IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 934

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways. Why is that? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the marketing industry nowadays, businesses tend to signify that their goods are new in a wide range of methods. This essay will inform reasons why the marketing strategy is substandard.

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some people think it is more important for government to spend money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Despite the fact that antagonists claim that this character can lead to some problems. In their opinion, a profuse quantity of discipline causes a rebellious personality in an individual. Nevertheless, the research supports a completely opposite conclusion: discipline has a spacious amount of contribution to students as well as teachers to manage properly their physical and mental health. Discipline hones especially teachers to shed stressful scenarios at ease. This indicates that the relationship between the stress of the teacher and the discipline of students is indirectly proportional which means undisciplined students such as drinking drugs and disrespectful behaviour ahead of the instructor trigger the indignation of the teacher. The study conducted by Ferguson, Frost, and Hall (2012) study in Canada shows that student discipline proved to be the main factor of depression among teachers. (Kemunto et al., 2021) What’s more, committing everything in a time interval retains chil...

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Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs. To what extrnt do you agree or disagree with the above opinion? What are the some of the job skills employers look for new employees.

These days, university students ought to provide knowledge and practical skills with their future career benefits. In my opinion, i agree that practical skills are beneficial for students at their factory jobs and there are two other skills in employees that look for employment.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. D you think the avantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

With the modern developments in the medical industry, the expected life of people has been increased considerably, during the last few decades and same is expected to be continued in the future. There are many social and finnancial consequences of increased life expectancy. By looking into these outcomes I believe that possitive affects outweigh the negative affects as described below.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent you agree or disagree to this statement ?

It is a common belief among the public that the authorities should invest more on railways compared to the road network. Although there are pros and cons in both modes of transports, I strongly agree with this statement.

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The development o f tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

As a point of departure, it is a fact that, the English idiom actually is the best way for international communication and make simple networking people also trades and business accessible to many countries not only the United States and anglophone-speaking countries around the world. Another benefit which makes some difference among other languages is the relatively big access, through the internet to learn the idiom, for example, free courses and English programs on YouTube. These are very important references in the business world when you have one only type of communication, between the best part of this process will come globalization ideas an efficient and accessible reality.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different age and culture together . to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Actually, in the entire world, music represents a way of expressing anything about daily life in different cultures also is used in religion and social celebrations, from sad events like funerals to the happiest how brides, the organized sounds by humans are the combination of expressions in our evolution.

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online classes has replaced traditional classroom model. Do you agree or disagree?

The pictures describe the alternations that took place in Willington town between 1780, 1860 and 2000. Overall, the most noticeable change was the removal of all agriculture and woodlands. Additionally, the town had become more residential with rising amenities.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

You do not have to go to another places to learn about the lifestyle of people living in another people. This is can learned from books, films and the internet. This essay I will explore both sides. Then I will give my view.

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Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

A group of people opine that friendship is very important in our life. we cannot think any day without friends and it depends according to their relationship and their characteristics, so I will represent qualities of good friends and factors that affects the relationship, with precise examples and backup my view.

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Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

Although nowadays there are a lot of sport facilieties and easily accessible gyms, the majority of people are less fit than in the past decades. Below I will discuss my point of view, which is the different type of cuisine that we are consuming.

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Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

As M.K. Gandhi earlier said, "The world has enough to offer the man need but insufficient to the man greed". Our planet currently consists of fossil fuel reserves that could last up to 50 years at the current consumption level. If we optimise and maximise renewable resources we could fulfil the energy needs till mankind's survival. In contrast to renewable resources, the consumption of fossil fuels would lower mankind's life as increased carbon emissions lead to the melting of icebergs, and this could hugely disturb the water cycle, and further severe the climate change issues we are facing today. As our population increases, our annual energy demands also increase. This not only limits energy demands, but also our food and drinking water demands.

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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly argued that despite the increase in the number of people reading online news, the most essential source of news will still be newspaper for most people. Personally, I would argue this idea as newspaper will be the main source of new; however, producing too many papers can lead to several drawbacks on trees. There are compelling reasons as to why traditional newspapers will still be used by a big number of people regarding the easy way which we can use it and the low expenditure.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Agree or disagree ?

Prison is deemed to play a crucial role in addressing the problem of crime in countries. Arguments have persisted as education should enhance dealing with criminal problems. Whilst there are convincing rationales on both sides, I strongly agree that the better education is, the decrease in crime

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Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a school of thought that jailing criminals in prison does not have many positive effect. Instead of that, they should attend education and job training courses. Personally, I would argue against this idea since without being punished bad people will not know what they have done is not allowed.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

All countries should have a free treatment, even if new treatments are not available because they are too expensive. I agree with this statement. Medical treatment should always be available to everyone.

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Some people believe that the only purpose for anyone to learn a second language is to travel or work abroad, Others argue that this is not only purpose why someone needs to learn a second language.

Nowadays, the ability to communicate in a foreign language is a valuable asset for people from all walks of life to function effectively in a globalised world. While many choose to study an additional language for occupational and recreational purposes, others do so with different aspirations. This essay discusses a range of reasons why second language learners choose to advance their linguistic proficiency.

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Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport?

Many people choose to use the public mode of transportation rather than private vehicles. Both have advantages and disadvantages, but I intend to talk only about the public transport.

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The worldwide population of children aged 15 and younger is rising. What are the current and future advantages and disadvantages for countries with this kind of growth?

The proportion of youth who are 15 years old and below has risen recently around the world in the recent years. There are some benefits and drawbacks regarding it which I will examine those properly in this essay.

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Some people argue that techonological inventions, such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive. Do agree or disagree?

Many people believe that electronic devices like smartphones are causing people to be less social. There are some definite pros and cons to this statement.

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