IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 753

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum.

It is argued that who repsonsible to make sure children get enough regular exercise. Some believe that parents is responsible for to ensure that children play sports rather than schools. I totally disagree with the statement, because I think the school have porfessionals in sports and sports facilities.

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Technology has caused the death of traditional skills and ways of life. It is pointless to ensure their survival. Do you agree or disagree?

The advancement brought about by technology has lead to the abandonment of traditional memes and cultures. Therefore, it continues to be controversial if our traditional heritage should be saved and I strongly agree to this because of the positive effects it has had on the each individual and the society at large which I will discuss in this essay.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars. Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds: Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of 'fairness' is not the issue. Those who feel that sports stars' salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a pers...

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did. Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation. But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families...

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Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Watching television is an activity that most of children enjoy it in the morning or at night before going to the bed. Eating breakfast while watching TV also become a habit for many children. Meanwhile, a lot of children also play video games after dinner in the night or until midnight.

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Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

There is no doubt these days, many different kinds of food come from other countries around the world. The question is, Why has this phenomenon started to be a trend? In this essay, I am going to describe the positive and negative things of this trend.

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some people say that that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.other people think that advertining is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinoin

Some say that adversiting have great manipulation for people to persuade them to buy thing which they do not need, while other think that people do not pay attention on advertising anymore. Even though, teenagers siting in the instagram/twiter/facebook seeing every time advert and not more interest in them, adult could be need it this.

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It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a tv, and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such a development outweigh the advantages.

It is irrefutable that more and more people are running after materialistic things like cars, television and refrigerators. While there are a few benefits of this materialism, I believe that benefits are much more.

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In some societies, obesity is regarded as a major problem. Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned. However, others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity and should not be banned. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, obesity has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present scenario. While Proponents of the arguments are in favor, even though, the opponents are against the food culture in the world. In this essay, we will discuss about the causes of junk food.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

it has become increasingly common for some countries have legal ages at which people can drink . Other countries believe not have strict laws against drinking alcohol . But , I think we need to be better to avoid wrongdoing and risk this . In an essay , we will discuss this problem.

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time,and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?

The majority of people across the world, choose wealth over well-being. However, this makes people have to spend more time and did not really have time to spend with their family or take a break. This essay will discuss the causes and the possible solutions for this phenomenon.

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some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a growing argument regarding whether to teach students all subjects at school or to teach only certain subjects they are in fact have interest in. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion in the matter.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage

Nowadays, the development of technology is becoming increasingly popular. This gradually changes the activities which children do in their free time. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend. I believe that these are outweighed by advantages.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school progerammes (for example woking for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To What extend do you agree or disagree?

It is said that doing community service, free of charge, is needed to be included in high school corriculum. Voluntary charity contribution, neighborhood improvement, and training the youngsters are among the possible options. I, by and large, stand against both compulsory and charitable aspects of the proposal and here are my reasoning.

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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is little room for doubt that tourism is one of the fastest-growing industries in the world. However, its impact on culture remains a source of constant debate. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects of tourism from a cultural perspective. Providing economic incentives for cultural preservation is unarguably one of the main contributions of tourism. To many tourists, culture and history are what they first consider when choosing a destination. Their mindset has been recognised by many tourism sites and money has been subsequently directed toward cultural protection, including the maintenance of key historical sites. Tourism is therefore one of the primary forces contributing to the preservation of a culture. In addition to raising financing, tourism can make an indigenous culture known to the world and rally support worldwide to protect it. When a historic site or a site that shows a country's cultural heritage is made accessible to the public,...

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In some countries people rent accommodation while other buy their own houses. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages than buying place?

In certain nations, individuals opt to lease housing while others opt to purchasing their own residences. I personally find renting a space for living purpose to be more convenient and flexible for people who are busy at work. I am going to provide some of my opinons below.

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Most countries allow 18 year old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow driving at that age. Others think that the age of start driving should be at least 25 years. Discuss both views.

These days, teenagers are allowed to get driving license at the age of eighteen in most territories. Some support this rule while others consider that this certificate should be given to youths at the Middle-aged twenties. In this essay, I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions.

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Many students Around The World are not choosing science subjects at University, give reason for that and what are impact on the community?

There are different science subjects at a university all around the world, however, many students do not enroll science majors. These individuals may believe that science graduates have no chance to apply high-salary jobs or they have to contunie their educations for differentiation from their counterparts. These actions have some consequences on the society such as fewer scientists and tutors in universities.

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Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their choosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what is your opinion, should be done about it?

Nowadays,more and more people trying new , enjoyable and dangerous activites instead of old and common hobbies such as playing football . These activities have more stugle and that is what peoples want it . However , is the development positive , or are there more drawbacks than advantages. In this essay , I will look at the reasons of triying challing activities and I will give my own opinion about development .

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Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this? What other skills do you think it is important to be taught in schools.

Nowadays, self-confidence raising schemes is expected to be implemented in educational platforms. Enormous plans should be desigend to make schoolchildren give presentations. This is because to enhance trainees public-related abilities and there are a variety of other Intelligence activities like vocational Programs. In this essay, I will answer both questions relevantly.

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