the state should invest more on addressing social problems instead of discovering the unknown.

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Some people feel that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in country side discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that it is better to live in a metro area while other argue with the statement that they prefers to live in a rural area. I also believe that it is worth living in a rural area because of benefits like a clean environment. However, in this essay, we will discuss both the views with the help of suitable examples.

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Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cinema is not only a branch of art, but also a good way for socializing. Since its invention cinema has created its businesses, actors and actresses. With amendmends in new streaming services, the alternative ways for watching a movie have increased. At that point there comes a question to minds: whether cinemas are losing their value or importance. It can be easily stated that thanks to the developments in new streaming services and new platforms accessing a new movie is becoming easier, however, the value of cinema is still existing in art society.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developed countries should provide other types of help to the poor countries because, providing only financial aid is not sufficient for the poorer countries to solve poverty. I agree with the statement and this essay provides you with the supporting ideas.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that children should be motivated to be more competitive, while others feel that teaching them to be cooperative will be of more value as they enter adulthood. I believe that while competition can help young people be successful, cooperation is more important because it teaches them to work within a team , a crucial interpersonal skill.

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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.

These days, it has become very common to see that both men and women give away a considerable amount of money on cosmetics and beauty care, whereas this trend was not usual in the past times. In my essay, I will explore the potential reasons behind this behaviour and discuss the possible its consequences.

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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

With the technological develepments we have reached today there is a common view like people will no longer buy books, newspapers or other paper based articles because they will have a chance to read them on internet wihout any payment. Even though they have good reasons to believe that, I partially disagree with them.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

There is an argument that any unpleasing situations like poverty or engaging in unsatisfied employment need to be accepted as they are, while others support towards putting effort on improving such situations. I strongly believe that a person should try at his or her level best to overcome any obstacles coming along the way to success. This essay will discuss both these opinions with examples.

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Are playing games more effective or harmful to children?

Some people believe that playing games has a negative effects on children whereas others consider it has some effective sides on their study and health at the same time. In my view, there are more drawbacks of allowing child to play games completely.

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Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In regards to Job satisfaction and levels of personal income, there are two kinds of prospects. There is a group which prefers to go on with one particular job and tries to endure negative aspects of their profession such as having a demanding job or lack of money supplies. on the other hand, there are employees who always tend to improve their career position. In this essay, I will consider both points of view and introduce my standpoints.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent their home rather than buy one. What are some advantages and disadvantages renting a house?

Citizens of some countries are choosing to live in leased-out houses instead of purchased ones. This profers benefits like, less expenses and less responsibilities . On the other hand, it could mean having to deal with co-existence, and the unreliability of landlords.

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Currently, there is a trend toward alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Use examples and explanations to support your opinion.

The use of traditional medicines has been on the increase in recent times. However, these forms of drugs may not work well and sometimes harmful to our bodies. This essay agrees with this statement because not only does little or no research go into the formulation of local medicines, but also, these preparations do not treat specific illnesses.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Tourism around the world is developing and the number of tourists visiting in the country is also increasing. This has led people to create two groups, one who so supports the host country, that should accept diverse cultures for those visitors while the other group believes that the tourists should explore and follow local customs and traditions. I support the second statement.

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SCIENCE ADVANCED SO MUCH THAT IT CAN NOW MAKE IT POSSIBLE FOR PEOPLE TO LIVE 100 YEARS OR EVEN 200 YEARS. SOME PEOPLE THINK ITS A GOOD THING, WHILE OTHERS THINK IT IS BAD… DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND WRITE YOUR OPINION

Having a long life span of more than 100 years is now possible due to the advancments of science. While some people consider this phenomenon as a psitive matter since this can help individuals, especially those with a professional degree, to contribute more to their country, there are others who believe that providing old people a longer period of time will be cost an extra charge for governments.

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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is competition. It is undeniable that competing has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement on whether people should cooperate or compete more. I am of the belief that competition is crucial to guarantee ability enhancement and promotions because it differentiates between hardworker and unproductive worker.

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some people say that governments should spend money on building theatres and sport station. Instead, they should spend money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some people ,the importance of constructing medical care buildings and education is more beneficial , some of them thinks that spending money on building theatres and sports station is useful. Let us discuss both the views clearly.

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It is better for young people to get the advises from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,young people try to learn,make,create and gain experience,While the young generation tries to gain lifetime experience they can get advice from old people.I agree with this opinion for a couple of reasons.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the lifestyles of international communities are accessible information due to the ease travel and media coverage. Although they can lead to inappropriate cultural absorption, I believe that the merits of getting informed about the way people in other countries live outweigh the drawbacks for some reasons.

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