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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think the education will not work. Disscuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt these days that healthy food is precious to our health and eating more unhealthy food will have a negative impact on our general health. This question is highlighting the argument regarding solving this problem by educating people or not. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion.
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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think the education will not work. Disscuss both views and give your opinion.

Consuming unhealthy food can give a negative impact towards health. There are two sides of this problem, some people think that education will help to change this lifestyle while the other think that it is useless to inform people about the importance of eating healthy food or home-made cook because people mostly will be ignorant and keep swallowing junk food. Hence, I will deliver these both sides and tell my opinion after that.
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The amount of time spend on sports and exercise should be increased in order to tackle the problem of overweight What other solutions can you suggest ?

These days increasing the obesity percentage because of a sedentary lifestyle and having to do yoga to maintain physical and mental well-being person here we can discuss various options available to reduce overweight.
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In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days conflicts are increasing globally. The question is, is that because the leaders are men, and what if the women lead the world? In this essay, I will discuss my view and draw my own conclusion.
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"Nowadays it is noticed that cultural mixing is reflected within local cultural practices. Do you think it is good for our society?"

In today's society,we commonly encounter people belonging to different cultures living together. Thus some of the local cultural practices have altered in several different ways over time. However, I believe that cultural mixing has both beneficial and adverse effects on our society.
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Science and technical experts seem to be more valued by society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

The unprecedented progress of society brings several notable notions. Which are interconvertible. Among them, the rising tendency of science and technical gadgets is one of them. I necessarily agree with the given statement , however, personally, I believe, As per my perspective musicians and artist are also more beneficial.
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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other counties have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages oufweigh the disadvantages?

Globalization has revolutionized our lives in many aspects. A variety of daily use products reaches our country via far distances. It has multiple pros and cons, which has influenced our lives every day. I believe that there are high positives, which overweigh the negatives.
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SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT THERE SHOUD BE A FIXED PUNISHMENT FOR EACH TYPE OF CRIME. OTHERS FOT THAT THE CIRUMSTANCES OF AN OFFENCE SHOULD BE TAKEN IN TO ACCOUNT WHEN DECIDING ON A PUNISHMENT. DISCUSS BOTHE SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

Crimes are punished throughout the world.Some countries have evolved their laws to be a bit more considerate where the conditions in which a crime is committed are considered,rather than one punishment for all.A school of thought opposing this idea believe the same penalty may induce fear reducing the crime rate.But in my opinion,this is a positive development and states should consider the scenario so that they may not punish people who did not a bad intentions.
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Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Life was impeccable and radiant a decade ago but also a struggle for some communities. However, due to drastic development in modernization, everything had changed since then. I agree that living now is much improved than it was 100 years ago. And there are many factors which support that why it is enhanced and these reasons would be considered.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try an improve such situations. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

In this day and age, accompanied by the development of modern society are an increasing number of bad situations for individuals such as an unsatisfying job or a shortage of money. Some people believe that the best option is dealing with these situations, while others believe that it is better to try and improve. From my viewpoint, I would argue that trying improve such a circumstance is always a beneficial solution.
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Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Crimes and violent news have been broadcasting in newspapers and TV channels for decades. Although there are many people who believe that those kinds of crimes and other related news should not be reported on any kind of media platform. I strongly agree that those types of news should be declared on television and in journals because the positive effects of doing so outweigh the drawbacks and I am going to explain why in this essay.
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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

IT IS TRUE THAT CELLPHONE TECHNOLOGY SPREAD WIDE RANGE IN OUR SOCIETTY, AND WE ALSO GIVE OUR MOST OF TIME FOR USING MEANINGLESS WAY OF CELLPHONE. I BELIEVE THAT THE EFFECT OF THIS TECHNOLOGY ON THE HUMAN MIND, IS A GOING ON THE WRONG SIDE.
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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Last decades there is a tendency amongst people,especially the new generation, to move into megapolises and there is an opinion that this is harmful to everyone's health. Meanwhile, there is a belief that life in a city has its benefits. However, from my own perspective, the negative effects outweigh ones positive.
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Some people say when you move to a new country, you have to learn the language and culture of that country. Others say it is better to stick to your old traditions. Discuss both opinions and state yours.

Nowadays, most people have,Advice that when you shift to a new country it is important that you learn the language and understand the culture.Whereas others think that it is better to stick to your old traditions.This essay discusses both views and provides my opinion.
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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

The impact of the technological developments has been a highly debatable issue in the recent years. A lot of people hold the view that technologies have negatively changed various aspects of our lives, social relations being the most influenced. I personally only partially agree with this opinion and this essay will present arguments and examples supporting my opinion.
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Nowadays a large number of wild animals are under the threat of extinction. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In this technological epoch, there are massive destruction activities that affect the life of fauna whereas people usually post about these creatures as nature-love on social media. The majority of wildlife is under threat of extinction. In upcoming paragraphs, I will explain the causes of this and then opine some parameters in order to safeguard it.
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Some people believe it’s better for children to have stay-at-home mothers while others believe it’s better for mothers to work. Which do you think is better for a child, a working or a stay-at-home mother? Use ideas and information from the article to support your ideas.

Many women have a great tendency to be hired by offices in order to earn money. While it is stated by some people that children need their mothers, so, women who have kids should stay at the home, others say working can benefit mothers. I partially agree with the first statement to some extent.
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Nowadays many people aim to create a balance between their work and other aspects of their life, however, only a few achieve it. What are the problems in doing this and what solutions can you suggest?

Today, everyone has hectic schedual of their work so, it is hard to every to maintain work and life to balance. Although, some people are easily manage both part of life. There are creat manifold problems in doing. Therefore, I will expalin the situation and also give solution of this issues.
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Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money. This practice can act as an incentive for some but may also have a negative impact on others. To what extent is this style of management effective? Are there better ways of encouraging employees to work hard?

THERE IS NO DENYING THAT EVERY CHAIRPERSON WISH TO FIND A PERFECT METHOD TO INCREASE THE PRODTICTIVE OF THEIR WORKER. MANY OF EMPLOYERS GUESS THAT FINANCIAL INCENTIVE IS ALONE THE WAY TO DO IT.ON THE CONTRARY, THIS HAVE INEFFECTIVE. THIS ESSAY WILL ARGUE THE CONSEQUENCES OF AWARDING THE EMPLOYEE WITH MONEY AND SEEK TO ALTERNATIVE WAY TO ENCOURAGE ALL EMPLOYEES, IN ADDITION THE LESS CONTRIBUTION.
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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

Nowadays the lack of medical supplies is still founded in many third-world countries, leading to too many deads even from curable diseases. Some believe that pharmaceutical companies should decrease prices in those countries. From my perspective, I do believe that drug companies solely cannot give many discounts to support developing countries. Thus, another support from related parties is required which I will explain in more detail in this essay.
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