IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 95

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Levels of depression and antisocial behavior in children have increased dramatically in modern societies. This situation has led many people to believe that childhood itself is in crisis. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In this fast-paced life, it is a fact that, an increasing number of children are suffering from depression and antisocial behavior. Because of this most of the folks reckon that childhood is in problem. If questioned, I agree with this notion to a major extant. My justification is explained further.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Travelling provides peace and relaxation to our mind. In recent times, numerous tourists are preferring to visit places where conditions and other circumstances are difficult to handle. This current trend has its own merits and demerits, which I will explain further with relevant examples in the following essay.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantges?

All cars, buses, and trucks Will no need for people to drive them in the future and these vehicles will only carry passengers while travelling. I believe this is a significant improvement in the transportation system although the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because haw people can trust this improvement in their lives?

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research evey year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, governments of many countries worldwide allocate millions of dollars yearly for space research, however, some people think that such amounts should be devoted to enhance standards of living on Earth. I neither agree nor disagree with this opinion, as I believe that exploring the space is very important for the future and investing to improve quality of life on Earth is also essential.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the Internet and are using the Internet to socialise with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for childrean. Discuss problems and solution.

Nowadays growing number of internet based soical platforms are being used by children to connect with their peers and meet new friends. Despite some benefits, it can harm young individuals in many ways. So, I believe imminent interventions are needed regarding this issue inorder to save this generation.

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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?

There is a growing demand for buying cars, especially for people who want to buy their first car. An increased number of cars can trigger air quality and traffic congestion. However, it can be tackled best by encouraging sharing cars and using public transportation.

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many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. what are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem? You should write at least 254 words

there is no denying the fact that there is a big problem Students can not be focuse at the school lessons . at these essay i will talk about the cause of this problem and how to get over it.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Over the past 30 years, car production and sales has increased so rapidly, most of the people now own a car in many cities around the world. I totally agree that raise in car ownership causes traffic jams in many urban areas. Governments should encourage public transports and provide free passes to public trains. Increasing car taxes can discourage people to buy cars.

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In addition to academic subjects at school, schools also should cover practical skills such as car repairing and gardening. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Practical skills like cooking and gardening should be at the same level as important as academic subjects. I partially agree that academic subjects are vital for students who continue their study, however practical skills who start working immediately after school.

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Part time courses are on the rise and students are taking them up as an alternative to full time courses. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

On this world with ever growing challenges and competitiveness the younger generation put more value to time management hence their preference to part time courses instead of it full time counterpart, for the reason that this has greater benefits than dounfalls and the following paragraphs are going to explain why with some examples.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. lisa

In recent years, graffities are popular among people in the world. Some feel that cities should provide the spaces for them however others think that this kind of art should not be allowed. In my opinion, graffiti is a interesting art that could be enjoyed by people who live and visit the city. Somehow, it could make the cities be more beautiful and attract tourists.

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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?

Some people think that too much harmful content is present on the internet today, and they feel like the only way around this problem is for the government to censor the content of websites. I believe, that indeed, the government should censor to some extent the content that is available out there, in order to make the online presence of us more safe.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

A lot of individuals taking care of their elderly family find that they do not have adequate time to protect them efficiently. This essay pintpoints the main setbacks that many may face and mentions some potential ways.

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Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than is needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

While some argues that universities graduate more students than necessary and less importance should be given to higher education. Some holds the view against to this. This essay will explore both views and I will discuss each perspective and give my opinion.

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people spend most of there time at work in their adult life, so work satiffaction seems to be important. on what factor it depend. to what extent expectation of work satifscation is justified.

People spend most of their time during adolescence at workplace so the level of satisfaction from their jobs is of significant importance to maintain mental and physical health. This essay will discuss that how factors like salary and working hours affect job satisfaction. Moreover, level of satisfaction from work certainly depends on an in individuals type of work.

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Due to evelopment and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countires, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the effects of expansion of supermarkets have become the heated debate. Some people assert that big shops make local economy discouraging, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I believe that the both arguments should be given equal weight. In the following essay, the evidence supporting this contention will be discussed alongside relevant examples.

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The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online?

The internet access is a great way for searching certain information and offer chance for people all over the world. Through numerous sites, there are a lot of unsafe resources which contain unconfirmed information. Thus, it has a negative effect on study or worldwide news. Detecting and controlling unreliable information can be via browsers. These points of view will be discussed in the fourth coming paragraphs.

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Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

One of the main parts of society is art, which illustrates its culture. In my opinion, Art should be educated in schools, universities or in kindergartens, although it does not to be the primary subject. From this prospectives, it is worth discussing in the fourth coming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that environmental issues should be the first priority of humanity in the 21st century. To what extent do you agree with the view expressed?

Several individuals trust that environmental problems should be considerd the first about humanity of 21st century. I significantly disagree about the given opinion because of 2 reasons.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school . Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is recommended to start learning a foreign language in primery school,Instead of it is also can learn at secondary school. However, based on my own assumptions, I firmly believe that the benefits of learning a foreign language early outweigh its disadvantages.

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