IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 740

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to overcome this problem?

It is true that in developing countries, in order to work, many health care providers and educational mentors are urging to the another countries with stable economy. From my point of view, there are several reasons behind of this and in this essay, I will discuss about reasonable problems and their solutions.

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Freedom plays a mandatory role in everybody’s life. We can see in today’s modernized era nobody likes to get some restrictions upon them, whether it would be a child or an adult. Some people think that there should have some strict rules of behaviour for children, but I disagree with this statement.

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Many species of animals all around the world are on the verge of extinction. Some say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All around the world, there are various types of animals that are endangered. Some say that nations and people should preserve them from dying out, whereas others believe that we need to be more concious on the human being problems. This essay will demonstrate why it is essential to balance both animals and humans by making this planet a better place to live, with a lucid conclusion.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. do you think it is a positive or negative development ?

Nowadays, small businesses are getting replaced by bigger shopping malls. From my perspective, it has both positive and negative impacts.

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Essay type:Discussion Theme: Some people feel that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is a better in the countryside.

It is widely argued that city life is more comfortable, however, others opine that living suburbs is better. Although, while living in a city is beneficial for people, countryside inhabitants live more interesting life.

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“Some people believe that exercise is the key to good health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important

While it is believed by some people that exercise is an essential part of a healthy life, others think that having a balance food intake is the key. In my opinion, both exercise and balanced diet are needed for a healthy living, as their effects are synergistic.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

A growing number of people are adopting modern technology to socialise.however ,there are predominantly two contrasting views. Where a section of society claims that the use of the internet has brought people together. While others emphasize that people and communities have become more isolated than before.I personally believe that advancement in technology surely brings people closer.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is considered by some that taking risks is impeartive in both personal and professional facets. From my standpoint, although there are merits from from accepting risks, I advocate that a lot of drawbacks may happen alongside outweigh the prositive sides.

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It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or this agree

These days, understanding how people lived in the past is crucial for gaining insights into history and culture. While films and video records offer a superior means of learning about the past, I would argue that written materials should have traditionally been the primary source of information and considered more valuable.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. What are the most serious problems associated with obesity and what solutions can you suggest?

It is undeniable that nowadays in developed countries have been facing an overweight problem, especially in many young people. in the following paragraphs, causes and some sensible solutions for this issue will be outlined.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? What measure can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Car helps mobility for some people, especially in urban areas. It will be easier too to work with a car than with public transportation because we can start driving from home to the office without jumping into another kind of transportation. Not only that, we can freely decide the destination from where we are.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others fell that having a balanced diet it's more important.

It is widely argued that exercises is more useful for health, however others opine that balanced diet is better. Although while activities key to health, well balanced diet is good.

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Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

In recent years, the amount of food that is thrown away uneaten has increased, achieving a great deal of media attention. Given that food waste has far-reaching effects, both nationally and globally, identifying the reasons behind it is key to finding the solutions.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important for children's development as other subjects so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree.

I disagree with the above statement that art classes, such as painting and drawing are as essential for a kid's development as other subjects therefore, they should not be compulsory in high school.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In recent decades, people have become more interested in historical stories of the buildings where they stay. There are several preconditions for this trend and various methods are used to find the stories behind people's houses or buildings.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Some people tend towards buying a branded products which are made up on a large scale by watching advertisements and marketing than choosing local goods.This leads to various consequences such as regional individuals will lose employment ,and the equipment will gradually disappear.By promoting awareness regarding the importance of property which are made by natives.

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Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.

It is true that young generation have some issues when they live in developed cities. This can be attributed to several consequences, which can require possible solution to be adopted

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some prisoners after completed their sentence, they become noble citizen in society. It is often argued that these people can be work as a deterrent from dangerous activity to youngsters. I agree idea that allowing such people speaking to the teenagers about their experience is the best way to discourage them from breaking a law. In this essay, further I will explain this with several reasons.

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Unversities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Some people claim that in each university major should be the same number of male and female students. I completely oppose this idea because, otherwise lots of people that pass their entrance exams successfully will not get into the univerity and the students that were accepted, probably will not be able to change their major due to this reason.

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Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyse the possible reasons and provide your suggestion ?

Nowadays,there is no doubt that resources depletion has increasingly become evident , water resources depleting throughout the world . In this essay , I will discuss many potential causes that play role in minimizing them and I also prepare my proposal on this issue ．

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