IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 601

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,However,say that this woud have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To improve public health some people suggest that the sports can play a vital role. It is said that “Healthy mind is in a Healthy body”. By increasing the number of sports facilities we can create an environment of courage, sportsmanship, and tolerance. The minds of youth can also be directed towards healthy activities through sports promotion.

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Many universities students use the Internet as their main educational resource. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice

A considerable number of university students choose the Internet as their main source of research in any educational practice of their academic journey. I believe that the advantages of this issue outweigh the disadvantages. I feel this way for the following reasons.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?

Some individuals argue that tourism on a global scale is not desirable for local people. This essay will analyze the causes of this situation and suggest several solutions which can resolve this problem.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In the course of human history every person has been trying to be a good member of his/her society. Some believe that this behaviour should be taught to children by their fathers and mothers, while some people claim that schools are the place to teach children this issue. I would say both arguments have validity, but I would lean towards the former.

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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with

In today’s society, many argue that education curriculum should be altered by adding more entertainment facilities, while others claim that it is compulsory to give first priority merely on education. However, in my opinion, I strongly believe that schools must be provided a better environment with not only subjects but also to develop mental well-being and essential life skills of all pupils.

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Some people believe that nowsdays, we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As part of globalization and internet facilities people learning more about this world and they have too many choices in their hands. I strongly agree with this statement because, we have many things and have many of information and it makes us confused and overwhelmed.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is considered by some people that the cause for studying second language is a way to travel or work in overseas while there are others who think there are some reasons why individuals should learn another language. While language courses develop exposure to school children, I believe additional language is the passport to enter in the receiving country for different purposes.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Setting up your own business is very charming for various people these days instead of being a salaried employee. Although there are some advantages of being free-lancer, I would argue that this business model includes some drawbacks for people.

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The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

The innovations in Science and technology would make it simpler to abate the crimes by its ability to foresee and inhibite criminal activities.I totally agree with this statement because less efforts will be required to detect the Lawbreakers due to the inexpensive state-of-the art monitoring equipments and also, criminal offenses can be checked with the introduction of the futuristic law-keepers.

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Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

People have different values they attach to money, individuals attach more value to it than the other, with some seeing it to be more important to them. There are various right uses of money, which I will list below as well as other factors apart from momey which are important for a good life.

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the main aim of advertising is increasing sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that the purpose of ads is to increase the percentage of good sales without necessarily with residents. However, I partly agree with this viewpoint so I will shed light on my perspective in the following essay.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problemes.

These days, more and more immigrating to new countries to get a better life.It has been suggested that speech barriers can element significant issue in social interactions as well as issues in everyday life.I partially agree with this concept and in this essay, I will give some arguments to support my opinion.

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Today many people do not know their neighbours. What are the reasons and solutions for this issues.

Nowadays, a large individuals don't have understanding about people living around their residence. This essay discusses the reasons for the above and will also provides solution for this matter.

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Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s age, it is a common belief that politicians ought to construct more and expanded expressways to decrease overcrowding. However, there is a more persuasive argument that constructing railways and metro stations is the better solution to avoid traffic jams or lengthy journeys. The following essay will go through both viewpoints.

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Some hold the view that ideas and information should be completely open, and there should be no controls on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspaper, Internet). Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom of the media?

The role of governments in controlling access to media content has evoked diverse perspectives in recent times. While some argue that there should not be any restrictions on individuals' acces to informatioin, I advocate for a measured level of regulation.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that in the future individuals will read newspapers and books online, while printed medias will not be used anymore. This essay completely agrees with this statement because online sources are easy to use and people do not need to carry weight, also, it is more environmentally friendly.

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Improving trade service and manufacturing sectors are essential for the development of poor nations. For this rich nations should take more responsibility to help poor nations in these areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The underdeveloped countries have been improving their export sectors and production parts. It is important to grow the economy through industrial sectors. However, the developed nations have obligations to give aid to the poor country but to some extent because they have many resources to support the poor people. This essay will elaborate further in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Some people argue that the government should be responsible for covering the full cost of these services. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.

Health care and education are vital pillars of a country development and productivity. People hold different views about whether it’s the responsibility of the government to fully fund both the health care and education sector. Some agree that health care and education should be fully funded by the government while there are others that disagree with it. In my opinion, I support that health care and education cost should be fully funded by the government and my reasons will be stated below.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

English has become the most well known language in the world, due to the development of tourism. This have made some people believe that the language is gradually making its place, to being the only language spoken world wide. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world.

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Some people believe that the best way to stay fit is to join aa gym or a health club, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Keeping fit and doing some exercises to have an active lifestyle and better health condition are well-discussed matters in the modern world. Numerous people have an idea that the best result to be in shape is to join a gym or health club. However, others believe that doing everyday activities can have good effects on the body, and there is no necessity to spend time in the gyms to work out. The idea provokes strong arguments, which both sides will discuss and reach a conclusion.

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