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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays many people choose to be self empoyed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

There is no doubt that being self employed has been increasingly popular among today's individuals rather than working for firms or traditional workplaces in recent years. There have been various principal causes of this trendy phenomenon as well; however, some drawbacks shoud be taken into consideration.

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Some people think that schools should focus on academic subjects like algebra, history, and physics, but others think that schools should spend time focusing on practical skills like time management and banking. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Educational system has always been a subject of discussion. There has been a lot of debate going on whether schools should focus on academic subjects or on practical skills. In this essay I will be disputing the beliefs of both sides and expressing my thoughts about this issue.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The statement that "women are better at childcare than men" is a stereotype that has been perpetuated in many cultures. However, this assertion is not based on any scientific evidence or empirical data. While it is true that women have traditionally taken on the role of primary caregiver, this is not because they are inherently better at it, but rather because of social and cultural norms that have reinforced this gender role.

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Some people believe that old buildings should be replaced with more modern ones. Other people argue that we should protect old buildings because they have a special value. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many old buildings are demolished nowadays due to various reasons, the proponents believe that such phenomena could benefit the local areas, be it the improvement of city image, and the prevention of safety hazards. However, I personaly agree that the value of traditional building should not be overlooked, since it could passing down the culture to the next generation.

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The visuals give information about the number of spacecraft launched by various national governments between 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission

The provided charts indicate the amount of spacecraft and the reasons for them being launched by different countries during a 50-year period between 1957 and 2007. Overall, the vast majority of space missions were launched by the Soviet Union/Russia. The main purpose of all the launches was communicating.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The creation of the nature of human women is discipline, sacrificing themselves and doing their job deliberately compare to men .the majority of men are hard and difficult to approach. so it's true ,the women are focusing on raising the children .from the below paragraph I mention

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information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling. etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Modern technology has now changed the world. The world has come so close that you can do anything sitting at any corner of the world in the blink of an eye. I totally agree with the statement that it has its own advantages but in long-term we have to face their cons, too.

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It’s more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that learning at school about local traditions should be preferred to lecturing about world history. Although I agree that educating children to study what occurred to the human beings in general, I think that the school, as public entity, should devote more time to help family into preserving local customs and usages.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Staying in a comfort zone rather than questing for a better life seems guilty or even dull for some youngsters. I believe both sides have their own motives and in the following essay, I would share my insights into these two different opinions and explain why I am sided with the actions of chasing a quality life.

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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child’s education?

Some parents are never content with their children’s academic performances at school, pursuing the remarkable level is their ultimate goal. Children’s mental health and other skills are almost negligible to this type of parents. This phenomenon is especially severe in Asian families.

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Some believe that pupils should be given less homework, others say the opposite. What is your opinion?

It is argued that teachers in school should give less homework to students. In my opinion, the education system must include home assignment, however, nowadays in school there are provided many subjects and many more extra exercises that significantly influence pupils' prosperity.

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

People in some countries consider owning a home to be more important than renting a one. This essay will discuss the main reasons for these preferences and detailed the positive effect.

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ome people believe people can not solve environmental problems. Whereas, others believe in individuals are responsible for solving environmental problems. discuss both views and give your opinion

Our environment is an important part of our existence hence the need to cater for it. While some school of thought believe that the humans who reside in this environ do not have the duty of bringing solutions to environmental challenges, others think that the residents of a particular location have great responsibilities when it comes to taking care of the physical problems of the location.

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Nowadays, there are more and more people suffering from health problems. Why people choose unhealthy lifestyle? How could we resolve this problem?

Health problems, that which are increasing rapidly, the most threatening topic the world faces today. In this 21st century this is a major argument public suffering from fitness diseases and that's increasing more and more day by day also they tending unhealthy lifestyle but first of all we need to understand what is leading to such an argument there some several steps which can be taken to tackle this problem which I will examine in this further essay.

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In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. Do the advantages outweigh the drawbacks

In this contemporary epoch,due to globalisation,it become possible for everyone to buy a wide variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. I deem that the merits of transporting of food in the overall natons are more rather than the demerits such as cheep prices,increase economy and long relationships.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertising plays an important role in a consumer's purchasing. At the same time, this is now one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about, when it comes to it's genuine effectiveness.

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In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. Do the advantages outweigh the drawbacks?

In this contemporary epoch,due to globalisation it become possible of people to have a wide types of foods,which is transported in all over world.I deem that the merits of transport food in the world are more raither than demerits like cheeep products,long term relationship and increase economy.

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Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

Most people in our society believe that womens' role is only to take care of the children and keep the house tidy and clean, while others think that women should get equal chances in the work industry as men. I do believe that women represent half of the society due to the major role they play in our lives.

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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. - explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

I am writing to express my interest in working at our company's headquarters in the United States for a few months to polish my skills and get exposure to the global market trends of our products so that I can better contribute to our company and carry out my responsibilities more efficiently.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child’s development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role.

In recent years, it is widely recognized that media, pop culture and peers are main factors that affect a child's development. While, other people say that family plays a crucial role. This essay will discuss these both points of view.

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