IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 98

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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How is the primary education school appearance in your country?

Education is important for us, because without education we cannot know how to read and write. I started my education from kindergarten for a year, then I continued to elementary school for six years in my hometown in Merauke, South Papua province. The elementary school period was a beautiful and enjoyable thing in my opinion, because when in elementary school there were still many children who liked to cry because they could not be left by their parents. However, not all children who cry are also in elementary school, because if previously we have entered kindergarten, usually we already have a good mentality, are not afraid, are not ashamed to play with friends. And sometimes we also usually get our friends who were previously in kindergarten who continue elementary school at one school. When in elementary school, most of us still often bring supplies from home prepared by our parents, be it just a piece of bread or rice and side dishes as supplies that we bring. When in elementar...

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News editor decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Through the years, the media world has been changing and one of the most important is where the news editors present the news. Television and newspapers are the most common means, but there are some criteria to choose what kind of news to present. In this discussion, I'm going to talk about different factors people take in the moment to decide where to broadcast in the media and what is considered bad or good news.

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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does the cause? What are some possible solution.

These days more people have to compete with young generation in getting the same job opportunities. This trend creates unemployment problems and discrimination in recruitment process among middle-age people and young generation. The solution should be arranging proper training and implementing a transparent recruitment process.

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With the advent of social media, more people are getting their news online instead of from print media. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for people who read news online.

In this modernization era, the social media becoming more and more popular by each passing day. With this davancement masses watch more news online as compared to print media. This essay will articulate the pros and cons of online news in my upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn’t be a limitation on age, and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views, give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Old age is golden and it comes with wisdom as a result of the experience accumulated over the years, as for whether a 65 year old is too old to work or should be allowed to continue working is debatable and alot should be put to test before coming up with a conclusive opinion.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Sport stars can often make more money than other well-seeing professions. Some people believe that is fair. However, there are some who disagree. This essay aims to discuss both views and to provide my opinion.

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Some people think that people commit crime because of poverty and social problems, while others think it is because of their bad nature. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the ratio of crimes is increasing sharply. Some individuals believe strongly that the significant reasons of growing up the rate of crimes are poverty and community issues whereas some groups of thinkers supporting the idea of the awful intrinsic nature of the person is main way to commit crime.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

A group of people believe that professional workers and managers playing significant roles in the firm bear a right to earn more money plus incentives compared to ordinary laborers. I subscribe to the notion that managers conduct the company; besides prosperity of the company results in their strategy and decisions in sensitive situations. Therefore they would deserve tangible bounces.

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It is a common aspiration among people to run their own business, rather that work for an employer. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Most people always want to create their own businesses as circulating your own business easier than working for an employer in any facility.Nevertheless,it is hard to create your own business and people are a little bit discouraged about creating their system.Despite this phenomenon can lead to negative impacts,I more firmly believe that there are more significant positive effects.

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Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest taxpayers’ money in healthcare, while others believe that money should be used in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

In the contemporary epoch, individuals think the whole income achieved from tax should be spent in the healthsector. Opponents of thisstandpoint believe the mentioned money must be utilized in other parts of one country. Both views are discussed as follows.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that this is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both view points and give your opinion

The presence of alien species on other planets has been an interesting topic since decades. Many scientists are curious to know more about them, and believe that human beings should try to communicate with them, however, on the other hand, many advocate against it and believe that it could be dangerous for mankind. Regardless, I believe that alien species might be more intelligent and advanced than us, which might help us to develop at a much faster rate, hence, efforts should be made to establish communication with them.

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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your e-mail as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

I write in reference to the recommendation of a guest speaker for the book fair later this year.

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Task 2, People naturally resist making changes in their lives. what kind of problems can this cause? what solutions can you suggest?

It is human nature to resist changes and continue norms without questioning and doubting. People are afraid to change anything as they are quite doubtful about the consequences and since they are hesitant on getting out of their comfort zone. But I believe change is mandatory and it is inevitable whether you like it or not.

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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also people nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is a hazardous activity that is capable of harming not only the smokers, but also individuals near by them. For that reason, many people argue that smoking in public spaces should be illegal. This essay will examine my opinion on this issue.

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Q.) Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an argument that educate boys and girls in one school is more beneficial, whereas others argue that it is better to separate them in different schools. I personally think it will be easier to educate students with the same sex in the school, however, this essay will elaborate more on both sides.

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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggestion least one possible solution.

Huge overpopulation is said to be the phenomena that concerns the world we live in. not only the poor areas of the world are expected to suffer the consequences but also the countries which are developed or moving toward development. These consequences vary in forms but there are also some steps which can be taken to fade the negative effects of it.

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Some people think that physical activity should be a compulsory part of every school day. Others believe that children should spend more time learning academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, diverse kinds of activities which should be taken during school hours are one of the controversial topics amongst parents. Some opine that attending sport classes during the educational years is a "must' for students, although others are of the belief that most of these days ought to be allocated to instructing academic courses. I agree with the first group's perspective and both notions will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world,it is argued that states must spend their budget on rail rather than roads. I completely agree with this idea. In this essay, I will try to draw some conclusions.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

We all can agree with the fact that globalization is indeed bringing the people of the world closer than ever before as more number of people are travelling these days.In this essay I would like to discuss about the same.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public healthand that other measure are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Health is wealth. Some people believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the appropriate method to develop public well-being while other say that this may causes negative effect on public health and there are other methods is necessary. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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