IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 614

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that we should not encourage sports games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with?

In the contemporary era, whether students should be inspired to play inter-school sports has become an upsurging subject of widespread debate and concern. Some people assert that it fosters competitiveness rather than collaboration. However, I disagree with this statement, and in this essay, I will demonstrate the reasons.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most students are pursuing to level up their capabilities by taking out of main subjects in the university. On the other hand, people believe that is important for pupils to focus on their time on the main subjects in the university as a qualification before getting a graduate degree. In this essay, I will discuss both views about student fulfilling their capabilities outside of the main subject and the importance of learning mandatory subjects in the university.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

In recent years, there's a successful market for skin whitening cosmetic products in numerous contries. The main reasons are the beauty trend created by commercial campaigns and the social norm being expected for women. This can lead to effects such as money being wasted on useless products and the rise of several skin problems.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that we are living in a modern era in which the phenomena of globalization have been more ubiquitous than ever before. Through the development of science and technology, the general populace can also improve the quality of their life and longevity. That leads to an aging population. The economic and social impact of population aging is extremely crucial. That's why, many people in some countries prevent it, resulting in an increase in a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Thus, It has lots of advantages. In this essay, I'm going to explain fully about the details.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this ?

I totally agree with the official regulations to protect adolescents from danger especially in some areas where crime rates are considerably high. Curfews or boundaries need to be imposed for the teenagers’ safety interest. At night, when most people are confined in their home, crime is more likely to occur. Furthermore, it is pointless for these youngsters to roam around at wee hours as they still need to attend school in the morning.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be used other purpose such as residential areas for over growing population or to develop business and boost economics. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Urban cities mostly filled with buildings and houses. Some people argue that, public grounds can use for build apartments and office spaces as a solution for over populations. I oppose this arguement due to many practical reasons. In this essay, I explore both sides and give facts for support my idea.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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Some people today feel that physical money will no longer be used in the future.Others feel it will still have some uses.Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly,the society is divided into two distinct groups as per the different minset of masses.Therefore, it has become a topic of discussion whether, the dominence of digital money exchange will vanish the existence of paper money.This essay will shed light on both perceptions and will mention my opinion in the conclusion.

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Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

there are split opinions regarding the new trend of working from home. Some believe that it is a positive as it allows more time to spend with family, whereas another group of thinkers support it has negative impact on social life. However, both have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both opinions will be discussed.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the economy has become a world-controlling factor, so more authorities expect a thriving economy as the most valuable component in the nation. However, others believe that not only that but also other parts of progress are at the same Important level. I think economic enhancement is more essential than others.

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Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives, Unfortunately, not many achive this balance. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions to solve the problems?

As the pace of today's materialistic society moves on, a multitude of people fail to achieve work-life balance. Several consequences may be listed about this phenomenon and devising a solution necessitates a concerted endeavour of everybody.

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Government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help a country make progress and develop.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this digital era, investing an enormous amount of money in science stream has become a common phenomenon. There are calls for governments to allocate money to teach science subjects other than investing on other subjects in order to the advancement of a country. This essay agrees with that statement as science-centric education policy would enhance economic benefits and aids to solve global issues.

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Many people believe that schools should teach students good behavior as well as other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is a well known fact that our schools play a vital role to shape our career, but the question remains : do they carry additional responsibility of fostering productive behavioral tendencies among students ? I completely agree with this statement and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.

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In many contries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that this the responsibility of governments to solve the problem. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children are consuming fast food and others less nutritive diet in daily life. So that, in most of nations, children are becoming obese and weaker in health. Significant number of people argue that the government is responsible for this issue and they have to solve it. If asked, I partially agree with this statement. I will explain my view in ensuring paragraph.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.

Nowadays, there is an opinion that passion for your job is not as much important as a big salary. Indeed, to my mind this statement is absolutely wrong.

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Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most people do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Despite recommendations of medical professionals, the elderly are not engaged in physical activities. Their unwillingness stems from the potential feeling of embarrassment, though the issue can be effectively addressed through the creation of special sports groups.

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To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption?

Since the inception of Humankind we have been cohabitating together with the nature. Although our living standards have improved , but the question remains, are we taking care about our environment as well ? No doubt, this question has remained a matter of controversy and debate. Many pundits believe that hiking petrol fuel and diesel prices is the optimal way to flourish our ecosystem.

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Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the youth generations are more keen and perceptive toward several affairs such as those concerning the environment, poverty level, and animal protection in comparison to their preceding age groups. In my opinion, I agree that many of the younger people have a bigger interest for the mentioned topics. In this essay, I will dissect the reasons behind them from my own experiences and views.

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The Government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead .To what extent do you agree with the statements?

There are many forms of art such as music and theatre that could give an additional quality and dimension in our nation’s movement. Even though there is a group of citizen that reject a budget allocation to arts for several reasons, there is still a community which push and hope the government would bring money resources to the arts. From my perspective, i do not agree with a sentence that states the money should go to public services instead to the arts sector.

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It is much easier to learn in a small class than in a larger one. To what extent that do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people tend to send their children to a small-scale class instead a relatively large one, probably providing a higher quality of education. Personally, I totally agree with this viewpoint because more valuable lessons would be offered by a small class.

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