IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 601

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Fewer young people play sports these days. Why is this? what can be done to encourage more young people to do sports.

Sports plays a vital role to maintain the better health and create youthful generation. However, recent trend shows that the younger generation is not spending time for doing games or athletics. This essay describes the causes for such trend which includes lack of motivation, time and importance of physical education in curriculum along with the possible steps to overcome those problems.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home or work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?v

Nowadays, the crowded megacities and traffic congestion in them has become a big problem for citizens to deal with. Some experts believe, the fewer individuals utilize transport vehicles for their daily routine the freer spaces would be on streets. In this essay, although there are a few problems with the approach, I will explain why I agree with the solution.

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Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons such as traditional medicine. How could this be solved?

Humans can perform any task for their own benefit. Wether it concerns killing animals for using their parts to decorate their homes or even creating medicinal products from them to an extent till they become endangered. In strongly oppose to the above-stated notion and will explain methods like penalising animal killing and use of genomic sequencing to create medicines to tackle this concern.

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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

There is no doubt these days that many goods are being manufactured in other countries and then being delivered long distance. The question is, is this thing beneficial? In this essay, I am going to discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In the modern age, many people do not know who lives next to them in the largest cities because people work very bury and this essay will give the solution that spending more time on their life.

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

With the advent of technology, modern home gadgets have entitled women to perform jobs while simultaneously taking care of their offsprings in free time. Although a working mother can bring extra cash to the home, I opine that there are more demerits linked to the above-stated notion than merits. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss it in detail with suitable examples.

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Some educationist think that international exchange visit will benefit teenagers at school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Travelling and learning about a new place, culture, standard of living of different people from various countries from a very young age would help children have better growth and development. International visits to different countries and exploring places with friends and teachers would have both advantages and disadvantages to the teenagers at school. In my opinion it has more benefits compared to the drawbacks.

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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

With the increase of global trade, numerous items including the items that we use in our daily routine are made in other nation and have to be delivered in long distance. In my opinion, the online shopping from other countries is a good thing as long as the quality of the products is better than the local items.

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Some people think that it is government‘ s responsibility to transport children to school, while others think parents should get their children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Transporting children to school is and always has been a major issue that draws widespread attention but divides people. There has arisen a heated debate about whether the responsibility to pick up the children to school is the government's or their parents

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays developed nations spend more and more on financial help to the poorer countries, but unfortinatly this does not solve problem of poverty in that places. Maybe there should be other ways to asist developing economies?

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

People have different view that should college students spend all their time on compulsory lessons. While obtaining a qualification is a predominate work for undergraduates, I still believe students should be allowed to choose some extracurricular courses considering their future developments.

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Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is more useful for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that television is useful for educational purpose, while others think that it is the better source of entertainment. This essay argues that despite the fact that television educate children by improving their literacy skills, I believe that it helps children more to relax their mind by entertaining them.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world, with the development of advanced technology most of the young generation kids are addicted to use smartphones in their daily lives. In the current context of the world, most of us are relient on smartphones to fullfill our daily tasks and in fact I firmly believe children using smart devices like phones can be a negative development. In this essay, I will elloborate why most of the children are spending their time on technological related gadgets such as smartphones and why it is a negative development.

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More and more information about the lives of celebrtites in newspaper, magazine, and online. What is this happening ? what are the disadvantages for the reading public ? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, information about celebrities lives in newspaper, magazine and online are developed and the reading public can easy to accessed anywhere. Overall, the information about celebrities lives drawbacks live style in social media. As we can see on social media, many celebrities have different lifestyle, they give negative impact for reading public especially for knowledge and character in real live.

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

Many students today struggle to pay attention in class. The main causes of this are the development of technology and outdated teaching methods . There are several approaches that can be used to deal with with kids who lack attention.

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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

The benefits of this trend do not outweigh the drawback in a large extend.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this day and age, there is much knowledge the child must learn through their lifes. That is the reason why they need many teachers. It is believed that parents are the best teachers for their children. I totally agree with that point of view and this essay will discuss and clarify the above option.

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Some people believe that corporal punishment helps to improve students' behavior, while others think it could be detrimental in many ways. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A few people think that since some kids find arithmetic and philosophy tough, they could be voluntary instead of necessity. This allows young people to put attention on their treasured subjects.

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Some people believe that a great difference in age between people and children is more beneficial. Do you think the advantages of a greater difference in age between them outweigh the disadvantages?

In some parts of the world, People are categorized has Grown-ups starting from 18 years, thus can get on four wheels, fulfill civil rights and even find a soulmate while some dissatisfied with this. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problem does this cause? What can be done about this?

Keeping in contact with people who live in the neighborhood is no longer important in huge cities nowadays. The writer contends that it is mostly because of a disease named “Hurry sickness” and population growth. In order to tackle the problem, people should be encouraged to interact and make new acquaintances around their homes.

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