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Describe a noisy place you have been to You should say: Where it is When you went there What you did there And explain why you feel it's a noisy place

Last Christmas, I had a wonderful experience at a rooftop bar in Everton Plaza with my friend. The two of us had bonded over our shared experiences with parenting and stress, so we decided to have a girl's night out with some drinks and live music. When we arrived at the bar,the place was crowded and the DJ was creating an exciting atmosphere that made people come up to the front and dance.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information, as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Now-a-days, there are many ways and platforms to share the knowledge with each other. Various individuals claim that some information need to be contributed but other think that data should be spreaded as much as it could. Personally, the thing which matters the most is what kind of detail we should share with others.
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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some opinions go for children's free time organized by their parents and some opinions counter argue with saying that is better that children choose what they do in their free time, there is a strong argument on both sides, before coming down with my argument I will discuss both arguments.
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In future, robots may do more of the work that is done by human today. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It has been argued by many individuals that in the upcoming time, people would do more work with electronic gadgets as compared to by themselves. This trend has its own set of pros and cons which are elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.
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Some people believe that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the students attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.

It is argued by someone that learning prosperity depends deeper on proper tutoring, while others are concerned that it more depends on the learner's approach. While an undergraduate's approach is really needed to prosper in studying, I suppose that an excellent tutor is more valuable because he or she could inspire his pupils, to capture their interest which will result in better marks.
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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the more difficult the hobby, the more enjoyment people get. In my point of view, hobbies are leisure activities that we do in our free time to have fun so it does not matter whether it is easy or hard.
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Some people like to listen to music while working or studying. Others find that they need silence to focus. What is your preference? Why do you find the other option unhelpful?

In today's fast-paced world, we often find ourselves surrounded by noise and distractions. With the availability of various types of music at our fingertips, the debate over whether to listen to music while working or studying has become a common topic of discussion. Some people prefer to work or study in silence, while others find music to be a helpful tool for concentration and motivation. In this essay, I will discuss my personal preference and explain why I find the other option unhelpful.
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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The aim for every business is to gain profit as much as they can. Some people claim that businesses need to contribute to the well-being of the society. In my point of view, it is required for every company to have a corporate social responsibilities program because of some reasons mentioned below.
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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Atlantic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Furthermore, the main role of teachers or tutors in tutorial teaching is to act as a catalyst or become more of a facilitator. Hence, this idea is totally different from bandongan in which teachers are considered a source of knowledge and tend to dominate the class. In other words, students do not have the opportunity to ask a question or even discuss the materials, but become passive learners by listening, taking notes, and memorizing the materials based on the teacher’s instruction.
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Today, many mothers take care of the family and do not go to work. Some people believe that the government should pay them their salaries. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is irrefutable that the mother is the backbone of any family so more and more women chose to do the housework rather than follow their career paths. Some people opine that they should receive payment from governments while others believe that it’s their responsibility to work as well. I agree with the incipient notion.
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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they like. Is this a good way to raise children What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they got older

It is said that some parents tend to be over-permissive and lenient and provide whatever their kids want. I disagree with this type of parenting and I believe this type of parenting is not good and can have some Negative long-term consequences for heir raised with this way of upbringing. In this essay, I'll discuss the pros and cons
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Water pollution has been an increasing problem over the last few decades. What causes water pollution? How can we prevent this problem?

In today's world it is common to see that a lot of countries face the problem of water pollution. There are a lot of factories that throw away their exhaust fumes in the water. In this essay I will discuss the reasons for water pollution and suggest some ways how to solve them.
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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children?. What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they grow older?

Purchasing different items being demanded ,l and again having the young folks behave the way they ought to ,has encouraged their guidance, though, is not an acceptable means of rearing children. This disclosure will expound on the adverse effects of such parenting like laziness, dissatisfaction, dependence, uncultured and lots more in the subsequent paragraphs.
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Some people think  that in the modern world we are  more dependent on each other, while others believe we have become more independent. discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people said that the more the world moves towards modernity, the more people become dependent on each other. However, some people believe that with the modernization of the world, the level of dependence of people on each other will decrease. I agree with the second opinion. In the following paragraphs, I will express my opinion while stating the reasons.
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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Having children at a younger age has always been supported by society. But over the last decades people started to rethink parenting, and the age of having the first baby has increased. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this issue.
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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication have a negative impact on young people’s writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that children's reading and writing abilities are being negatively impacted by the rising usage of computers and mobile phones for communication.I agree with the notion, as there is more to lose with the increasing technology with respect to communication skills
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Video records are better to learn about the way other people in the world lives than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's globalized world, learning about other cultures has become increasingly important. While some people argue that written documents are a better way to learn about different ways of life, I completely agree with the notion that video records are a more effective medium.
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Being a celebrity such as famous film star are sport personality bring problems as well as benefit

Famous people like movie stars are top athletes and may have luxurious benefits however, their fame can also be detrimental. In my opinion, the advantages of being a notable figure out where the disadvantages are. They can get a lot of money as well as, gain respect and attention. I will discuss my pinpoint in an upcoming paragraph.
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Some people believe that young people know about international pop and movie stars but now very  less about famous people from the history in their own country.  Why is this? How can more interest be created in young people to gain more knowledge about their own famous people from history

As a matter of fact,  pop music groups , famous stars,  games are all the rage at the present time. It has been believed that young people pay more attention to international pop and movie stars than renowned people from the history of their own countries.  There are some reasons  and some measures should be taken to help youngsters gain more knowledge about historical figures of their nations. And I shall explain my point of view by analysing both  reasons for the argument.
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Modern lifestyle mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that contemporary society makes individuals being busier than in the past. Therefore, parents do not have much time for their kids. I completely agree with this notion and will give many reasons below.
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