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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case?Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In many countries, people usually have high expectations for owning a house，it is usually a symbol of stability and happiness in life. Therefore, most people regard owning a house as the most important part of life. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this point of view, this essay will explore the reasons for importance of people owning a house and the positive factors for it.

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The government is spending a lot of money discovering other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problem of the public. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Since the discovery of telescope, scientists have made a countless amount of major breakthroughs. According to the some thoughts, the mind boggling amount of expenses spent on the development of space industry should be channelized to other alternatives such as improvement of public-related activities. It is my firm belief that investing in space activities to unearth the mysteries of outside planets is one of the most pragmatic ways for a country to allocate its budget.

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In some countries , owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negativbe situation

people prefer to be a homeowner rather than a tenant. There are many reasons why this is the case. Personally, in my opinion, there are both pros and cons for this situation and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

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Many companies offer their employees the opportunity to work from home. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home for the company.

Emergence of home office paradigm nowadays is in trend and many firms are alllowing their workers to work from home. However, there are both benefits and disbenefits of working from home.

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In some countries the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening? What measures can be taken to stop it?

The standard of living is dwindling in few countries. I believe it is because of the increased cost of living and pollution, this essay will look on to that and suggest possible solutions to tackle these

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Traffic jams are a problem in many towns and cities today. Some people say that the solution is to build wider roads. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, one of the most popular problems in big cities is overcrowded roads. Due to that, some people believe that if the government makes roads wider, it will decrease the number of jams. In my way of thinking, it is not only possible solution of this issue and, in this essay, I am going to prove my viewpoint with several arguments.

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some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History

With an increasing number of job opportunities and population in the country, the choice for the students in choosing their subjects has become debatable. People say that history is more important than other subjects. While others argue that in this modern world, science plays an important role in ruling the world of technology. In my opinion I feel both the subjects serve their own purposes, therefore they are equally important.

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which can not be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged . To what extent do you agree?

The modern health issues causing deteriorating health are consequences of this technologically advanced modern era. Proponent advocates that modern medicines can not resolve such disastrous health issues. Hence, Proposing the idea of shifting to traditional medicine is being highly entertained among them. In my opinion, traditional medicine and treatment methods should be encouraged as modern medicine is designed for resolving the symptoms only, not curing the disease or illness.

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Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this day and age, there are many factors that help people more straightforward to find a profession.It is believed that education is more essential than social skills when looking a job.In my opinion, I strongly support that both social skills and qualifications are equaly necessary. The ideas to clarify these views will be illustrated in this essay below.

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-Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Learning Marth seems unimportant at school for some people and they think that it is redundant subject so government should reject it from the school and not let teachers teach for the children. However, others believe that this subject will be useful for every fields in life. Today's essay, I will shed light both of viewpoints and give my own opinion.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. Why is this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people have been choosing to buy based on the brands which are popular for the items of clothes, car and so on. In this eassy, the reasons behind this trend happening and negative impacts on this development will be discussed.

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Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagr

The news is the most important element for people to gather knowledge about the world. The prompt notes that the information has no correlation with people's everyday lives, and this is considered not worth while reading it in the newspapers or following it on TV channels. I, however, would disagree with the prompt, and this essay will provide reasons before presenting a conclusion.

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Modern children are suffering from diseases that were once considered only meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

At this time, children are suffering from diseases that used to be adult’s illness. One of the most diseases is obesity that attack children. In this essay, I will explain more about the causes and the solutions about this problem.

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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a 'gap year', before they begin work or univeristy and see it as a chance to broaden their hoizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The spare time before beginning work or university can be a valuable time for travelling to obtain numerous of experiences. A few people think that it can be an opportunity to leverage it by strolling around to varied destinations while others assert that it won't result in any advantage but throwing the money away. I believe with careful consideration, the expenses they pay will pay off with the life lessons.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

After the first penalty, criminals perpetrate more offenses. According to my personal thoughts, the main cause of this phenomenon is severity of punishment, and it can be solved in case the government take the resposibility.

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The amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

The pie diagrams revealed funds that young children gained and expended in social action in the given year.

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Some people regard video games as a harmless, fun, or even as a useful educational tool. others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effects on the people who played them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Peopl`s opinions differ as to whether video games are beneficial or not. While some people might regard it as a complete negative way of gaming, I still believe it brings far more benefits than its drawbacks.

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Many people choose to work or live abroad be cause of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?

In the contemporary era, many are migrating to foreign countries whether for the purpose of finding a job, or having a high quality life.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

E-book becomes more popular than printed books. Even though almost every individuals support this trend, however, somehow I disagree because it still has a few disadvantages.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment . What can the government do to address the problem ? What can individual people do ?

Some individuals believe that humanity is the reason for destroying the natures. In this, essay I will provide my points of view on whether the government should handle with the situation and how individual people protect the Mother Earth.

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