IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 104

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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MANY JOBS USED TO BE DONE BY HANDS, BUT NOWADAYS AN INCREASING NUMBER OF THEM ARE DONE BY USING MACHINES INSTEAD. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS DEVELOPMENT?

In this contemporary world, the technological revolution has bought drastic variations in various fields. It is believed that most of the jobs are done by manpower previously, whereas now machines took over these all works due to the modernization. This essay will accentuate the positive and negative aspect of this trend.

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The picture below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the stages of development that a salmon passes through during its lifetime.

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Also believe their children who spend time in front of screen is beneficial while others are against this discuss both

Social media or technology is seen as a necessity in today’s world. From some perspectives, some people think that spending more time in front of screens is retarding children’s development. I think both sides of the opinion have finer arguments to discuss.

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The Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the internet left a revolutionary impact to our lives. While it is a commonly held belief that it allows us to stay in touch whenever we want and no matter where we are, there is also an argument that it also isolates us and encourage people not to socialise.

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Many people think that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

In today's world, as technology became more advanced and humans found ways to live easier, the obesity rates and health proplems made by low activety and movement also rose significantly. This has led to many arguments that promote exercise. So, some people believe that the best way to make the sports an integral part of lives, is to make more sports facilities. On the other hand, others say that this factor, has little to no impact on how we see sports and we should consider more factors.

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Some people say that when deciding how taxes should be spent, governments should prioritise health care. Other people believe that there are more important priorities for taxpayers' money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

People have different opinion regarding how states should use their funds. Some would argue that spending on health care should be given priority, while others say that there are other sectors that should be given more importance. This essay would argue that although health is important, there are other things that are more significant, such as education and development.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV and reading them on newspaper. What is the reason. Is it a good or bad idea.

The provided bar graph depicts the quantity of families in the United States categorized by their yearly salary for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.

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Technology is becoming an increasingly important part of education. Some people say that this is a positive development, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Do you think the increasing use of technology in education is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There is no denying the fact that technology has a significant role in all aspects of education. While it is a commonly held belief that technology has a positive impact on educate field, there is also an argument that technology is leading to negative influence on education. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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There are some violent cartoon characters on Tv such as Mickey mouse, which bring negative influence to children. Do you agree or disagree? What types of TV programs are suitable for children

The topic of animation shows, show-casing detrimental hooks has sparked considerable amount of debate. Some contend that Mickey Mouse is the one which is more pernicious to youngsters. Nevertheless, in my opinion, I disagree with this notion because cartoons such as tom&gerry is major conundrum for reasons as shall be elaborated upon presently.

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Some people think that children should be taught how to become good parents at school. Do you agree or disagree?

In our world, there are a lot of things.These things affect our life.Teaching children how to become good parents at school is one of these things. some people think that this is a postive development,while others disagree and think that may lead to adverse ramifactions. In this essay i will give a clear view on the subject above.

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Some people have argued that video games are a waste of time, and people should spend their time and money on better hobbies. Do the advantages of video games outweigh the disadvantages ?

There is no denying the fact that video games becoming popualr these days. While it is a commonly held belief that some people advocating that video games are considered waste of time, there is also an argument that encouraging to spend time and money on better hobbies.

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Today whereas some people advocate that players must have physical strenght, others argue that mental skills are much important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There is no denying the fact that athletes must have various qualifications. While it is a commonly held belief that players must have physical strength, there is also an argument that mental skills are much more crucial than physical strength.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the last century, computer machines named like the most important innovation. From the mantion when was created the first personal computer have passed around one houndred years, where every year this way have been progressing. Novadays, imagen our world without computer unreal. So i completly agree with this statement.

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Internet addiction How serious is this problem among young people where you live, and what can be done about it?

The Internet is now a world wide used network, which many can’t imagine their life without. It is the main source of current information, news globally, which provides many opportunities to people - learning, work, relaxation etc. But what other influence does it have on us?

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that people need more free days per week by reducing their working hours. However I completely disagree with this opinion, Because workers have considerable number of leaves per year and lots of works need to be done to be a successful company.

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Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned in the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some towns have put in place some public transport days and on such days, private cars, trucks and motorcycles are not allowed in centers. Although,this can cause insufficient transport, I believe that the positives overshadow the negatives due to the fact that it reduces traffic congestion.

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it is imprtant for every one iculudimg young people to save money for thier future / do you agree or not

Saving money is a crucial skill for everyone, especially for the younger generation, as it ensures a stable future. I wholeheartedly agree with this mindset.

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Sports play a significant role in promoting physical and mental well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In this essay we are going to discuss the importance of doing sports and effects of having active lifestyle. Personally, I strongly believe that this statement is true. Going to sport activities is a great way to improve your state of health.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

A fraction of people notice the managers or directors of companies are mostly elderly. In contrast, others show the opposite that young employees have the responsibility to take the lead of organisations. In my opinion, elders are better than younger people in the experience. In this essay, we will discuss points of view.

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Some people think that child care centres provide the best services for children of pre school age.other working parents think that family members such as grand parents will be better careers for their kids.discuss both views and give your opinion.

Good parenting is very significant for children's growth, some people think that daycare gives the best services for children's needs. Meanwhile, I firmly agree that ivolving family members like grand parents will engage to a better future for kids. This essay will examine some key points for both views.

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