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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree

It is certainly believed that a tremendous increase in sales through e-stores will lead to the closure of showrooms available in various states and provinces, in the near future. I am totally convinced with the above-mentioned statement. In the paragraph given below, I will discuss the points supporting my views.

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nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?

Do you feel you are stressed? or do you feel you can not concentrate on your work? Then you should contact a medical practitioner, you may have symptoms of problems with your sleeping pattern. Lack of rest and a busy lifestyle have always been hot topics around the world. It is constantly argued, what are the cause of it and what things we do in order to overcome this issue, In this essay, I am going to describe those in a broad manner along with a summary.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these days that competition become very hard whereas that life is not easier like before and parents must provide a decent life for their children. The question is, should both parents work to help their children? In this essay, I going to write my opinion and draw my conclusion.

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In some societies,the number of crimes comitted by teenagers is growing.some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit majour crimes should receive adult punishment.To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Nowadays,in current societies, it can be seen that the tendency of teenagers to commit different kinds of crime is on rise.Many assert that juvenile criminals ought to receive punishment as adult criminals.I entirely agree with this idea and I think it can be a lesson for other teens who are committing serious crimes.

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Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to successful at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, children get more homework from school and feel stressed about that. Some people think that schools should not give homework to their students on daily basis, while other individuals claim that they should get homework on an everyday basis in order to succeed at the institution. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs and, I will explain my reason for it.

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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree with this statement .

Nowadays, more and more people facing problems with obesity mostly children, which is a hot topic in discussion. Some individuals claim that the government is responsible for the increase in obesity in children. I strongly agree with this statement and I think that, people are also responsible for this issue. I will explain my reason for it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? A person should never make an important decision alone . Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .

From my everyday experience , and observation I can claim that discussion of an important outcome with other communities brings many benefits . In the following ,paragraphs I will give my reasons to defend this statement . First of all , the different families have different opinions . In order to make the right choice public should discuss every possible settlement and its consequences . Making an important selection alone can bring many negative aspects . For instance , a person can reveal his selfishness or impatience and the consequences of that verdict can affect many nations in the future . I think that a good and wise finding can be born only in a discussion because the population can share their knowledge and experiences a look at the problem from different sides and aspects .

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Nowadays, people who live in cities have to encounter many problems. What are these problems? What can be done to solve these?

It is widely acknowledged that these days when people reside in metropolises, they have to face a number of problems. This essay will identify these problems and then also put forward some feasible solutions to address them.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Learning foreign languages can be useful in many aspects, although some people think the only reason that force people to learn another language is travel or work. However, this is not the only reason, and in this essay, other reasons will be mentioned.

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In some countries tv programmes are transmitted throughout the day and night . Some people think that 24 hour transmission has positive impacts , while others believe it is negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion

who does not want to connect with the world through media ? Television programs, nowadays , are broadcasted by producers for the whole day. It is believed by a certain section of society that telecasting the programs for 24 hours has some advantages however others considered it has disadvantages. Both views are easily comprehensible . I am going to discuss these two views and elaborate on them from my perspective in the upcoming paragraphs .

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Nowadays tourism generates a significant part of national income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantage and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.

Tourism is a great leisure activity to do. some people opine that it creates a lot of income in many countries. however, others believe that it has some disadvantages. this essay intends to find the pros and cons of tourism.

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3.Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

Many countries these days pay attention to economic stability which will rise the standards of living, whereas due to that social values are losing importance. I agree with this notion but still believe that the benefits of this trend supersede the drawbacks, which will be outlined in this essay.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed by some that parents who have their children educated in private institutions should not be asked to support the public education system by paying taxes. From my perspective, I completely disagree with the viewpoints.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on technology. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

With a rise in the utilisation of technology, some feel students are becoming too dependent on it. This essay will discuss how reliance on computers can cause a regression in essential skills, as well as the negative effect on human relationships. I will also pose some solutions, like limiting the use of online tools and reducing online lessons, which could alleviate these problems.

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1.Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that governments should allocate more funds towards schools and education than, towards sports and leisure. This essay agrees that the government should invest more capital towards education due to firstly, education being a human right and secondarily, education being a gateway to increased opportunities for an individual.

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where condition are difficult such as Sahara or the Antarctic. Discuss advantage and disadvantage for tourist who visit these places.

There has been a controversy about whether tourism is helpful to places where conditions are difficult. I think its demerits outweigh its merits, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Urbanization has led to the extinction of seeds and creatures in our society today. Forests are burnt down for the construction of roads, the building of industries, and other structural facilities. This has led to the loss of species in our universe in this present day. for instance, In the olden days, the major occupation practiced in Africa are farming, hunting, and fishing. Due to the increase in population and civilization, the number of people who practice these jobs is very small. Another point is that the lands that are used for farming are now converted into residential areas, and forests for hunting are burnt down destroying both trees and animals, and are later converted into roads and industrial areas.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.

There has always been a raging debate about whether art is an important subject for children in schools or it can be neglected in the views of other important subjects. I am going to scrutinize both aspects in further paragraphs before forming an opinion in the last.

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The consumption of the world resources such as oil or water is increasing at a dangerous rate What are causes and solutions?

Indeed, the uses of the earth's resources such as oil and water are rising at an alarming rate. There are a variety of plausible reasons behind the augmentation of the world's resources at a high percentage. However, steps can be taken to tackle the problem with proper initiatives by every individual along with awareness by different bodies.

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In the recent years, television has contributed the most to change people`s quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that TV has become part and parcel of day-to-day life, and it has tremendously changed the value of life. I totally agree with this notion because it has both positive and negative impacts, and the arguments will be elucidated in the following essay.

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