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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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crime and punishment, how to stop criminals re-offending. Give your views and opinion.

Criminality has become one of the major issues in some countries. Every year, rate of crime is increases and has more variety. Many criminals are already went to the prison but keep coming back to do same bad actions or even worse than before. This essay will explain why bad people keep doing that and the solutions to address this issue.

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Nowadays music plays irreplaceable role in our everyday life

Nowadays music plays irreplaceable role in our everyday life. For overhelming majority of people it helps concentrate and relief stress, while others claim that it disturbs their peace. In my opinion, I agree that i am one who feels stress-free whne listening to songs. I tend to think that way, out of several reasons which i will explore in following paragraphs.

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it is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for the art projects. For instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures seen in public places. Some people say that it is wrong and governments should spend more money on other important things of public interest. Do you agree or disagree?

A tourist attraction is the most important aspect in terms of economic growth of any agrarian. People are attracted to places which show the rich cultural heritage of a particular place. Nowadays the government spent a hefty amount of funds on art projects like paintings and sculptures which are seen in public places. Painting and sculptures are like the cherry on top. It symbolizes the agrarian's economy as well as its rich culture. If we consider the sculpture of Dr Vallabhbhai Patel in Gujarat, the authority has spent a large amount of funds on it, but it has become a well-known tourist spot as it is the agrarian's tallest sculpture in India. Local communities get benefits as their businesses grow. The agrarian's economy also boosts up due to this factor.

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In spite of the advancements made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

In this world, agriculture is having a major advantage from time to time, yet, There are still some people that cannot have access to food. Using this essay, I would like to give my point of view on the problem and the answer to solving the food issue.

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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gasses has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why is global warming considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays, Global warming is a serious issue, which is bothering Globally. To be considered as an important issue to be addressed, it has lots of reasons. Some of the criticism can be discussed in the following.

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Lots of places in world rely on tourism as main source of income. Do this trend advantages of outweigh disadvantages?

Numerous amount of places rely on travel as the main source of earnings . Although there are many disadvantages, this essay will examine both pros and cons and give a summary at the end.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

In some territories, it is thought that it's vital to spend loads of money to build new railway systems for high-speed trains between cities. However, others believe that this money should be invested on Acing the current public transportions. I personally agree with the first idea because it has long-term advantages such as air pollution reduction and helping the traffic issue.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

No one in the right mind can contest the argument that owning a house is better than renting it. I am inclined to believe that owning a place to live in is the most important part of life.

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Cycling is a healthier and more environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

Nowadays transportation have become one of important things in our life. They can bring us or things from one place to another place. There are various vehicles such as planes, cars, ships, motorcycles, and bicycles. Unfortunately, some transportations use have become one of the causes of global warming due to the the fumes produce air pollutions. Bicycle using can be the solutions about global warming issue, they have more benefits for our bodies and surroundings. But today, less people do cycling and this essay will explain why this happened and the solutions about it.

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Because of the global economy many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the adventages outweigh the disadventages

Globalization increases the transportation of products from one country to another, even basic things also, and the goods are importing and exporting via large ships or planes.In this essay I will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of moving equipments and merits outweigh demerits.

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These days huge portions of population are moving from rural areas to urban areas. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

In the modern era, many people migrate from rural to urban areas. They get more exposure and opportunities in cities as compared to rural areas.

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Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of home-schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

Many parents select to educate their offspring at home instead of school. In my opinion, the demerits of home-schooling outweigh the merits.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could taken to solve them.

It is true that in many countries the people’s weight averages are going up. Moreover, they do not pay attention to their health and the volume of fitness is going down. In this essay the causes and solutions to tackle this problem will be discussed.

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In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while other works full time to earn money. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are several options for parenting such as both parents fully focusing on their work and only 1 parent that focusing on their career. While there are several peoples that still argue, from my point of view it will be better if at least one parent is commit 100% to their child compared to fully becoming a fulltime working parent.

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Some people think that advertisement on TV can be useful for TV viewer. Do you agree or disagree? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

It is sometimes argued that the advertisement while watching something on television could be beneficial. While I personally believe that this would create irritation sometimes. So, I disagree with this Statement.

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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noising and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience

Education is a long learning process and students are future generations. Schools are students' homes where they spend more than half of their life and become knowledgeable there. Indiscipline students are troublemakers and disrupt the educational environment. Therefore, some people think that students who are disobedient could be separated into one group separately. It disagrees because for several reasons which I explain below:

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Some doctors show it is important for the old people to have regular exercise. However, some old people cannot get enough exercise. Why do you think this happens?How can old people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Nowadays, the topic of elder people whether should do exercise, which is popular in modern society. It is a social problem , which probably influence their body health. And government should pay more attention to these situation and produce a plan to solve the phenomenon.

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Some people believe teenagers should follow the examples of older people, others believe it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give ypur opinion.

While some argue that teenagers should take examples from older people, others think that is better for the young generation to have their own way of thinking. People who learn from others' mistake, can make progress faster and safer but sometimes, new ideas create a better world which has a great contribution to society. This essay will elaborate on both ideas and a personal conclusion.

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Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

It is of common notion that the constant technological advancement has lead to various changes in humankind’s general lives. Personally, I completely agree with this view for a variety of reasons.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's society, Education is an aspect of life has given utmost importance. While in many countries young people choosing to endroll in vocational training instead of pursuing university education. However, this practice brings about a mix beg of both and bane. I believe that work-based training surely brought positive benefits for a students. Therefore, the advantages clearly outshines the disadvantages.

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