IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 104

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people have argued that video games are a waste of time, and people should spend their time and money on better hobbies. Do the advantages of video games outweigh the disadvantages ?

There is no denying the fact that video games becoming popualr these days. While it is a commonly held belief that some people advocating that video games are considered waste of time, there is also an argument that encouraging to spend time and money on better hobbies.

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Today whereas some people advocate that players must have physical strenght, others argue that mental skills are much important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There is no denying the fact that athletes must have various qualifications. While it is a commonly held belief that players must have physical strength, there is also an argument that mental skills are much more crucial than physical strength.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the last century, computer machines named like the most important innovation. From the mantion when was created the first personal computer have passed around one houndred years, where every year this way have been progressing. Novadays, imagen our world without computer unreal. So i completly agree with this statement.

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Internet addiction How serious is this problem among young people where you live, and what can be done about it?

The Internet is now a world wide used network, which many can’t imagine their life without. It is the main source of current information, news globally, which provides many opportunities to people - learning, work, relaxation etc. But what other influence does it have on us?

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that people need more free days per week by reducing their working hours. However I completely disagree with this opinion, Because workers have considerable number of leaves per year and lots of works need to be done to be a successful company.

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Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned in the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some towns have put in place some public transport days and on such days, private cars, trucks and motorcycles are not allowed in centers. Although,this can cause insufficient transport, I believe that the positives overshadow the negatives due to the fact that it reduces traffic congestion.

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it is imprtant for every one iculudimg young people to save money for thier future / do you agree or not

Saving money is a crucial skill for everyone, especially for the younger generation, as it ensures a stable future. I wholeheartedly agree with this mindset.

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Sports play a significant role in promoting physical and mental well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In this essay we are going to discuss the importance of doing sports and effects of having active lifestyle. Personally, I strongly believe that this statement is true. Going to sport activities is a great way to improve your state of health.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

A fraction of people notice the managers or directors of companies are mostly elderly. In contrast, others show the opposite that young employees have the responsibility to take the lead of organisations. In my opinion, elders are better than younger people in the experience. In this essay, we will discuss points of view.

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Some people think that child care centres provide the best services for children of pre school age.other working parents think that family members such as grand parents will be better careers for their kids.discuss both views and give your opinion.

Good parenting is very significant for children's growth, some people think that daycare gives the best services for children's needs. Meanwhile, I firmly agree that ivolving family members like grand parents will engage to a better future for kids. This essay will examine some key points for both views.

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Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?

Generally, the public read daily jounals (imtahanda səhv yazmışam) to find out about the world's current affairs and they read magazines to be entertained. At the present, newpapers and magazines getting wider popularity by featuring private activity of celebrities. They are presenting the silliest part of their being to the most personal aspects which is sometimes disturbing. I personally believe that it is not noble to expose someone's personal life in newspapers.

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some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. other, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many individuals argue that the extended prison punishment is the correct way to decrease crimes, while I believe that this methods might affect the potential criminal arise, it can negatively impact to the moral degradation in the society.

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many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle.both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. two what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this period of globalization. Many children are administering detrimental habits.In my opinion, schools and their parents have to organize about preventing this negative approach. I strongly agree with this notion and my opinion wil be dicussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.ohers argue that it is beter to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Although some may believe that it is better to admit worse circumstances in the life, including being unsatisfied with the job and having low salary, I am of the firm belief that it is better to attempt to meet their need or they feel burnout after a while.

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If financially possible， is it always better for young people to leave home and be independent at the age of 18

It’s argued that it’s a better choice for young people at the age of 18 to leave home and become independent. I completely agree with this idea.

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In an increasingly globalized world, communicating in English is becoming an essential skill. Some people argue that it should become an official language in Vietnam. This means English would be used ingovernment, legal documents, education, and other official communications. The government of Vietnam should make English an official language. Do you agree or disagree?

English is becoming a global language and nowaday comunicating in English is important for eveyone who want to devenlop their lives. But I am not sure that the government in Vietnam should make English an official language, which will be great for Vietnamese people. Because Vietnamese language overcame a range of years to devenlop by Vietnamese people, it became beautiful and connect history with present. History of Vietnam strongly proved that Vietnamese people protected their nation, their land and so on. Therefore, language too, they always want to protect and maintan it forever. Moreover, Vietnamese lauguage is important and necessary culture, and you know, on over the world, we only have any nations have language for them. Personally, I am Vietnamese, I prefer to not making any language an officical language in Vietnam, including English. I want to keep my language forever, I always talk with my friends: "English is a tool help us, it not changes my mind". So I love my voice, l...

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the impacts on society and families?

These days, many people decide that they will have children later in their life rather than having a child after marriage. In this essay, I will argue about why young people do not interested to have a baby at their early stage and bad impacts on society as well as family members.

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some employers want to be able to contact their staaf at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages.

In these days, people looking to job and want to work every days without get on holidays. so in this essay I will write both sides advantages and disadvantage of this point with an example.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that the biggest environmental problem today is the loss of certain plants and animals. Others believe there are bigger issues we need to focus on. In my opinion, while both ideas make sense, I agree that there are more important environmental problems than the loss of some plants and animals.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification Discuss both these views and give youn own opinion.

Nowadays, there is a debate whether learners should study other subjects despite of the main ones. Although some argue that it is important to forcus on the main subjects in order to improve your performance, I am in favor with those who think that minor lessons are good for addition as you get to learn more skills.

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