IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 760

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right or wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the pedagogy ecosystem, there is a hotly debated topic which is the teacher's responsibility. Some societies argue that educators should train their learners in simple philosophy as a way to select perfect determinations, while others advocate they should focus on academics. As a way to address this issue, I will detail both paradigms in the following paragraphs and explain why the first notion is preferable than the second idea.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Unhealthy life-style is becoming the vast majority of healthy issues these days, especially in kids. Many kids these days have an unhealthy lifestyle, so education programs and parents are in charge of finding this problem. I do agree that responsibility has been done with both of them and I would explain with some following reasons.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives ad their personal lives. Do you thing the advaatges of taking risks outweigh the disadvanatges?

Taking risks are really vital for people either for their personal lives or their work lives. I believe that the negative effects to take risks are greater than positive ones. However, this is depend on what in stages people’s life, the younger the better people taking risks. This essay will describe about this issue further.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today, people need to work so that they earn/make money to survive, to buy things they need and to achieve their dream careers. I think that some people prefer working for the same organization while others like working for various/diverse organizations. Working for the same organization or different ones offers their own advantages and drawbacks.

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Some people think that space exploration can benefit humans in a number of ways. Others think that it has several drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that space exploration can benefit humans in many aspects.Others think that it has a number of drawbacks.In my opinion,I believe that it has many benefits to space exploration.

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Many people think that money is important to achieve happiness. What is the importance of money to happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

Many people believe that to be happy, one needs to have a massive amount of money. While money is essential for survival, it is not necessary to achieve happiness. Happiness is a state of mind closely connected to the well-being of the people we love.

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More and more companies are allowing employee to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development

The pandemic period has changed our lives in many ways. Noticeably, working is not only limited to the offices anymore and most companies focus on practising work from home. In my opinion, this is a positive trend as businesses could save heaps of money that is being spent on the buildings and employees could task at their ease and flexibility.

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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and give any relavent examples from your own knowledge or experienc.

Large number of people thought that internet was the biggest innovation to human's effortless life in whole time. I strongly agree that specially after COVID pandemic time, it helped a lot for educational and business field as well as employment.

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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basic of modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respects for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this modern epoch, our society considers thinking for themselves only and being greedy is the major Operandi. However, it's our core responsibility to give back to our culture and tradition by respecting the community in order to maintain harmony around the globe is the thinking of some folk. Although every human is into running in the global race and following the trend which is being spread worldwide, the values of ethics are fading away which will not be available to the future generation if not preserved. I completely agree with this viewpoint and there any many reasons which will be discussed below.

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Some people said they can learn something from the travelling , and some people said no, discussing the both sides

It is a common belief that people’s arguments about learning from their traveling. People prefer to learn about culture, new knowledge or history by traveling aboard, especially from the family with kids. They believe that it could be explored by visiting different kinds of museums, traditional buildings, and participating in their festivals activities. And a group of people with opposite opinions.

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modern form of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their frieds. this has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most predominant trends of today's contemporary world is a colossal upsurge in electronic communication. There is a school of thought which says that

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In recent year, online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomeneon? Use specific details and examples to explain your opinion.

An advancement in technology provides many benefits in many fields, especially in education. Distance learning is an outstanding example that shows the performance of high technology. Nowadays, many people are taking more online courses due to the convenience. It also has its own drawbacks. Thisthis essay will discuss both sides.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many prepared food and beverage goods include high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should increase the cost of that types of goods. Sugar can be beneficial to some people however sugar can be dangerous which is for sugar dieters.

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The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?

There are those who think that deciding stricter punishments against accidents on pathways is only a method to reduce car crimes. In my opinion, I partially disagree with this view, and the reason will be elaborated in enlisted paragraphs.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that the depictions of glamorous lifestyles of the high profile figures are flooding in the internet. Although some of those celebrities set positive role models for young people, I believe that ,others, on the contrary, mislead them both in thought and behavior by showing.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Depicted in the given plans are the blueprints of the airport in the present day and prophesied appearance after being developed in the upcoming year. Overall, it can be seen that the airport will be massively improved next year.

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In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All over the world, over the recent years, international tourism has become popular and common among individuals. Anyone can go almost anywhere without further difficulties bring a significant amount of financial profit to a host country. As a result, some assume that this phenomenon has also several negative sides as well.

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Many people use distance-learning programs to study at home but some people think that it can't bring the benefit as much as attending college or university.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many humans utilize distance-learning programs to study at home however some individuals assume that it cannot bring thee profit as much as going to college or university.I disagree with this statement.By this essay I intend to analyze many people why prefer distance-learning.

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. To what extent do you agree?

Having a single sources of incomes is considered as a traditional way of living. People are more likely to earns more money from different side hustles which considered as the reasons why education need to become part of lifestyle. This essay will elaborates several reasons why this view is agreeable.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this era, there is a number of companies which almost focus that their products that are new in different methods. in this essay, I intend to explain why it happened. Moreover, I personally believe the positive aspects of this way are far more.

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