IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 707

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, people these days spend very little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whom does this affect more, parents or children?

There is no denying the fact that parents recently are spending less time with their children compared to the past years, in this essay we are going to discuss the causes that might be happening as an impact of this act, also we will also explain the effect on parents and children.

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Television dominates the free time for too many people It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others Do you agree or disagree Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In this era, television plays an essential role in the globe. TV helps to provide news channels, entertainment videos or cartoons for children. To the larger extent, I agree with this statement that it makes people lazy and do not allow citizens to socialize with others but the other side cannot be neglected and I will give my reasons in-depth in subsequent paragraphs and Lastly I will come to a logical conclusion

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In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary era, wearing western-style dresses is an ongoing trend in numerous nations. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon, however the main culprit is the cultural shift due to the internet. Accordingly, this issue might have a detrimental impact on the traditional identity of many people.

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Some people think that going to a fitness center regularly is unnecessary. Instead they believe the combining occasional exercise ( such as going for walk) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief that a combination of a healthy diet and a conventional workout is enough to keep fit and stay lean, so going to a gymnasium is unnecessary. The writer contends that for the sake of good health, people should visit fitness centers due to the advantageous impact of changing their lifestyle rather than doing occasional exercise.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future all vehicles will be driverless, and there only passengers inside these cars. I believe the advantages of this scheme outweigh those downside ones due to their active working.

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Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language in primary school instead of secondary school. Do you think the advantages of learning a foreign language in primary school outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people insist that learning the second language at the early stage of the children development, which is primary school, is beneficial to them. Personally, I look at the bright side to the positive impact it makes on the students. Therefore, two perspectives of mine will be illustrated in the following paragraph.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have negative impacts on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this state-of-the-art era, the development of technology, such as social media, has brought two side effects on young generation, positive and negative. Some individuals argue that this development leads to various bad impacts, while others show the reverse. I will show my greater tendency on how social media is beneficial for them.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Instead of focusing on their own status via flashy fashion, students should invest their attention to material in the classroom. Hence the choice of making students all have to wear the same uniforms is rightful thing to do. Personally, this implementation has my full support as not only it can help eliminate negative discrimination against each other but also build up the high educated environment for learners as well.

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Some people rely to much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. What problems could this approach to Healthcare cause? How might they be solved?

People trust doctors while they do not think about their own health.And this dependability can cause some serious problems. This following essay will discuss the main issues and suggest some viable solutions.

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most people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. why? do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples,e.g from your knowledge or experience

Most people marry at later age, so they decided to have children at later. In this case, there are few reasons are working behind this changing societal norms and priorities.

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Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?

Making trip to isolated places and society is becoming a new famous trend of travelling currently. Although it gives a good economic impact for the area and people, I belive that it brings many bad impacts on the village and the community such as social and environtmental issues.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have negative impacts on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The social media usage such as Twitter and Facebook have its positive and negative impacts for the youngster and their ability to build personal relationships. In my opinion, social media usage for youth can have more positive impacts than the negative impacts

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Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher can't be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The number of couses are increase for being a teacher. However, while a group of people consider that courses can not make a good teacher when you completed that, l agree with those who feel that only courses can make you a tutor.

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One of the major issues facing the world today is overpopulation. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with this?

Nowadays, overpopulation is one of the biggest problem in many countries. This essay will discuss the negative issues associated to this, and also what can be done to solve it.

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagress with this statement?

Learning the language of English by staying in an English-native country is the best choice to enhance speaking skill, however there are other alternative ways to learn foreign language. I could not agree more with the statement and will explain the reason in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people believe that music plays an essential role in society, while other people say it is just for an entertainment purpose. This essay will discuss both views of the statement in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people say that doing good performance in their jobs is better than job security. While others believe that have a steadily work is crucial. This essay will discuss both views of the statement and explain writer's opinion in the following paragraphs.

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TOPIC: Nowadays, some people like to give help to the local community or provide people with direct help. Other people prefer to give money to national and international organizations. Discuss both methods and give your own opinion on which is better.

A glance at a line graph provided reveals the amount of consumed energy in the US, measured in quadrillion unit, from 1980 to 2030. Overall, almost all data experienced a progressive growth pattern except for that of hydropower. Moreover, the breakdown of energy use in that country by fossil fuel was absolutely higher than their counterpart.

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All children should be made to wear school uniforms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I believe that school uniform is required to wear while in school and in any school program. Because it is important to maintain to balance among students.

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The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest resources in its young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that pouring the national budget into the young is the most optimal tactic for a nation to make a preparation in the long run. From my perspective, I comparatively consider myself an advocate of this notion.

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