IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 99

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Nowadays people tend to listen to different types of music. In my opinion, music has many benefits to people and traditional music is a significant type of music which we should encourage.

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It is a good thing for people in senior management positions to get a higher salary than other workers in the same company.

For people who are in top management positions, they get paid more than other employees of the same company. I completely agree with this perspective because it will lead to positive outcomes for the componey. like increased order and productivity in terms of the company's efficiency and performance. Addintionally, getting salaries should be baside mannegers' knowlege and talents.

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celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. to what extend do you agree and disagree?

Young people often get some motivation by what they are watching to, unfortunately, media nowadays often shares unnecessary news. Most of the time, media talks about news which come from celebrities and bring up their glamour lifestyle. Media does not highlight the other positive side, such as achievements, so young people do not really aware about it. In this essay, I will examine the dangerous of this behavior.

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Some Countries habe become much richer than others.Richer countries should now heip poorer countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Rick countries should help the poor countries and there should not be any disagreement on this.

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Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a Business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family?

Taking family members while having a business trip is one of the options for some people because it prevents them to feel stressed. Meanwhile, accompanied by families to abroad can lead them to have additional distraction on their business trip due to family matters.

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Many people nowadays change career more frequently than ever before while others stick to a single job. What are the advantages and disadvantages of changing career?

Changing career become more often in this modern world nowadays. People tend to switch their careers rather than stay in one job for a long time. There are some possible advantages and dissadvantages that this essay will elaborate more below.

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Some people say that the increasing use of smartphones and other mobile devices has led to a rise in technology addiction. They argue that this is a serious problem that needs to be addressed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

There is saying that the rise of smartphones user and other gadget devices has lead to an addiction in technology that arguably becomes a challenge that need to be addressed. I disagree with this statement because the advancement in using technology not only a mere of addiction but can be a tool for increasing nation's economic growth.

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Women and men are commonly seens as having different strengths and wekanesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professiions because of their gender?

Naturally, we as a human should being grateful for all the things that we have, like our firm body structure and great mind. Although, there are some differences if we talk about body strengthness and mind greatness between men and women. This essay will outline that differences and give some example for why we need to exclude or only include one gender for typical jobs.

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In some countries, some tend to rent a house for accommodation, while other people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disdvantages than buying a house?

Some individuals in some countries, prefer to stay in a rent accommodation, while others want to buy their own house. I personally believe that benefits of staying in a rent do not outweigh the drawbacks because in the tenanacy agreement, there are some restrictions of leading a life of someone's own.

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledger or experience.

Gender commonly become the main differences in this society nowadays. However, many professions assumed that women and men have the same strengths and weaknesses in general. I strongly disagree if there are any professions that only suitable for a particular gender and the reasons.

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Some people believe that Professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish discuss both these weeds and give your own opinion

In modern days, some people have the belief that professionals like doctors and engineers should be free to work in any country that they want; meanwhile, others think that they should be able to work only in that country where they did their training. I think that all professionals should have an opportunity to earn more money in more developed places.

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Traditional medicine, such as acupuncture and herbal remedies, is very popular in some countries. Those who practise traditional medicine claim it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

In some parts of the world, traditional medicine practioners claimed to have better result in curing illness than modern medicine, such as doctors, leading to high popularity. I personally disagree with this statement and I will elaborate more in this essay.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Advertisement is assumed as one of the most important aspect of business, its end goal is to increase their sales. However, the over advertisement has led user to have less attention to it, while the others feel it is encourage them more. In this essay, I will explain both views and why I think it is failed to achieve its end goal.

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These days in some countries an increasing number of young adults are choosing their whole weekends inside homes. Why do you think it is happening ? Is this a positive or negative development?

In modern era, adolecents from various countries seem to choose spending their weekends on homes rather than go somewhere to enjoy their vacation. It is happening as an impact of sophisticated technology particularly smartphones. Moreover, I believe that this is a downside of negative development.

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in many countries today, crime novels and tv crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. why do you things these tv shows and books are popular what is your opinion of crime fictions and tv dramas

It is a fact that crime novels and TV crime dramas are having more audience worldwide, due to their capacity to hook the reader and the realism and real facts that are invove in the histories. Althought are a public interest, I believe they should be baned. the essay will argue this, and I will provide my opinion.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first months after the birth of their babies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many nations, females are allowed to take maternity leave from their works during several months after giving birth. I believe that it has adventages outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to them. Discuss both the views and give ur opinion.

the Ad helps to buy things for the population while Success of business. A large number of people say that Advertising, advertising, advertising is a key others think that advert is a common thing, so we do not give much more attention to them. This essay discusses both Viewpoints and I strongly agree with the

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University students always focus on one specific subject, but some people think that universities should encourage their students to study a wide range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education, education, education is a key success of students. Some say that graduates Students are given Concentration by one major subject, but others say they should learn broad subjects including their own Subject I Strongly agree with this statement because it enhances skill Knowledge and creates multifarious employment opportunities. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, big cities offer different job positions due to the great number of companies, also there are cultural activities, night life, different type of transportation, more hospitals and opportunities to study. Because of that more people from countryside are moving to the city therefore, their population are decreasing.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Humans have always kept animals as their pets and we continued to do so even in the modern times. But, many of us oppose this trend on the grounds of nature of the animals and their health hazards, especially for kids. However, I agree with this notion to a large extent and the points to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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