IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 709

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

It is true that there are many parents who naturally succumb to their children’s demand as soon as they ask for them. This essay will first discuss whether it is an effective method to bring up children and it will then give the possible consequences when those children are getting older.

band

Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

In today's interconnected world, "Recidivist" has emerged as a subject of relevance and debate. The complexities and implications surrounding these people have garnered considerable attention, necessitating a comprehensive examination. There are several reasons why they commit and show interest to get along in the same occupation even after they complete imprisonment. This essay explores the aspects of their underlying cause, effects, and potential solutions.

band

Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is no doubt that crimes are prevailing nowadays and it is considered a critical risk for the community.

band

Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop, and on public transport.

Some individuals believe that mobile phones should be prohibited in public facilities namely, libraries, shopstore, and on public transport. I totally agree with this statement, because ban mobile phones in public areas can reduce distraction, decrease the crime, and encoruage people to become social.

band

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people say that children should learn a new language at primary school. However, others think that it is ok if they start to learn a foreign language at secondary school. In this essay the benefits and the drawbacks of learning a new language from a low age will be discussed.

band

Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are many zoos in the world for local and international tourists. Some people criticize that we should not build a zoo to keep the wildlife for any purpose, while the others support the idea that zoo can be an ideal place for protecing animals. I believe that zoos are good places for people doing both education and conversation.

band

The healthcare plays an important role due to the influence of a variety of disease in society.The medical science has the most crucial aspects in development all over the world for two centuries.

The healthcare plays an important role due to the influence of a variety of disease in society.The medical science has the most crucial aspects in development all over the world for two centuries. Although the top technology in healthcare is becoming vital from day to day, especially which is related to the medical science because people commence to take care of their health.

band

Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

The trend of today’s children being attracted to other countries' art and literature than their own country has led people to focus on the importance of teaching children the literature of their own country rather than other countries. Personally, I agree and feel that teaching literature of their own country will help children to honor their country’s authors work and also understand their nation’s rich heritage.

band

Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

In this day and age,there is a bunch of things people could do to get into shape. Most people,but not all,find useful training with some exercise to be healthy, however,others prefer to keep a balanced diet. In my eyes, the visible way may get exercise none other than to be healthier.

band

the older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. however, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that many older people think traditionally about living. Although, many people argue that these methods can not be beneficial in our modern society. I am partially disagree with this opinion because in some ways their life experience can be a big flip to our life.

band

Some feel that animal testing is cruel while others feel it is necessity. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

There is a split opinion where some believe conducting tests on animals is cruelty and some believe it is mandatory. However, both have their own pros and cons. Therefore i will discuss both viewpoints and give my opinion

band

Some say it is better to have vertical cities with lots of tall buildings rather than horizontal cities with fewer tall buildings.

It is argued by a few that it is more convenient for cities to have more of taller buildings instead of less tall buildings. I, However, agree with the statement to a large extent that cities must have more of taller buildings and in this essay, I will delve on the reason why along with a few examples.

band

Young people often copy the behaviour of famous people, so celebrities should only be allowed to advertise healthy food or drink and should not encourage unhealthy habits such as smoking. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally said that youngsters always follow the path of eminent celebs, therefore it is the onus of celebrities to advertise hygienic food as well as drinks and unhealthy things such as cigarettes should not be promoted. In my opinion, it can be appropriate for the public but inaccurate for social influencers.

band

Write an email to the mall manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Describe the problem you are having with the mall’s parking. Explain what you and your family have to do in order to visit the shopping mall now. Provide some suggestions for how the mall manager can solve this problem.

My name is Surbhi and I am writing this letter to complain about the lack of parking facilities in the shopping mall. Me and my family visit the place frequently therefore, most of the time we must spend about 1 hour roaming around the parking location to find the spot. Moreover, it's more crowded as compared to the location.In addition to this 40% of the space is filled by special need people.

band

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that helping the unpaid community should be added to school curricula, and pupils ought to do it free of charge. In the following essay, I will discuss why I agree with this statement as a positive event and elaborate each perspective.

band

Living in a city is bad for health. To what extent, Do you agree?

nowadays, Living in a city is become more important for everyone to earn money thats why most of the family migrating themself from rular and small area to city. Earning money is the most important aspect for moving in a city to give better life to their children. But other hand i strongly feel living in a big city leads to health issue.

band

Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question around our education nowadays is, if watching videos or television are better than reading. Wherever you go or study, the internet or screen time to learn is very common and I believe is more than a book. Regardless, reading is the most superior and rich than screen. However, lot o people have some kind of photography memory or busy life, because that they end up chosing other way.

band

Some people think hosting major international sporting events brings a lot of advantages to a country, while others believe there are more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The arguments about the results of being a homeowner to major international sporting events such as the Olympics and other specific sports tournaments have been continuing. Some people claim that they bring some drawbacks much more than their benefits. On the contrary, others do not agree with that opinion.In my estimation, sports activites' benefits are much more heavier than their negative results.

band

In many countries people are consuming more sugar-based drinks than before. Why is this happening and what could be done to reduce sugary drink consumption.

In many nations, the intake of sugary beverages has drastically increased. In this essay, I will explore the root cause behind this growth and I will give practical solutions to curb the consumption of sugar-based drinks.

band

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, a vast majority of people consider that the roughness on television and in computer

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.