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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Climate change is a significant issue that requires urgent attention. What are the primary causes of climate change? How can individuals and governments work together to address this issue?

Climate change represents a pressing global issue requiring immediate and comprehensive action. This essay will examine the primary causes of climate change and explore how individuals and governments can collaborate to effectively address this pressing challenge.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

In today’s society, the internet plays a major role in making people's daily lives easier. However, spreading and consuming information from the internet has several drawbacks. This essay will explain the problems that may occur due to the use of the internet and offer some solutions.

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Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As cities struggled to provide areas for the construction of residential complexes, an idea of utilising communal areas—which are allocated to facilities, such as a park—has emerged. I strongly disagree with this proposition because it further induces overpopulation, and erodes the sense of community, which primarily emanates from communal spaces.

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Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many of them do not get enough exercise. What are the reasons? What can be done to encourage them to exercise more?

Nowadays, we can see and hear a lot of different advice from doctors, slogans and movements that encourage us to exercise. It is especially common to hear advice from doctors for the elderly.

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It's hard to deny that remote learning is becoming more popular but also can cause the problem of low learning effect, which leads some people to generate their idea that kids should be educated in the classrooms instead of learning online. However, such kind of statement lacks both factual and logical fallacies and should be examined more meticulously. In my opinion, as far as convenience, safety and learning quality are concerned, the advantages of learning from the Internet obviously outweigh the disadvantages.

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It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever-increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

Facing increasing numbers of serious crimes has become a major issue that tremendously affects society. Many people argue that applying the death penalty will help to face increasing crime frequency. I strongly believe that putting strict rules as execution will be a deterrent to any offender; however, there are other considerations that have to be taken into consideration.

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Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe bskills and experience are more important. Discuss bot sides and give your opinion.

There is an issue about whether a university degree or skills and experience are more important for getting a good job. Both sides have strong points, but I would say having skills and experience is far suoerior for some reaosn which are set out below.

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It is crucial to teach children in the right direction at an early age, some individuals suggest punishment is a potential tool for helping them learn effectively, I strongly agree with this notion. In the following paragraphs, the advantages and possible types of punishments will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

It is crucial to teach children in the right direction at an early age, some individuals suggest punishment is a potential tool for helping them learn effectively,and Istrongly agree with this notion. In the following paragraphs, the advantages and possible types of punishments will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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Some people think we need to give aid to all poor countries. Others, however, argue that we should not give international aid to countries with corruption in their system. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion.

It has been argued by some, that developed countries should give a hand to all developing countries, who need help and financial support. On the contrary, others reject the concept of helping countries which are suffering from a corrupted system. This essay will present my personal opinion regarding both points of view.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Social media has become an integral part of modern life, with billions of people around the world using such platforms to stay connected with others and updated on current events. While social media undoubtedly offers numerous advantages in terms of connectivity and information dissemination, this essay argues that the risks it carries are more significant.

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Some people think painting and drawings are important as other subjects. They should be compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the ways of teaching and learning are so varied from the previous, so a group of people believe that it is important to teach not only paintings but also drawings in high schools. I subscribe to this idea owing to the fact that some pupils like arts categories also, It usually helps students to have fun times.

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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Therefore, individuals cannot be expected to change their behavior and only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Global warming is a burgeoning issue nowadays which affects people's lives and nature, typically due to the lack of awareness of the environment some say only governments and large organisations can take steps as individuals are not ready to change their behaviour. I will put down my opinion in the next paragraphs.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people believe that advertising is so common , that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Although certain individuals believe that publicity has become a common tool to buy products which makes it less attractive for us , I believe that marketing is the most effective way to purchase goods due to the advancement in technology.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Over the last few years, more and more specialists, like doctors and educators, have been relocating from their poor countries to developed countries to get better work. This essay will discuss the main problems of brain drain, such as a country's increasing poverty and lack of talent development and propose solutions including investing in small businesses and offering benefits to skilled workers.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Education helps to develop the nation's economy and also the literacy rate of the country. In some countries, university students live at home with their families while they study, but in other countries, students move to attend university in another city. In this essay, we are going to see how studying away from their hometown gives benefits for the students and how it outweighs the disadvantages.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organised by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, psychologists are keen to raise the awareness of parents about the importance of leisure time for children. They indicate that activities kids are involved in should be monitored and tailored according to their personalities and needs as well, However, some consider that any activity ought to be as they choose not as parents wish. This essay will discuss both points of view and my personal opinion will be presented in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that activities of large multinational companies mostly benefit the economies of developing countries, other people take the opposite view and feel these large multinationals are harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Individuals argue that the global programs in some multinational companies are good for the economies of countries' development, while others think they are harmful. I agree with the former.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the ancient years, people used to take part individually to prove themselves best in the nation. Nowadays, it is argued that playing in a team such as a football or cricket is more beneficial as compared to playing individually like tennis or swimming. In this essay, I will discuss both views and will give my views, on why playing individually is better than playing in a team.

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Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that celebrities or sports have advantages and disadvantages. This is because they could inspire people to pursue their careers and follow their dreams. On the other hand, they could bring harm to people due to their luxurious lifestyle that people cannot easily follow. I will explain this statement in the next paragraphs.

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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, technology has been developing, so people have access to a range of things online, but it is important that they put their personal information on the apps and websites for doing their regular work. In my opinion, it is a negative development owing to the fact that governments know about our position also, some people can still your identity to commit crimes.

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