IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 934

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are the causes for this What solutions can you suggest

Stress-related diseases are becoming increasingly serious in many nations. Although, stress-related diseases threaten the society. Its effect can be compacted successfully. This essay looks at some of the reasons that cause stress-related diseases and some of the possible solutions.

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, the society has significantly altered in criminal sphere, the number of illegal activities have increased as well. The following paragraphs will be separated into two, the first will look for major culprits such as rising of population and unacceptable content in America; while the second observes workable solutions as changing schools’ program and strict laws.

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The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

In some people's mind, the trend of legalizing gay marriage has adverse effects on the society, but others think that it seems to be a natural trend and right for people to have this type of marriage. I believe that gay marriage should be legal for the following reasons.

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Many children are encoraged by their parents to get a part time. What are the advantages and disadvantage to children of doing so?

At present it is not surprising when you meet children who are motivated to get a part-time job by their parents. And this situation can have both pros and cons and in the following paragraphs both of them will be discussed.

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Nuclear energy is better than other sources of energy to meet the increasing need. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nuclear power is a very debated topic in every convention and has always been questioned for the bad it does rather than its good. In my opinion, nuclear power needs to be used, and the user should also be controlled and hedged with renewable energy sources as they are the only viable solution.

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Some people think that activities during the free-time should be planned while others disagree. Discuss both sides and include examples and relevant data from your own experience.

It has long been argued that leisure time should be pre-planned or not. Certain people believe that creating outlines for sphere time is mandatory while other thinks that it should go in flow. In this context, I hold my opinion to pre-planning that helps to spend a productive holiday. Here, the following paragraphs intends to highlight the advantages of pre outling along with examples.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. Do you agree or disagree?

Parenthood is a journey which every human being would like to be a part of and the joy which a couple relishes when they become parents is unexplainable. While we all find kids adorable, child-rearing is a daunting task ,especially in a nuclear family setting. Due to the lack of experience of new parents in such situations, I see a genuine need for childcare training.

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In some countries, governments encourage businesses to move outside of the cities to solve the problems of housing and transport in the cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?

Nowadays, the constantly increasing population of big cities rises a lot of issues for their government. In these conditions some of the local politics implement policy that stimulatates companies to relocate their businesses outside the cities. This measure has its advantages and disadvantages, and in my opinion, benefits outweigh.

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Some people believe that everyone has the right to receive university education，so the government should make it free to all people regardless of their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has long been argued that higher education should be subsidised or not. Certain people believe that if universities provide free education, it might result in economic and social development while in other's opinion, individuals should bear the cost of further education as it negatively effects annual budget of a developing or underdeveloped country. In this context, I family believe that higher studies should be paid attention by the authority along with primary and secondary education.

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many cities have serious problem of trafic congestion. what are the causes of this trend and what are some solutions.

it is certainly true that urban areas face critical conditions of road jams. after providing a careful analysis of why the problem has risen sharply in this world. i shall suggest a number of ways to tackle the problem.

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Some people think immigrants should accept the new culture as their own. Others believe that they should keep their own culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

PROFILE: Early childhood educator who is hardworking and dependable. I'm eager to use my education and experience to make a big difference in early childhood growth and education. HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION AND SKILLS: • Self-directed, resourceful, and enthusiastic professional with a genuine interest in fostering students’ cognitive and social growth • Skilled in the design of developmentally appropriate, enriching, innovative and hands-on activities, and lessons to meet social and emotional needs of children • Strong passion for literacy, motivation, and inspiration to create a fun and challenging learning environment with strong connections to community • Ability to actively communicate and collaborate with all levels of staff to ensure an optimum environment for students • Capability to adapt to children with special needs within the classroom and curriculum • Excellent verbal and written communication skills • Multilingual: English, Punjabi, and Hindi EXPERIENCE:...

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The bar chart illustrates how much annual sales have changed in different global items, which include games software, DVD/video and CDs between 2000 and 2003. Units are measured in billions.

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Watching a live performance such as a play concert or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some kinds of events like a concert or sporting events are less pleasurable when you are watching them somewhere on TV than watching those performances lively. I believe there are superior reasons which make live shows more enjoyable than TV ones.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sport activities as they give to the university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

It is difficult to understand how much cash universities should give for different activities. In my humble opinion, this educational institution should allow having more money for sports because they are more important for younger, who already study on their own. In fact, sports are useful for body and growth.

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Computers have changed the way people study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computers as study aids?

In today's perpetually transforming epoch , due to advancement of technology , people has become technosavvy around the globe.As a consequences , the way of study of people have been changed by computers.I beleive that these phenomenon has both advantages and disadvantages which I have discussed in the impending subdivisions.

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Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

In the present age, many parents prefer to instruct their children at home rather than send them to educational institutions. This action has a lot of disadvantages, but it has certain benefits too. However, from my perspective, these advantages cannot overshadow the drawbacks.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both shools and parents are resposible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Today, the vast majority of young generations do not follow a healthy style of life. Many people believe that not only parents but also schools are accountable in order to resolve this concern. My opinion about this idea probably falls somewhere in the middle, since the children often are not able to control their behavior and distinguish what is advisable for them, but more depends on their self-awareness about something wrong. This essay goes into details of both approaches.

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In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of extreme or adventure sports?

Nowadays, extreme sports have become popular ,especially since footage or snaps of videos of people who are into these activities are widely featured on social media. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this type of game.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is the best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education plays a significant role in every child's life. And it begins with the help of schooling. But few masses argue that homeschooling, is the better option for pupils .others , believe that there is a beneficial way of education formed in schools which is important to them. I will discuss both views with their

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, technological advancement in our society has done a significant improvement in our people's lives and especially monitoring systems. several individuals claimed that because of technology our life has been compromised we are in open exposure to danger while other argue that there are plenty of benefits. I believe that the benefits of the monitoring system eclipse its drawbacks.

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