IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 104

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

The obesity rate is rising in some countries worldwide, which is negatively affecting people's health and body fitness accordingly.

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In recent years sports stars have become increasingly famous and wealthy. For some this is a benefit, raising the profile of sports, but for others, it is a negative influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sport is the main part of our life and nobody can argue this statement. Lots of people are dreaming about sporting career, in spite of discipline only few people achieve succes. Although existing cases when people must stop their career because of issues happened with their physical or psychological statements.

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In the 21st century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. What are the advantages and the disadvantages?

The means of international and global communication became readily available with the new technologies and transport , such as aeroplanes , mobile phones and chat applications. Although , for this statement has both benefits nad drawbacks which will be discussed further in the following paragraphs.

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The huge increase in the number of people with illnesses caused by air pollution from motor vehicles has led to calls for all motorised vehicles to be banned from town and city centres. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this suggestion ?

It is considered that banning cars, trucks and motos from metropoles would effectively answer health issues caused by air pollution. I personally agree that global warming requires taking radical decisions. However, I am concerned by the social consequences and the changes brought by this proposition.

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It is becoming more and more difficult to eacape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

In recent years, the media is influencing the person more. Because of usage of mobile phones, Media has been affecting our lives more and more. There is lots of advantages in the situation. However, some people believe that this situation causes disadvantages. This essay will discuss the disadvantages of this problem.

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Some people are using smartphones every day. What are the causes? Is it a positive or negative statement?

Number of youngsters are regularly spending period on their mobile phones. I think such kinds of devices are part of every generation are the worst habit if they use them dishonestly like wasting their moment by playing online games for money and visiting illegal websites. The main reasons for this are the indifference of parents and the impact of peers on them .Kinds of technological stuff's design is increasing significantly and being on trend. Every student wants to lead fashion. For example, THE UZBEK NATION newspapers announced that a number of teenagers are utilizing more phones than old-aged ones.

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Many young people today spend a significant amount of time on social media platforms, which can lead to various issues. What problems can arise from excessive use of social media among youth, and what solutions can be implemented to address these issues?

Many young people nowadays spent a significant amount of their time on social media which can result in various issues. Although social media platforms play a crucial role in certain aspects like entertainment, education, and communication an excessive use can develop serious mental health issues.

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The internet and technology, like mobile phones and laptops, are connecting us to each other every hour of the day via networking sites and applications. Do you think it’s an advantage or disadvantage?

There is no denying the fact that technology like mobile phones and laptops are connecting us to each other every day.While it is commonly held belief that some people think that this is a postive thing. While others disagree and think it may lead to adverse ramifications.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Science and technology have improved people’s lives in many aspects including medical advancement, the development of the space industry and alternative food supply. Some people believe that the aim of science should be the improvement of human advancement, however, I disagree with this statement.

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It is suggested that some countries give money to poorer countries rather than financial aid.

It is argued by some people that rich countries are to give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid because it is not enough give money to poorer countries as it does not solve poverty. I partly agree with this opinion and I will state the reasons for my view.

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It is often argued that developed rich countries contribute to other poor countries.

It is often argued that developed rich countries contribute to other poor countries by providing different kind of help rather than financial aid. While some believe providing other types of help is unnecessity responsibility for modern countries. I completely believe different kind of support to the poor countries can be beneficial for country's poor families and goverenment more than financial support.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There is a change in trend among young individuals around the world. More and more students are now opting away from science fields as a career. Seeing others who choose technology related subjects struggling and social media are the main reasons for that, and this change is going to affect the development and scientific progress.

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More people decided to have children at a later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Compared to the past more and more people tend to have children at a later age. Although, it have some drawbacks benefits exceed them.

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In many countries insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reason for this? What problems might this cause in society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, in many countries, insufficient respect are shown to the elderly. The reason behind this is people do not love to practice respect and love anymore. The problems it causes are older people get neglected and do not receive proper care, and there is a lack of apprecitations about their contributions to society.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

These days, the number of people who are moving to metropolices increase tremendously, and the elderly merely remain in the rural areas. There are some reasons why this issue is happened and some constructive solutions to tackle this problem.

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It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films, and the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of tourism in our society, learning different culture from traveling to different countries has become increasingly significant. While some people believe that exploring knowledge by internet-browsing as time-consuming, others think it something unpractical. From my perspective, I am in favor of the latter, and the reasons will be elaborated on as follows.

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In many countries today the retirement age from work has been raised. Do the advantages of raising the retirement age outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely proposed that the raising of retirement age in several nations can bring numerous benefits as a solution for aging society world, others argue that negative outcomes especially health status of these seniors workforce should not be neglected. Hence, reason why I agree with the former statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Nowadays, students sleep less than they used to in the past . what do you think is the reason behinf this? what are effects on individuals

In recent years, many young people have struggled with sleep issues.Scholars believe that this problem arises mainly from the heavy workload in educational settings and electronic devices. However, this phenomenon has serious repercussions on their physical and psychological well-being. This essay will examine the causes and adverse effects of sleep deprivation among youth.

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Nowadays, jeans are considered to be the most popular type of clothes in the USA. Many people wear jeans every day. What part does this type of garment play in American culture? Discuss this point of view and give your personal opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

These days, jeans are most versatile and very popular clothes in every country, including USA because of its materials as well as faddishness for good looking purposes. Jeans are the most widely used product ever but especially, in America. American created jeans for fashion and for their movies to encourage people to buy jeans. They advertised all around the world and made it a common mandatory clothe for their citizen.

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Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (277)

An increasing number of people nowadays are willing to share their personal information with technological companies to gain access to the software. Although trading personal data for software can benefit people to facilitate them with explicit features, I believe that it can be dangerous due to the potential threat it can impose to the digital security of an individual.

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