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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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the audience of the male sports are more than the female sports what are the causes is it positive or a negative development.

It is important to think about why spectators of men's sports are higher than women. I think this will have drawbacks for female sports on the long term. I will delve into the reasons that caused this notion.

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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the Use of social media and browsers has increased our private information on the internet and companies like Facebook and Twitter have more control over them. I personally believe that it has more disadvantages than the advantages.

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It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

It is argued that students studying from home have more advantages than going to school. I disagree with this statement because they can receive knowledge more effectively, and develop skills as well as confidence in communication.

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Some people think that people should be given the right to use freshwater as they like. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of freshwater. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely recognized that the usage of freshwater should aim for the betterment of residents’ life. While some hold the view that the government should permit citizens to freely use freshwater, others suppose that this kind of water had better be strictly managed. This essay will analyze how unwise it is to let people use freshwater as they like before pointing out the merits of the control of freshwater.

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What technologies did you use to help you in your studies? Describe how it has helped you. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In this day and age , technology is more popular than before and it helps people a lot in life , work or study, Especially, Laptops and smartphones . Thanks to these devices , my study at school has become easier.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

The advancement of technologies has transformed our lives in many ways. Even for young children, most of them spend their leisure time on watching videos, browsing internet, or playing video games. There are some distinctive advantages and disadvantages of this development, I believe ultimately parents do play a pivotal role in making sure their children reaps the most benefits of technologies advancement.

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A lot of old people are suffering from loneliness these days. What do you think are the reasons for this problem? Can you think of possible solutions?

As the older generation faces difficulties such as loneliness and physical disorders this has become a problematic issue. This essay will untangle the causality of this phenomenon and also represent some possible solutions to mitigate this.

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Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Vegan is one of the diets that gained significant popularity lately, especially among the health conscious individuals. Aside to saying no to meat, vegan is one step further of not eating animal related food produce such as milk, butter, etc. This is the reason many perceive vegan as healthier and the trend is here to stay. In my opinion, vegan is not the most beneficial diets and the reasons will be discussed further.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Modern days with the shift of lifestyle and priorities, many prefer to have children at a later age. It is uncommon to see women give birth at the age of 18, usually is after 30 years old. Studies has shown there are several factors contribute to this trend, from higher living standards, different life priorities, and parents choose to be more emotionally prepared. In this essay the factors will be discussed followed with my opinion on this.

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IT IS BETTER FOR STUDENTS TO STUDY FROM HOME RATHER THAN GO TO SCHOOL. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

Some argue that is more good for pupils to learn online than go to study at school. I disagree with the statement and I will write this essay to explain why I disagree with the above statement.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having a private home as a property is so essential for people in many countries. This mindset may be because of three reasens which I will say in this essay. In my point of view this situation is absolutely positive and can be beneficial.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather then rent it. Do you agree or disagree?

A controversial discussion point is a purchase private accommodation better than renting one. I contend that purchasing home will provide private life and financial independence despite those who believe that living in a rented property is a good choice.

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Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree

Companies used to spend massively advertising on mainstream media such as television, newspaper. From the last decade, the tide has turned that social media is often the main marketing channel. The rise of social media is due to many believe it can influence consumer’s purchasing behaviour more effectively. I strongly agree to this and in this essay how does social media influence what customers buy will be discussed.

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Some people belive that it is good share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others belive that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, restricting information for the sake of public security and national importance seems irrational to many while others opine that information should be available only when the authority deems them suitable for access both views would be examined in this essay. I personally believe that scientific studies, the academic arena, and bussiness can be greatly benefied if the information is made open to them without restrictrions.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is young people have little leisure time and they are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is young people have little leisure time and they are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. It is undeniable that study has become an essential part of our life. However, these days study becoming difficult from time to time, and because of what people strive for the top and forgetting about their personal lives.

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The current topic of discussion is the fact that people are sleeping less than they used to. What do you think is the reason for this?

What are the implications for individuals and those around them? It's undeniable that we all don't look at the phone at night and stay up late at night. Phones and other technological gadgets have become an essential part of our lives. The purpose of this essay is to examine the factors that cause individuals to stay up late and get little sleep. One of the main reasons is the love we have for our favorite gadgets, such as phones, TVs, and computers. Many people have a habit of looking at their phones or working at the computer at night. Watch your favorite TV shows and programs.

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Topic: Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the troubles to concentrate at school. It is undeniable that difficulties to concentrate has become an essential part of our life. However, these days there are certain steps schools and universities can do to improve students concentration.

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It is undeniable that nowadays second language is play big role and has become a essential part of education system.

It is undeniable that nowadays second language is play big role and has become a essential part of education system. Some experts assume that learning of foreign language at primary school is better for children. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find it hard for students. Surely, there are both pros and cons to it but I believe advantages outhweight disavdantages.

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued by some people that music plays a fundamental role in connecting communities together regardless of the discrepancies of cultures and ages. In my opinion, the phenomenon is reasonable.

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Many working people get little or no excercise either during tge workinf days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise?

The fact cannot be denied that nowadays so many employees do have not enough time to keep themselves healthy. The main reason for this issue should be their working hours as well as their travelling time for work, which we discuss in the further paragraph.

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