IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 601

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued by some that man lives in his best timeline. They point at the tremendous improvement he has made in his life and the way he extended his life span. I think this is an incomplete truth because we might experience a better life in future.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, regarding feminist activists' efforts women are allowed to work and they comprise more than 50 per cent proportion of the labour force in advanced countries. However, it is evident that the majority of high-status job positions are allocated to men. whether or not providing women with high-level positions in companies has become a controversial subject. This essay agrees that women should have the right to be hired as managers , CEOs or members of the board.

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Some people believe that the most effective way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of profit they create. Is money an accurate reflection of the success of a business, and how else could the success of a business be judged?

People commonly argue that the amount of profit you make in business is the most effective way to judge your success. In my opinion, I believe that money is a certain evidence to judge success but there are other things that should be mentioned.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, we are living in a world always more international where many foreign people travel to other countries to know other cultures and places. This creates problems, some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs but others think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. In this essay, I will explain both statements and I will try to give the pros and cons.

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many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar,which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

In this contemporary world, more and more people have health problems because the producers add too much sugar in the processed food and drink. In order to prevent people die from the massive sugar, some people think we should add more taxes on the sugary products, so that the price will be more expensive and people will reduce buying the food with the high levels of sugar. Personally, I totally don’t agree to raise the price.

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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world's fuel resources. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two.Now people are beginning to realize that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world's fuel resources.Personally,I tend to think that is absolutely right statement.

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation.However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? what are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

The world is currently dependent on oil, fuel and natural gas for producing electricity.However, one day it all will deplete because it is a non-renewable source of energy.This essay will discuss about how to use these resources effectively as well as some other alternatives to fossil fuels.

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Youth drug abuse is a serious problem. What are the possible causes of this behavior? Do you have any suggestion to control that?

Nowadays youngsters and students in colleges and even in school are addicted to the drugs.Drugs usage became common in students circles.Compared to the past young generation has become more addicted to illegal medicines.The overuse of illegal or prohibited drugs causes severe effects both in mental and physical health.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the work place. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whatever the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

Nowadays, it’s very important like it says to have a “piece of paper” because many companies hire only you have done the university, but in only a few cases it is. Some people have different opinions regard university such as people think that universities should give the knowledge and skills for the workplace other in other way. In this essay, I will explain the main function of a university, first I’m a student that are studying mechanical engineering and I know it very well the system.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is not fair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, every child becomes professional soccer or cycling because you can earn a lot of money and you can do this dreamin' a job. In ,fact, successful sports professionals can earn more money than in other important professions, such as engineering or medicine. In this essay, I will explain why some people think is fully justified while others think it is unfair and I will give my points of view.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

One of the widely discussed tendency nowadays is the decision of the students who decided to take a gap year. This essay will highlight the merits and demerits of this trend.

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There is no need to attend a live performance (a play or concert) because seeing it at home on television is better. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

With the advancement of technology, it is much easier nowadays to watch live shows While sitting at home. However, there are a lot of people who believe that listening to a live concert has much more energy than listening at home.but, as far as I am concerned, I believe that watching life shows is much better than watching it on a television.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common for parents to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. In this essay, I will explain why the cons of teaching youngsters at home overshadow the benefits.

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Some people say now that we can see films on our phones or tablet there is no need to go to the cinemas, others say to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, due to advancements in technology life is become much easier. Some people argue that, they can watch movies on their electronic gadgets rather than go to the movie house.While others find it difficult to do it. This essay will discuss both views and give my personal opinion at the end.

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international travel should be restricted, since this practice have impacted negatively to the environment.

It is considered that the international travel should be restricted, since this practice have impacted negatively to the environment. Even though I completely agree with this statement, nowadays the tourism and the growing of business, which is linked to the globalization has increased the vision of international travels.

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It is believed by many that those read for pleasure develop better imagination and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief that those who read for pleasure develop better imagination and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. Considering the flexibility and effectiveness, I agree with this idea.

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some children spend long time on their phones. why?

Nowadays, children have the right to decide to do some activities they want to do in their spare time. Some children choose to spend long hours on their smartphones. In this ,essay I will explain why they are doing this and I think this is a negative development.

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that school curriculums should focus more on beneficial subjects ,such as information technology, than art and music, in order to prepare kids for the modern world. I disagree with it, and here are my reasons.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some masses believe that it is not wise to study another language as it can easily be translated by technology. In my opinion, I disagree with this fact as it would lead not only to dependence on the internet but also digital literacy.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that these days you can find music everywhere play in our society and other cultures in the world. While it is a commonly held belief that psitive thing for the people and the communities as well, there is also an argument that music can bring only drawback impact on both. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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