IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 751

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The lone chart below information on the satisfaction with education system in five different countries from 2010 to 2010.

The line graph provides data about how the height of satisfaction with the education system in Australia, Japan, Germany, Brazil and the USA changed, over a 20-year period, starting from 1990.

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Not long ago, people stored information in books. These days, people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The rise of the internet has revolutionized the way people store and access knowledge. While traditional books were once the primary source of advice, the internet has become the go-to platform for learning, research, and communication. However, like any technological advancement, the shift from books to the internet has both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, we will explore these pros and cons to determine whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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mojdeh, 10:03 AMSome people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In these days, experiencing other countries is an interesting activity among young people. There are two main ways to do this: traveling abroad and watching TV and the internet. Many people said that visiting other nations is abundant because TV and the internet provide all the information you need.

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The United Nations recently celebrated its 70th anniversary. What benefits has it brought during this time? Do you think the UN will last another 70 years?

UN, this giant international organization has been established since the end of the second world war and in recent years it has become a mature 70-year-old elderly creature. From more than half of the century, this global association has been trying to resolve national conflicts peacefully and expand welfare, health and tranquility all around the world. In this essay, firstly the advantages of UN existence will be counted and then we will shed light on remaining of this organization in the future of current modern world.

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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texted more?

Humans never stop travelling worldwide when they have a chance to do so. Given the fact that economy is getting better and travel is getting easier with plane, the numbers of flights for all kinds of purpose have been seen increasingly worldwide over recently. In this essay, I will outline the main benefits and drawbacks of flight increment and explain why flight test must be done more regularly.

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Some people say football players who have talent are the best. Others say players who learn the skill are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion

This essay argued that sportsmen have special abilities in the sport. ,,However some of them also think also need more soft skills are encourage their aims soon as possible. I strongly agreed with the suggestions completely with both are important for every player and their team while these are the crucial points important for our team can win without any commitments.

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Students at school and universities learn more from teachers than other sources. Do you agree or disagree?

Students are the future generation who can shape our nation. Now a days there are a lot more changes in aour academics. This is for the betterment and success of the wards. It is often argued that pupils at educational institutions gain an extra knowledge from the lecturers than any other materials. I partially agree with the statement and the reasons are being substantiated in the paragraphs below.

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Some people believe that online study is more effective that on campus while others disagree. Discuss both the disadvantages and advantages of online study.

Some people believe that online study is more effective than on campus when this method becomes popular. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.

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Some people believe that online study is more effective that on campus while others disagree. Discuss both the disadvantages and advantages of online study

It is certainly true that studying online is more effective. While accepting that, I believe that Internet learning more likely to have a negative outcomes.

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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medical Professionals should be accountable to teach their clients ways to enhance their health. I agree with the statement fully, as I believe that it is the duty of a doctor to provide rational reasoning as there are many false perceptions being floated on social media regarding health and fitness, plus it's in the best interest of the general public regarding a healthier environment to live in for everyone.

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Some people use the social media to keep up with people and events. Do you think the advantages of this technology outweighs its' disadvantages

Due to modernization,technology is increasing day by day. Nowadays,people use Instagram andFacebook to keep the memory of crowds and events.I personally think the benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages.

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Some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era, every person wants a person in his activity who are with him to spend sphere moment such as in offices and parks opponents believe that personal growth would be kept separate from professional existence . My firm conviction is that community should be extroverts but not share their personal information about families and relatives with colleagues it leads to blackmailing

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Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, a certain segment of individuals thinks fast food companies should not allowed to advertise, while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. In my ,opinion every have the right to advertise. This essay will discuss both sides.

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Some people believe that development of computer has changed the human lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The development of computers, in my opinion, is a big breakthrough in science and in everyday life, as it solves many issues and problems, but the only negative is that computers are the cause of the progression of our laziness and procrastination

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Some People Believe That Professionals Such As Doctors And Engineers Should Be Required To Work In The Country Where They Did Their Training.

Certain professionals have strong desire to emigrate the country they had received their tertiary education. This means that many nations around the world lose experts, such as healthcare workers, who would be beneficial for the society. Although, some people believe that these experts should not have right work overseas so they can contribute to the national economy, I believe that licensed individuals should have freedom to choose wherever they want to work, so that they can have better life standards and career opportunities.

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In their advertising, bussinesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

At this moment, there is a new trend in selling which is some corporations advertise that their items are new. As a way to explain about this, I will try to elucidate why it can exist. Additionally, from my consideration this is not a positive development which will be detailed later.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risk brings many benefits to people characters and improvements and corporations financially. However, there might be some negative impact on people’s lives and occupations. As far as I am concerned, taking a step which is resulted in unknow result still should be taken.

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Technology is being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Technology has been considered an asset and an innovative tool in education. It gives new platforms for students to learn information in an innovative way where they can see and listen to information rather than traditional classroom teachings. It has also provided wide learning opportunities like online learning platforms.

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“A Thousand Spledid Suns” is published in 2007 by Afghan American author Khaled Hossein. This is a story about two women who believe in a little hope and try to stay strong despite being oppressed by history, culture and violence in Afghanistan, a country that still has a male-dominated mindset due to its faith and culture.

The number of people who are moving to a different country from their native place. While some people believe that they should follow the customs and traditions if they come other nations to live, I partially agree with this idea. It is important to know the habits and follow them but it should not be your first priority because it might take your identity away.

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some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertainment and ecological important. Discuss both views.

One of the social concerns today relates to the problem keep animals in zoos. While it is commonly suggested that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, others believe zoos are both entertainment and ecologically important (In my opinion, when animals are in zoos, it will protect life safety and the development of everything.

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