IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 745

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many city centres have traffic problems leading to congestion and pollution.One solution is to build ring roads on the outskirts of the city taking traffic away from the center while this is helpful it also causes problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is no doubt in the fact that traffic is increasing at an alarming rate which leads to increased pollution and congestion.Building ringroads on the outskirts of the city may be one of the solutions but it also poses great problems. I am going to discuss about this aspect in the upcoming fragments before drawing any conclusion.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People who want to show their works such as art, writings and etc. can get rejection by an administration. In my front of view, they should not give them an opportunity to publish everything that they want.

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Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Successful economy and a neat environment of a country are thought by some to be realizable and incompatible at the same time. However, while I believe that being financially successful and having a good looking environment are automatically connected, I agree that they could have become unachievable.

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Some people think that quality art can be made by anyone while others think that it requires special talent and ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern world, the topic of quality art has been controversial. Many people believe that quality art can be made by anyone, whereas I agree with those who think that it requires exclusive talent and skill.

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People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In order to make monthly budgeting easier, most people prefer using credit cards as they provide flexibility in managing expenses. I, personally, believe the advantages of using credit cards outweigh its disadvantages due to various reasons. In my essay below, I will further discuss the reasons and state my opinion.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the people of some countries that have the young people more than the old people. Some people thinks when their contries have the yonge people more than the old people will be good because, that could increases the population in the future. Another people thinks it not good due to some countries limit the population, if that have more young children, it will over limit. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages about in some countries have the young people more than the old people.

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Nowadays, it is not only large companies that are able to make films as digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Producing films has become very easy in current society, thanks to digital technology. I believe it has a positive development rather than negative.

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Graph about the population of four Asian countries and urbanization

The graph illustrates the percentage of the urbanized population in Malaysia, the Philippines, Thailand, and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for the years 2030 and 2040.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Although women are taking more than half of the workforce in many developed countries, it is not uncommon to see more men in top positions. Companies must give a certain percentage of high-level positions to women. In my opinion, the sex of a worker does not matter.If we will be required to allocate some statues only to ladies, several problems might occur. and we only have to give these statuses to people who deserve them.

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Although countries with long average working hours are economically successful, this often has some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries working long hours is regarded the norm. Economic success resulting from long work hours comes at a price for families, people’s health and may contribute to higher unemployment. In my opinion the long term consequences are to grave to ignore and an effort must be made to reduce long working hours.

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishments should parents and the teachers are allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Punishment is regarded as a helpful way to discipline children and make them aware of the difference between their Correct and incorrect behavior since they are not too grown. Although this upbringing method can be of high value And grant children’s bright future, I believe it can also raise several behavioral disorders, if it is done inappropriately. This essay will analyze both merits and demerits of punishment and suggest some appropriate sanctions.

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In some countries today, there is an attitude that anyone can do it in the arts. As a result, people with no talent bocome rich and famous and geniuine talent is not valued. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people believe that anyone is capable of being an artist and the the easy possibility of earning a great deal of money or gaining a a reputation causes that real artworks are not distinguished or appreciated. However, I disagree with this idea.

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Some people believe that the pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.

It is undeniable that family life is being increasingly harmed by the high speed and pressure of contemporary lifestyles. Although, there are some positive outcomes of modern lifestyles, negative effects on families are far more. I totally agree with this opinion due to the several main reasons.

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Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is true that over the last 10 years, more and more adults tend to send their parents to care homes when they reach a certain age. In this essay, I will discuss the perceived benefits and drawbacks of this tendency.

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In your view, what is the most important thing for governments to spend money on: education, health, transportation, or something else? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Distributing tax-payer money is an incredibly difficult task that divide opinions. It divides opinions between people arguing that government should fund mostly education, while others argue that most of the investment should be in health or transportation. Not just that, nowadays, many people defend that the government should be minimal and most of these services should be offered mostly by the private sector.

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Many students find it harder to study at university or college than when they were at school What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem?

Humanity activity has seen great progress from the past to the present. Nevertheless, statistics show that people's interest in improvement is increasing rapidly every year. It is true that improvement means a lot to free time in our contemporary world. Today, the growing demand for time due to globalization emphasizes its importance. This issue of the nation activity is important for some folks activity, but not important for others, it is left to their own personal opinions. The problem with our modern free timeis still those who think negatively about information.

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These days, there are many zoos in many different countries these days. What are the reasons for it? Is this a negative or positive development?

The remarkable increase in the numbers of zoos in the countries for scientific and economic. Also, having large numbers of zoos gives us several benefits which can be economic or informational, so it can be a positive development.

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There are many zoos in many different countries these days. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

At the moment, there are a variety of zoos in various places in the world. In my opinion, I think this is because zoos have become a business for some governments and organizations, also it has become a destination for some learners. Moreover, I think this is cruel and harsh, and it is for sure brings so many drawbacks.

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Some employers involve their employees in their decision-making process. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common practice nowadays that employees are involved in making decisions related to their work. While there are certain drawbacks related to this trend such as discriminations between colleagues and waste of resources, I believe that this practice will actually brings more advantages in the form of higher job satisfaction, increase in productivity and speed up work processes.

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Research shows that business meeting, discussion and training are happening online nowadays.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays advancement of technology and the globalized world, more organizations are successfully willing to overcome all their activities easier than the past. Although, this trend have certain drawbacks, the advantages are more greater.

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