IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 931

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Smartphone is the simplest mode of connecting with family, friends, and consumers too. Due to advance technologies, mobile engineers had made it possible for people to get in touch with loved ones and clients through cell phones. Because of this, there is drastic change in demand of phones. However, there are detrimental effects of possessing mobile phones. These concerns could cause financially and physically to the community. Undoubtedly, having a phone could be advantageous for the people, but there are some demerits of using phone constantly.

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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors, engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own. opinion.

The workplace is an important part of every working person’s life. Some people say experts (doctors and engineers) must work in the nation where they did their training from, whereas others argue that they should be free to work in any country they want. This essay will look at both these point of view and argue in favor of the latter.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT MEN ARE NATURALLY MORE COMPETITIVE THAN WOMEN.

It is true that men have more physical strength and vitality as compared to women. However, nowadays women have stronger empowerment than men. I strongly disagree with the given statement and I will explain my point of view in further paragraphs.

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Some people believe that the lives of people from their children's generation will be better than their own. Others believe that their lives will be worse. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

The discussion on whether children's lives are better than those of previous generations is an important one in today's world. In this essay, I will present two arguments that support the belief that children's lives are better than their own.

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Some people say that the government should stop TV and Newspaper from showing crimes because media coverage of violent crimes is frightening people and encouraging criminals. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In the present day, with the development of technology, we have been offered several means like TV, the internet, magazine and newspaper to update us about information worldwide. And having broadcasted the breach scenes is a controversial topic as the violence can be frightening to viewers or promoting people to commit crimes. I'm inclined to agree with the mentioned opinion as there is another perspective. I will discuss both opinions in the essay with suitable examples.

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Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

Many think that the public concerns and resources granted to wildlife conservation are being more than necessary. However, I do not concur with this point of view as thousands of animals and birds out there are still facing the threat of being erased from the Earth every year.

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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree or disagree?

Universities from nowadays are well-known for providing a lot of activities and services to their students. In that context, some would say that these educational institutions have to allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. In my opinion, both items are crucial in terms of academic life, but I think that libraries need to be prioritized.

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Some people think that products should be made to last as long as possible, while others believe making the products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that goods should be made as durable as possible; however, some folks think that inexpensive products are more desirable. Although both of the views have their own advantages, in my opinion, companies should always try to justify the cost of items with their quality.

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The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produces positive effects to everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Globalization has been a radical process which has changed the international and national economies. In that sense, during last decades we have been seeing an expansion of multinational companies and the increase of this intertwined economical network from all over the world. In this context, I think that the international growth of this trademarks does not have positive effects, especially in developing countries.

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Some people believe that in order to reduce crime, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.

It is a controversial topic to be discussed, some people argue that we should punish criminals with long prison sentences and it will lead to diminish the crime rate. While I agree that law-breakers should face the result of their atrocities, I do not support this idea, I do believe that there are many active alternatives to accomplish this.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest threat faced by humanity at the present time. Do you agree or disagree?

The increasing overpopulation is the biggest threat faced by human beings today. This essay totally agrees with that statement because of the serious depletion of natural resources and pollution.

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Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue

It is often argued that consuming junk food is one of major causes of making people, especially younger ones stick to unhealthy lifestyle. I am firmly in favour of this notion and highlight what may trigger this matter in the following essay.

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Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?

This is a reality that someone whom everyone knows, makes too much money. Some segments believe that this trend put a positive impact on normal people's life. I disagree with this statement to a large extent and I will elaborate on it in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

A number of people believe that almost all educational centres ought to allow their students to learn whatever they want whlie others think that it is beneficial for them to learn subjects when they are adolescents to achieve a vivid future career. From my point of view, children would be able to gain a better educational experience if they start learning from early years of their life and this essay will discuss both viewpoints in a depth.

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Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

●Discipline is one of the growing problems in modern schools. Some think that discipline teachers should be more responsible, while others think that parents have a big role in making their children polite and disciplined. I think it mostly depends on the parents

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that youngsters who use a computer on a daily basis can have negative effects rather than positive ones. While I personally agree with this point of view, I believe that some benefits of computers are still useful.

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Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?

There are many people who think that the main cause of unhealthy lifestyle is people’s tendency to consume fast food, especially young people. Although junk food is partly responsible for this problem, in my opinion there are some other reasons which are leading to unhealthy way of life.

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Today many people do not realise how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the nature world?

Nowadays a lot of people do not comprehend the importance of the natural world. However, it is a fact that over the years the technologies developed and people have more abilities to improve our environment but it does not happen. Perhaps, it is connected with other social problems of modern people, that is for someone the problems with finances and relationships more crucial than global issues of our planet. In this essay I will explain why is this so and how to fix this situation.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as a human, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including use for foods and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Animals are the basic need and essential part of society. Most individuals argue that animals right are the same as humans as well as they are not exploited by folks. On the other hand, a group of people say that animals are only used for food and research and to fulfil other needs of mankind.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, agriculture sector is growing day by day with a lot of advancements despite numerous people across all the nations have to face hunger in large amounts. So, in the forthcoming, paragraphs I will discuss why this problem is faced by a large number of individuals and apart from that, what can be done to solve these issues.

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