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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that constructing many sports facilities can improve public fitness, but in my ,opinion this will not help unless we improve awareness about the importance of sports and their positive impact on general health.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

The increase in production of consumer goods can cause damage to the natural environment due to several reasons. One of the main causes is the overuse of natural resources such as water, timber, and minerals. The extraction of these resources can lead to deforestation, soil erosion, and pollution of water bodies.

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the money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Many countries in the modern time take action in the race of space exploration. A huge amount of currency was spent, provides the society with numerous information. However, some people think that the money can be spent more effectively in other aspects, and I partly agree with this.

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Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some parents force their children to participate in additional classes after school, while others think that it is not that essential. This essay agrees, that pupils don't need to spend their time on some extra lessons as it is crucial to relax and do hobbies.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Nowadays, one group of assumes that taking the responsibily to organize some sports events in your state is benefical for the country, while others suggest that it leads to negative consequences. Despite the possible drawback such as increasing number of criminals, i agree that conducting special sports events is a good achievment for the locals because of wave of international tourists.

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The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular buildings has changed over time.

The floorplan shows how a building has changed from 1958 to the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the building has served both commercial and residential purposes with the only area remaining unchanged being the kitchen. At present, the flower shop has a more open layout relative to when it was an apartment and office.

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In many parts of the world children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Young people are provided more independence than in the last years around the world. Nowadays world is adjusting law and standard of the community. I believe this condition is positive for evolution.

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Some people say that the main environment problem of our times is the loss of particular species od plants and animals. Other say that there is more important environmental problem

A highly controversial issue relates to environment problem in these day. It sparked a debate on loss of particular species of plants and animals or other important problems. We will be examining the both point of view in this essay.

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Many automobiles manufacture created self-driving systems for their vehicles. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of releasing cars with these systems

Technology is an important means regularly upgraded by experts to make life easier and a very good example is the innovation of self-driving cars. This is an automobile that has made transportation easy yet, also quite dangerous.

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In some countries, citizens are allowed to keep a gun in their home. Discuss both views and give your opinions

In modern-day society, some countries allow their inhabitants to posses guns at home. As far as this argument goes, this phenomenon has both merits and demerits; however, the disadvantages overwhelm the advantages.

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The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.

Nowadays people who have obese are increasing rather than the older generation. This might be due to some issues which I will elaborate below as well as the solution will be provided.

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You work for a small company. Your manager has asked you to arrange a party in a restaurant for everyone from your workplace.

I work for TFD Insurance and am writing to inquire about making a booking at your restaurant for a company party. There are 25 of us and we would like to come at 7 p.m. on June 6.

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The purpose of business is to make money and they should concentrate only on this. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.

Basically, the goal of building a business would be different for each entrepreneur as well as the WHYs. However, according to my personal perspective, I'm leaning toward disagree if we only focus to make mony in doing business.

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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct. There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes believed that the extinction of animal creatures is a natural process. This essay strongly disagrees with this suggestion for several reasons.

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Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because univerity education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since university students, instead of the public, mainly gain advantages from the education, it is argued that they should take a full responsibility on their studying fees. In my view, I slightly disagree with this argument.

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As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Globalization means that in some ways people around the world are becoming more and more similar. We often eat the same food, watch the same TV programmes, listen to the same music and we wear the same clothes. Some of this at least can be blamed on the spread of multinational brands available all over the world. On the surface, it may appear as if the global diversity of cultural identities is being lost. If, the argument goes, people in Tokyo and London look and dress the same, then that must mean that cultural differences are disappearing. However, I would argue that this is a very narrow definition of culture and that in fact cultural differences are as present as ever. Cultural Identity is built on far more than just the films we watch or the jeans we wear. The foundation of cultural identity is shared values. When you look in detail at different cultures, you realize that the things that are important to one culture can be very different from the things valued by another cultu...

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people would consider music as a connective abstract device between diverse cultures and generations. I totally agree with this statement, and in this ,essay I will discuss some points.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this era and age, the population is still growing sharply, creating important issues to satisfy all the food demand. One of the possible alternatives is to introduce new types of nutrients such as bugs, caterpillars and locusts. This essay analyses the benefits of introducing insects as an aliment in our society such as reduction of costs and pollution, but also drawbacks such as the sensibility of people and the obstacle of culture.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Many animal species face the risk of extinction, which will reduce the diversity of creatures and thus endanger human’s living environment. There is no denying that human is the main reason that causes animal extinctions and there are many efforts that people can make to solve this problem.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society Do you think the art still have a place amoungst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum

It’s believed by some that art and fields have become a major part of our society.While other fields are great importance in society,art continue to play vital role on shaping the culture.Art should be incorporated in the school curriculum since it’s helps us to understand world around us, explore difference perspective and express feeling and emotions.

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