IELTS Writing Samples Band 6. Page 292

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary workforce landscape, the retention of employees hinges on various motivating factors, and while financial incentives are undeniably pivotal, asserting money as the paramount element oversimplifies the intricate dynamics of workplace motivation. This essay contends that while monetary compensation is a crucial motivator, other intrinsic and extrinsic factors play equally substantial roles in influencing individuals to stay in the workforce.

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some people say that internet should be regulated. others are against any forms of internet censorship. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era, while proponents and I are of the belief that internet access should be restricted to protect minors from being exposed to improper substances, opponents argue that humans should have unlimited access to the internet because it is their right.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by the artificially intelligent robots? what is your opinion?

It is argued that artificial intelligence and robots will overtake all the responsibilities in the near future.However, I believe there are some duties that can't be done by AI.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the improvement of human life has led to an impressive lifespan in a lot of countries. Some people worry that this situation causes trouble for the governments, while others believe it is advantageous to have more elders. In my opinion, the benefits of people having longer lifespans significantly outweigh the drawbacks due to two main reasons.

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27.The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to overweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some benefits of the spread of English around the world. I agree that English will continue spreading globally and be used by people around the world.

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𝙄𝙩 𝙞𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙥𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙞𝙗𝙞𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙮 𝙤𝙛 𝙨𝙘𝙝𝙤𝙤𝙡𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙚𝙖𝙘𝙝 𝙘𝙝𝙞𝙡𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙣 𝙜𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙗𝙚𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙞𝙤𝙧 𝙞𝙣 𝙖𝙙𝙙𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙫𝙞𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙢𝙖𝙡 𝙚𝙙𝙪𝙘𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣. 𝙏𝙤 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙚𝙭𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙙𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙚 𝙤𝙧 𝙙𝙞𝙨𝙖𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙚

In the realm of education, a debate has sparked regarding the responsibilities schools bear beyond imparting academic knowledge. There's a growing sentiment that schools should also shoulder the task of instilling good behavior in children. While the primary focus of schools undeniably remains academic instruction, I am of the conviction that schools play an indispensable role in molding students' characters, particularly when observing the educational landscape of Vietnam.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or dis agree.

In the realm of education, there is a perennial debate revolving around whether university committees should accept a same number of men and women students in each subject. In this regard, I am inclined to believe that they should not do it due to the different demands and no robust argument.

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Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family mostly through social networking sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking on the phone or face to face. Do you think this is a positive or negative development

In The fast-moving world, There are a lot of communication devices to interact with one another. However, young adults prefer social media such as Facebook, WhatsApp, Twitter etc instead of traditional ways of conversation like telephone and face-to-face for developing their bonding. according to me, it is a negative development as it never gives us real feelings of friendship and this can cause some social evils.

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The number of students who choose to study mathematics at university is low. Why do you think this is? What can be done about this situation?

Nowadays, it seems that students' interest in taking mathematics as their major at university has remained low. One possible explanation for this situation is that they have been thinking that mathematics is a difficult subject to study since primary school. The best solution for this situation is for teachers to build students' interest in mathematics since primary school by making classes more attractive.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The public believes that pupils must learn anything that is their favourite, however, the opposite view is they have to study in many fields tend to have a bright future. In this essay, I will show my view.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant .

The maps indicate the changes that have been made to Grange Park since 1920. In general, some facilities have been added and some have been removed, for example, there is a new entrance in the southeast corner, and rose gardens have diminished to two from three, and one of them has moved to the central part.

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Growing numbers of cities are making their centres pedestrian-only zones. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Recently, an increasing number of cities are transforming their downtown areas into pedestrianized spaces, which is seen as a strategy to establish more environmentally friendly and greener cities. This essay will argue that this course of action comes with compelling benefits including less traffic congestion and air quality improvement, but there will also be some pronounced drawbacks.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in team sports, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are few individuals who that solo outdoor games are beneficial for our people, others align with the thought that sports having a multiple teammates have more merits. This essay discusses both these viewpoints and also elaborate why I think that both are equally significant for men and women.

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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items from famous brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, high-end and popular brands are the number one choice of our generation. However, following this trend are many far-reaching consequences. In my range of understanding, I believe purchasing products from famous brands could bring both positive and negative results in equal measure. Therefore, this essay will outline both the drawbacks and merits as well as give the reasons.

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Some people think that it is better for high school students to study a wide range of subjects than to focus on a narrow range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is ongoing debate regarding whether students should study various academic fields instead of center on a narrow range. This essay will explore both perspectives that I agree and disagree with, and present my personal viewpoint.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; others believe only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that individual action shows no benefit to preserving the environment and that big corporations and governments are the ones responsible for taking care of nature. Personally, I think that both people and large entities should engage in eco-friendly activities in order to generate a positive impact on the ecosystem.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

The number of sports people using illegal substances to improve their performance has increased in many sporting events. This essay believes that many athletes are taking banned substances to win the competition and exceed capabilities beyond their limits. This can be prevented by requiring athletes to take drug tests before the competition and punish them if they have violated the rules.

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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in studies. causes amd solutions?

The extreme pressure to study hard has left many young ones with a lack of idle time. This situation is caused not only by parental pressure but also by limited job opportunities. A plausible solution would be reducing the stress and the government should provide volunteer work.

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Computers are being used more n education nowadays than in the past Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Most educational institutional institutions use computers in the classroom and many rely on online platforms to deliver their courses and communicate with staff and students off campus too. This essay will discuss what I consider to be the main advantages and potential drawbacks of computers in education.

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Many developed countries now have large numbers of people over the age of 65 What problem might this cause? How can the problem be solved?

In the modern world, a variety of developed countries nowadays have a significant number of people over the age of 65. Old people might cause some problems, such as a lack of public transportation and nursing homes. I reckon that elderly people need lots of help due to their physical and mental states.

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