IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 616

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

As of late, it has become a trend to celebrate marriage or other parties largely by spending huge amounts of money. Even 31st Night is now celebrated all over the world with huge advertising. Some individuals think that it is just a waste of money whereas others think that it is a part of life and it is needed to make it memorable. The aim of this module is to demonstrate both perspectives and make a final conclusion. Surely I am with the former view.

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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Many nations have taken steps to ban smoking in resturants, hospitals, and parks. This essay agrees with that statement becasue smoking can cause health issues to non-smokers, and it can also influence other people especially teenagers.

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Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Some say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of possessing an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In contemporary societies, the average life expectancy has been increasing. Some groups of individuals claim that this is in alignment with a substantial number of benefits. However, other groups hold the opposite view, believing that the aged generation causes issues. I completely agree with the former perspective, and in the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on the reasons behind my viewpoint.

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Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a debatable argument amongst many people that restaurants should make the nutritional information of the dishes they present, Known. Although, many chefs prefer not to as many of the Food contain high calories, but disclosing it would mean that customers could keep their diet in check. In my opinion, restaurant owners should add nutritional information since it would prevent health issues and lead a healthy lifestyle.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, using smartphones are an inseparable part of our lives particularly for children. Some of them spend hours daily on their digital gadgets. There are several reasons for this which I would explain some of them below.

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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Some well-known athletes are promoting products related to sports. Although watching these contents which contain advertisements could lead people to impulsively buy unnecessary things, this essay believes that their contents provide education to the public which outweigh the negative impacts.

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Some people think that it is effective for students to study in a group at school, while others think it is better to study alone. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The students are divided in their opinion regarding whether they should study by themselves or in a group at school. some believe learning in a group can make a topic appear easier and make the process of learning much faster, while others think that a better understanding of a subject can only be accomplished by learning it alone. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete conclusion. From my point of view, it is better to study in groups.

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Some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,However,say that this woud have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To improve public health some people suggest that the sports can play a vital role. It is said that “Healthy mind is in a Healthy body”. By increasing the number of sports facilities we can create an environment of courage, sportsmanship, and tolerance. The minds of youth can also be directed towards healthy activities through sports promotion.

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Many universities students use the Internet as their main educational resource. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice

A considerable number of university students choose the Internet as their main source of research in any educational practice of their academic journey. I believe that the advantages of this issue outweigh the disadvantages. I feel this way for the following reasons.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?

Some individuals argue that tourism on a global scale is not desirable for local people. This essay will analyze the causes of this situation and suggest several solutions which can resolve this problem.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In the course of human history every person has been trying to be a good member of his/her society. Some believe that this behaviour should be taught to children by their fathers and mothers, while some people claim that schools are the place to teach children this issue. I would say both arguments have validity, but I would lean towards the former.

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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with

In today’s society, many argue that education curriculum should be altered by adding more entertainment facilities, while others claim that it is compulsory to give first priority merely on education. However, in my opinion, I strongly believe that schools must be provided a better environment with not only subjects but also to develop mental well-being and essential life skills of all pupils.

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Some people believe that nowsdays, we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As part of globalization and internet facilities people learning more about this world and they have too many choices in their hands. I strongly agree with this statement because, we have many things and have many of information and it makes us confused and overwhelmed.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is considered by some people that the cause for studying second language is a way to travel or work in overseas while there are others who think there are some reasons why individuals should learn another language. While language courses develop exposure to school children, I believe additional language is the passport to enter in the receiving country for different purposes.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Setting up your own business is very charming for various people these days instead of being a salaried employee. Although there are some advantages of being free-lancer, I would argue that this business model includes some drawbacks for people.

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The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

The innovations in Science and technology would make it simpler to abate the crimes by its ability to foresee and inhibite criminal activities.I totally agree with this statement because less efforts will be required to detect the Lawbreakers due to the inexpensive state-of-the art monitoring equipments and also, criminal offenses can be checked with the introduction of the futuristic law-keepers.

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Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

People have different values they attach to money, individuals attach more value to it than the other, with some seeing it to be more important to them. There are various right uses of money, which I will list below as well as other factors apart from momey which are important for a good life.

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the main aim of advertising is increasing sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that the purpose of ads is to increase the percentage of good sales without necessarily with residents. However, I partly agree with this viewpoint so I will shed light on my perspective in the following essay.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problemes.

These days, more and more immigrating to new countries to get a better life.It has been suggested that speech barriers can element significant issue in social interactions as well as issues in everyday life.I partially agree with this concept and in this essay, I will give some arguments to support my opinion.

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Today many people do not know their neighbours. What are the reasons and solutions for this issues.

Nowadays, a large individuals don't have understanding about people living around their residence. This essay discusses the reasons for the above and will also provides solution for this matter.

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