IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 709

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Prompt: As compared to the past, children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors. Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution. You should write at least 250 words.

Contrary to the past, the kids of this generation are have a tendency to waste most of their free time indoors with electronic equipment included computers and TV as opposed to outdoor extracurricular and recreational activities. From my personal perspective, children should always be encouraged to go out and indulge in physical activites rather than staying at home or playing loads of games, though it can be reversed by parental supervision.

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still ho hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays there are significant modifications in the methods of agriculture to produce the significant quantity by lowering the input costs. despite of that, people around the world still won't get an adequate amount of food. I will discuss the possible points to point-out key problems with relatable examples.

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Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Education and health care seem to be one of the most important parts for the resident. Some people believe that the government should provide free education and health care to everyone. In my opinion, I agree with this statement because education and health care for everyone is beneficial to economic development.

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Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

A vast majority of doctors suggest that elder individuals to exercise frequently, but many of them do not follow an exercise routine. This essay believes that this is because of the lifestyle they grew up with and this can be changed by educating them the impact exercise will have on their life.

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The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there is a tremendous increase in population in large metropolitan areas due to people moving for job opportunities or easy access to urban amenities. Because of the reasons, young generations who are about to start a family will find it difficult for housing need. I agree that governing bodies are solely responsible for this matter and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.

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most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the governemnt in order for them to continue with their work.what are the advantages and disadvantages

There is no doubt that these days, several societies are becoming more creative about artists to make money from social media in that reason many professional artists are doing well in that situation. The question is, most artists gain refused salaries and must hence obtain funding from the government in request for them to continue with their business. In this essay I am going to discuss my opinion.

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Working is taking a more important role in people's lives. Why are people working so much? Do you think this trend is good or bad?

Work is arguably getting a higher and higher priority in most people's lives than a few decades ago, in terms of daily working hours and average retirement age. We are digging into the reasons for this phenomenon in this essay.

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Some people say that the best of improve road safety is to icrease the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Road safety is affected by a variety of factors. There are those who think that rise the legal age for driving different vehicles is the best way to enhance road security. I partially agree with this statement, increasing the minimum legal age would be an effective way but other precautions should be implemented. This essay will put forward two reasons to elucidate my point of view.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views.

Crimes are usually categorized as being unlawful and lately crime rates have been massively increasing around the globe. While there are some of us who believe that there has to be a fixed prosecution for each type of crime committed. Others, feel that motivation for committing the crime should always been taken into account while deciding the punishment for an individual crime. In my opinion, both these views are presented with the thought of well-being and hence they should be discussed to gain a proper understanding as some statements do convince me for particular reasons.

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Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people’s way of life. Others believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Across the globe, advertising during sports has been of widespread controversy. Some individuals believe that it is a welcome development as it helps boost popularity of companies and reduce the financial burden of sports organisers while others think it act as a distraction during the sporting activity thereby making the process boring and tiring. This essay will discuss both views and give my stance.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations.

It is true that many community think to have a good job and earned a lot of money in order to make their entity satisfied. However many of them think the opposite of this statement. It is believed that working hard can help them to settle a better growth when they are retired. For instance, a good professional teacher can earn a double salary compared with the normal ones. This example is based on true soul when public judge someone but it’s covered.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers,are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

The rate at which professionals like doctors and teachers are migrating from their own under-developed countries to work in a developed nation is on the increase. This has caused reduced number of professionals and Regular recruitment. There are a number of solutions to tackle this challenge.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is thought by some corporate organization that sponsoring sports can be an avenue to promote their businesses. A good number of people are of the opinion that it is advantageous while others think the outcome in the long run is not favourable.

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Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species . Some Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion.

Some actions of mankind have detrimental effects on flora and fauna. It is believed that there is no time for people to redress their mistakes while some people think that this circumstance can be effectively improved by various solutions. From my perspective, I have a strong belief that several measures can be taken to solve this problem.

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There are many things that can motivate people to perform well in their work. These can include the salary, job satisfaction or the chance to help others. What do you feel is the best motivation to do well at work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, There are a lot of things that employers could do to encourage their employees to work better in the office. Some excellent factors that can be applied are wages, job satisfaction or supporting opportunity. Each one has its own advantages, but high salary seems to work better in most of the cases, according to my view.

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Housing shortages in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think that only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In metropolitan cities, the shortage of accommodation is turning into a severe burden for citizens and some are of the opinion that this issue can be tackled solely by the actions of a government. I completely agree with this argument and I will fortify my view in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries the level of crime is increasing. What are the reasons for this? How can be deal with those causes?

Recent years witnessed an alarming increase in crime rate. The causes of this trend and likely solutions will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion

It is sometimes believed that educational institutes where learners dwell in the premises are better for offspring because this promotes peer learning as well as encourages personal growth while others did not concur to that view as day school students pay lower school fees, they also have a strong relationship with parent. However, I am of the opinion that staying in a learning environment plays a crucial role in a youngster’s academic life.

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Some people believe that we have nowadays we have too many choices . to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniable that in this era we have numerous choices. I vehemently agree with these given statements. This essay will propound my opinion along with credible examples.

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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for job. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

There is increase in migration rate whereby many people move from rural areas to urban areas for the sake of Job seeking. At the result of this, there will be overpopulation and increase crime rate in the municipal areas. However, the government can provide job opportunity as well as effective security.

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