IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 613

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Deforestation has been an increasing problem over the last few decades. What are the primary causes of deforestation? How can we solve the problem?

It has been widely recognized that there is an increasing number of deforestation in the last decades. I believe that industrial expansion is the root cause of the problem and we need to regulate them to minimize the consequences.

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Child Labour is a major concern all over the world. What are the causes of it? How can the problem be solved?

Children are experiencing extraordinary challenges in the contemporary epoch, but mayhem of child labor is extremely devastating. Child labor is referred as a phenomenon of inclusion of underage children in some sort of employment, for the sake of some monetary reward and thus depriving them of their childhood. Experts, in this regard, have identified a multitude of causes and highlighted the dominance of financial deprivation and failure to implement labor laws . To combat this issue, I am convinced that strict actions such as developing and applying rules against labor outlawry and ensuring provision of basic amenities at doorstep, are worthwhile, strategic and effectual.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high Levels of Sugar,which causes many health problems.Sugary products should be made ti encourage people consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree?

There's an increase in the proportion of sugar in most foods and beverages which could lead to different health issues.And some individuals believe that an inflation in the price of products with high levels of sugar would discourage people from consuming them.However,I do not completely agree to this,as such methods are usually ineffective.

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It is predicted that with the development of technology， people in the 21st century have much more free time. To what extend has the prediction come true? Give some reasons from your perspective and experience.

Technology plays a vital role in the 21st century, which led to a series of revolutions and numerous big changes in human society. It is said that people in the 21st century will have much more leisure time than before. I will delve to explain with sufficient details according to my own experience and also providing specific examples to this statement in the following passage.

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It is predicted that with the development of technology， people in the 21 st century have much more free time. To what extend has the prediction come true? Give some reasons from your perspective and experience ?

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. SOme people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many individuals dispute the amount of using aircraft to transport fruit and vegetables to countries where drought or out of season. I totally disagree with this statement and I will discuss my point of view.

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Peoples believe that individuals are responsible for their happiness. Others believe that different factors of people’s life influence happiness. Discuss both views. State your opinion

There is no denying the fact that happiness in people's lives. While it is a commonly held belief that people are responsible for their happiness, there is also an argument that there are reasons that make people's life unhappy. This essay will discuss this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The sophisticated technology influences the education field, such as the popularity of online learning. Currently, online learning is mushrooming everywhere and becomes a pro and con. Some people believe that this type of education brings enormous benefits and will replace traditional education. Meanwhile, the rest of them claim that face-to-face learning is irreplaceable. In my opinion, e-learning is simple and easy to access, but could not replace face-to-face education because it can offer physical activities, accessible to all places and also more interactive.

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Sport can be used to bring people from different cultures together. It helps to foster friendliness between nations, especially when sport-based tournaments or competitions are held. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, sport is getting more and more pupolar. Its advanteges is not related only to the health, it is related also to the social relations. Its is speachless language where different people from over the world can meet, play and enjoy even without any need to talk. In the following pragraphes I will expand and explain these statements.

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Some people think that we learn best through in-person interaction with a teacher in classroom. others believe that online learning is more effective.

There are several individuals who states that the best learning can only be done by having in-person communication between students and teachers. However, there are the number of people who thinks that online education is more effective as compared to offline classes. Though in-person interaction provides you better opportunities to clear your problems but online provides you some recorded lectures that can help scholars to learn again. From my opinion both statement have there own benefits. This is discussed with some relevant examples.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views

In some countries, people earn higher salaries and think good for their own country and themselves, and another countries they contend it and believe that equal salaries to every citizens.

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Some poeple say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

In this era, it is really important to keep our house and job place neat and clean. It is the responsibility of every individual to keep there things in well organise way . In this easy I will discuss in-depth its merits and demerits in subsequent paragraphs and lastly I will come to a logical conclusion.

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“The Growth of online shopping will one-day load to all shops in towns and cities closing “Do you agree or disagree.

There is a huge demand of e-tailing around the globe due to the electronic service progresses in favour of people's energy and time. But it also has another negative side effect. One of them, end of the existence of all marketplaces, shops in urban areas. I totally disagree with this evidence, as far as many shop centers have to function as a storage and for other needs.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People exposed to a foreign culture using unfamiliar language are thought to have a rough time blending with the environment. Some severe public issues or practical problems might be bothersome if people cannot convey the information precisely. The statement makes sense to me that I will discuss in the following paragraph.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. So, sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Nowadays, sugary food has been popular because it has some demand in the market. Food and beverages, which include large amount of sugar are produced by many manufactures but they promote many diseases, so there is an argument that sugary products should be high expensive to reduce people's buying. I agree with this statement and this essay will discuss reasons for that view.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

It is often argued that loss of biodiversity is the key factor for environmental issues. I completely agree with this opinion and think that biodiversity is much more important to reduce environmental problems.

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The desire for higher status or great wealth than others is what motivate most people to succeed in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I am completely agree that, the motivation to success for individuals is produced by their willingness to achive a greater position or better income. This caused by multi function parameters like family, society, psychology to name a few. In this essay I will disscus around the education, psychology and family aspects.

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In some countries, people these days spend very little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whom does this affect more, parents or children?

There is no denying the fact that parents recently are spending less time with their children compared to the past years, in this essay we are going to discuss the causes that might be happening as an impact of this act, also we will also explain the effect on parents and children.

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Television dominates the free time for too many people It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others Do you agree or disagree Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In this era, television plays an essential role in the globe. TV helps to provide news channels, entertainment videos or cartoons for children. To the larger extent, I agree with this statement that it makes people lazy and do not allow citizens to socialize with others but the other side cannot be neglected and I will give my reasons in-depth in subsequent paragraphs and Lastly I will come to a logical conclusion

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In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary era, wearing western-style dresses is an ongoing trend in numerous nations. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon, however the main culprit is the cultural shift due to the internet. Accordingly, this issue might have a detrimental impact on the traditional identity of many people.

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