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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Always advertisements try to impress with a new product that a business has just lounged. However, now, it is noticed that, they promote a product focusing on a special thing which might have. In my opinion, they are making an effort to appeal consumers, making them curious to try the product and personally speaking, this is a negative development, because we keep on buying things that we do not really need. This essay will discuss the reasons of this development and if that is a negative or positive one.
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Competitiveness is seen as a positive quality for people to have in many societies today. How does this competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative quality?

These days, many countries regard competitiveness as a quality that can make people more productive. Ironically, in my opinion, this trend leads to the opposite side instead of the positive effect. Under the pressure of competition, people are less likely to feel satisfied and need to put in more effort to achieve the same success as now.
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WRITE A CLASSIFICATION ESSAY ABOUT TYPES OF RELAXING PLACES

Nowadays, As society grows, people have to do more work than before. This has led to mental and health stress. For that reason, there are many places that can help these people relax after stressful work hours. There are many places to reduce stress, but they can be classified into three types: sports places, fun places, and far away destinations.
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With fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern world, as well as individuals come home only for sleep, and they have no time for cooking. Therefore, plenty of individuals tend to have fast food for their daily diet. In my opinion, I firmly believe that eating fast food is not an adventage things, because it makes illness and high cost.
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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

Early childhood diseases is the major causes of death globally. Meanwhile, new discoveries of vaccines is essential to humankind. Mortality rate could be diminished once vaccination law is abided by the public however some parents are against with it.
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Some people say patriotism causes problems and is negative overall. Others feel that it is beneficial for society at large. Do the advantages of patriotism outweigh its disadvantages?

Most people believe that excessive amount of patriotism are spreading hatred and many other disadvantages for the country. Others, however, argue that this thing is causing happiness in specific regions. In my point of view, there exist more advantages of patriotism over disadvantages.
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An increasing number of professional such as doctor and teacher are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. what problem does this cause ? what can be done to deal with this situation ?

A large number of physicians and educators are migrating to weatlhy nations and leaving their poor countries behind. This trend could cause serious problems, such as long waiting treatment periods or poor quality in the education field. These problems can be alleviated by implementing new salary regulations in the labour market.
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In the past, when students pursued a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays more and more pupils are choosing to study at university outside their home countries. Looking at this phenomenon, In this ,essay I will be discussing both the pros and cons of this shift.
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There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the Internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a good or bad thing?

Nowadays, there has been a widely spread problem on the internet. Copyright materials are easily used by others, this is resulting in the owners of the work losing money. As a matter of fact, I believe it is a big issue that we have the free will of using it.
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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, some people believe that judge the person based upon the social status and materialistic possessions. There is no much importance given to traditional values such as, kindness, honour or trust. I absolutely oppose this trend and do not agree. It is should be the criteria to judge someone's worth and this essay attempts to discuss the same.
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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

The issue of using fossil fuel is widely debated and constantly raising nowadays . whilst some hold the view that using fuels should be banned and the global demand for natural energy resources , others hold a diverse view . however, I believe that we need to find better alternative as soon as we can to save our planet . my convention will be furthur explained .
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In advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays there are indeed many advertisements for businesses that emphasize their products in different ways especially to bring awareness about their novelty . In this essay. I am going to explain that this is a positive development.
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The limited budgets of governments, especially those in developing countries, are better spent on health and education than on employment-generating projects. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays there are governments that have a limited budget to spend in their countries more specifically in those called "developing countries" and there is an intense debate if it would be better to spend it in order to improve the health system and education instead of on employment generating. To that extent, I am partly in agreement due to the following reasons that I will explain in this essay.
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In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

In the past divorce was unacceptable.It has been observed by many that nowadays, a ratio of a divorces is growing swiftly compared to the past.There are a severals reasons for such a situation,also some primitive steps can be taken to solve this problem.Both the causes and measures are elaborated further.
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Fewer citizens go to their local museums and galleries than ever before. What are the causes of this? What can be done about this?

There has been a fall in the number of people going to local museums and galleries. This shows that people are not interested in their local history and art. In my view, the main reason for this is that new exciting topics are more appealing to people these days and to resolve this issue we can add relevant tours to school schemes to take students to local museums and displays. In this essay, we will discuss the causes of this trend and explain the viable solution to solve this problem.
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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that authority contributes to the increasing numbers of offspring with overweight. I disagree with the viewpoint because it is impossible for politics to prevent unrelated problems, especially when the causes can come from many directions.
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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not only the reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue the importance of foreign language learning appropriate only for work or travelling purposes, while others assert that it is more than just work language and serves other purposes. In my opinion, I consider that people learning a foreign language have various purposes besides just travelling or work-oriented reasons.
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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children's obesity is an ongoing issue in different countries all over the world, and this belief has been accepted by a vast majority of people that governments should face this current predicament and resolve it. In my opinion, governments play a crucial role to tackle this problem.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In an opinion of some people, sharing a lot of information in the fields such as science, business and academics is beneficial for the society. But there are other people who think that critical information related to these fields should be kept secret. In my belief, I agree with both the views and I will present both the opinions in this essay.
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the role of women in society has changed dramatically over the last 100 years. Today, however, the burden on women continues to be heavy as a result of the numerous roles women are expected to fulfill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Women have a role that changed significantly over centuries in communities. Nowadays, women have to fulfill different roles as many expectations which increases the burden on women should hold. However, in my perspective, I disagree with this issue. This essay will represent how my opinions will show.
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