IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 753

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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All over the world societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. Obesity affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How can it be tackled?

For over the last two or three decades, more and more people are being suffered from over-weighting all around the world. There has been a boombing rate in the enhance of obesity especially among youngsters. This esaay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.

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Some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Attention to history is a growing trend for different communities around the world since the invention of the writing. People who can read and write easily access the older information especially the history about their cities by these abilities. In some countries, bigger communties are curious about the history of the properties or buildings they live in over time. Increased demand on historical places or their unique structure may related this issue.

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

Technological achievements have made a lot of stuff much more easily accessible and cheaper to get your hands on. This also affected the fields containing intellectual property and its creators. In this essay I will be discussing literature and music industries and how nowadays technology has made it much simpler to download it without paying for the product and expressing my point of view, positives and negatives of this change.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is claimed that tourists ought to be charged more entrance fees than local people while they visit historic places of the country. In my point of view, I could not agree anymore with that since the tourism industry is one of the most important sectors for a country.

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternaive to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a ppositive or negative development?

Education is a key to success and a right that should be entitiled to everyone. Recently, some universities have applied online courses instead of face-to-face lectures. Personally, I believe that this is a possitive innovation in educational system.

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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can not get any advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do agree or disagree?

There are some who who believe that the airline services can only afford by the people who are financially sound and the common people will not get benefits from the progression or that system. In my prospective, it bought equal opportunities for every one in terms of cheap air tickets and affordability.

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some people believe that social media plays an important role in our lives. Some say that social media is not important to our lives..... discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that social networks are important in our lives. and some say we don't need it. Today, the role of social networks is important. In this essay, I will analyze the above arguments and give my opinion. ..........

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If all workers in a company were paid exact same wage regardless of job role there would be much more harmony and cooperation between staff. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Parents usally consider to be violent to teach children to be disciplined.They find the effective way to teach discipline to their children by physical punishment. This essay will discuss why Smacking children is absolutly not fine to teach them discipline.

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In some countries, fastfood restaurant and supermarket give money to school to promote their products.do you think this is a positive development or negatively development?

In certain regions of the world ,it is becoming a trends that shopping mall and fastfood facility now give incentive to educational institution to advertise their goods.In my perfective ,I think this is a negative development because most of these places promote some unhealthy practices like excessive junks which can cause long term illness to these children.

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In some countries some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying thier own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place.

Nowadays in few nations certain individuals are leasing living homes, while others are purchasing thier personal apartments. I strongly disagree that renting accommodation is better than purchasing one because purchasing accommodation promotes stability and peace of mind and also generate money.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. how might having a lot of money make people happy? what other things in life make poeple happy?

Many individuals opine that a direct route of happiness is wealth.People who have a lot of money can have more comfortable life than the ones who does not have. However, there are other things in life which is more important then money and give individual satisfaction and helps to create happiness in life.

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University students must pay all costs associated with their education, because it benefits mostly them individually rather than the whole society as whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Tertiary pupils should pay all fees which are associated with their academics as it benefits mostly them individually instead of the nation. I agree with the given notion up to a large extent ,but I also opine that it would benefit to the nation as well. Which will be elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that while applying for the job, salary is a matter, which means salary is the most crucial factor to be considered. However, other people think that there are so many things to be prioritized rather than money. In my point of view, even though money is important, there are so many more valuable things than that.

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Nowadays many people choose to be slef employed rather than to work for a company or organisation.why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

Money is an inevitable factor in our life. Now more and more people are rely on self-employment rather than work for a company or organization. This essy analyses the reason for increasing numbers of self-employment and its downsides. My point of view regarding abovementioned statement explained in the following paragraph.

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Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It’s argued that modern inventions have made our society more disengaged although others claim that it has deepened human relationships. This essay will discuss both points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Being a celebrity such as famous film star are sport personality bring problems as well as benefits.

Famous people like a movie stars and sports athletes have a luxurious benefit however, there can also be determined. It seems to be me that pros or more than its cons. I will articulate my pinpoints in a up coming paragraph

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some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. what might be the result for this? what are the advantages and disadvantages?

Several individuals prefer to reside in their birthplace. Their can be plenty of reasons to stay with their family for instance they would like to have their comfort life. In this essay I will be discussing about the advantages and disadvantages of residing with your family and friend near you.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject at school, while some think that it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are people with the opinion that art is really an important course at school whereas others believe that it is a time waste. In my view, I concur that art must be taught at school even though some people have different opinions.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.*

It has been observed that many individuals channel their money on celebrations in the family whereas some individuals assume that it is a waste of money. This essay will discuss both sides with relevant examples.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Friendship is the only unconditional relationship in people's life as they are not obliged towards each other but still can rely on one another. Many argued that people should make friends with those, who have similar views, while others opine that people who have different opinions or do not always agree will be good friends. I will articulate both notions with a plausible explanation prior to giving my opinion.

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