IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 199

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some think that the government should increase the price for tourists to visit cultural and historical attractions in a country, but this essay will disagree because people are generally equal, whether they are foreign visitors or locals.

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Nowadays, people live longer after they retire. How does it affect individuals and society? What can be done about this.

These days, people have longer life expectancy after retirement. This essay will outline some issues in society such as the healthcare system strain as well as suggest some solutions.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

disagree with the statement that young people who commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks, should be penalized in the same way as adults. This essay will explore several reasons for this matter.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a biolent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

disagree with the statement that says young people who commit some important crimes, such as robbery or violent attack should be penalised as adults. This essay will explore several reasons for that matter.

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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this essay, I shall discuss arguments from both sides of this issue before going on to state why I tend to agree that access to technology has increased the gap between the upper-class and the lower-class. I believe a more nuanced picture is necessary.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In several regions, it is sometimes argued that governments should allocate funds to build new lines for the fast trains between the cities. However, other people believe that instead of spending money on establishing new railways, it is better to invest this money in improving the existing public transportation systems. While I understand the importance of improving the current public transportation systems, I believe that building new lines would be a better idea for several reasons.

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In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models', and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Does the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

For many young people around the world, a famous person can have a big influence and be a role model. In this essay, I will try to introduce the advantages and the disadvantages of this statement.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

These days, technology is developing extremely quickly, and we can send our food products to other districts really fast; as a result, global inhabitants can buy goods from all over the world. In my opinion, this is a positive development because this thing can help migrations to cook their own meals, and people who cannot travel to other regions can taste other areas’ dishes.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In the new era, learning foreign languages is fundamental for each individual. Therefore, there is an argument between the two views. Some people argue that learning another language is only for learners who aim to travel or work overseas, while others think that these are not the only purposes for someone who wants to learn a new language except their mother tongue. From my perspective, I believe that each person has a free choice in choosing a different language to study.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

Remote learning has become increasingly prevalent owing to the advancement in technology. While some render this as extortionate feature of education, it is, in general, more beneficial compared to the traditional pedagogical methods due to its availability, accessibility and affordability.

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It is better for university students to live away from home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In most cases, enrolling in university is often correlated with moving out of parents' house. Many people believe that living far away from home is better for students, while others argue that staying at home with their parents has more advantages. In my opinion, I believe that students benefit from living alone, especially because they learn how to be independent, and how to manage their time and their expenses.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Very often home assignments are incorporated into school curriculums with the aim of honing skills and fostering concepts. While the proponents of homework cite its benefits, others argue that homework exercises negatively impact students' lives. Nevertheless, I firmly assert that home exercises are beneficial for students because this way students are able to dedicate more time to grasp concepts and learning skills.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign company. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

It is asserted that learning a foreign language is only necessary for business travel or employment. In contrast, some people think there are other reasons to learn new languages. I strongly believe that expanding our vocabulary can open up a wide range of opportunities in our lives. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both points of view and provide evidence to support my own.

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Some people believe that reading books are better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children tend to spend a great amount of time watching television or playing video games. Some individuals believe that reading books is much better for them. Personally, I totally agree with this view, since this activity helps children with their cognitive development, language skills, imagination, creativity and social skills.

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Some people consider corruption to be the root cause of problems in government organizations and politics. What problems arise due to this corruption? What are possible solutions to eradicate corruption.

Some people believe that corruption is the reason for issues in government establishments and political offices. There are some problems because of this which are unfair distribution of services and distrust among people. However, there are some possible solutions which help in eradicating bribery.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Parenthood has its own set of challenges, and parenting methods are the foremost among the other challenges. It is argued that a permissive parenting style should not be adopted as it leads to negative long-term consequences. This essay explores why this is not a recommended method and what implications this ideology may have.

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In some countries, some high school leavers choose to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the disadvantages and advantages of these school leavers’ decisions and give your opinion.

Many people believe that the youth should take a gap from their study after graduation of their schooling instead of getting admission at the University. This essay attempts to shed light on both the merits and demerits of this choice before concluding that the former is more significant.

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G. In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth over all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In many countries, governments prioritize economic growth rather than all other concerns. The advantage of doing so is that people’s average income increases as the economy grows. To promote further economic growth, governments are likely to fund scientific research and education, leading to the maturity of society and making their countries more competitive, while the main disadvantages are environmental problems, global warming, and pollution because of further deforestation and industrial waste.

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Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

With the dawn of the 21st century, it was widely predicted that the rapid development of technology would lead to people having significantly more free time. The rationale behind this prediction was that advancements in particularly automation and digitalization, would streamline various tasks, reducing the amount of time required for work and daily chores. This essay explores the extent to which this prediction has materialized the broader impacts of technology on our lives.

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F. Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Yes, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in providing technology companies with personal data in exchange for access to services of online software because people benefit from various services available online and the risk of leaking personal information is quite rare.

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