IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Nowadays, mobile phones have become one of the essential factors for living in this era. The benefits of using this digital gadget are convenient application, availability and increasing utilities. To cessation mobile phone use might be very difficult, in this essay, the advantages and some disadvantages of mobile phone or smartphone usage will be explained.
Nowadays exploring the galaxy has become increasingly common around the world. However, some people think that the funds used on these projects could be used to strengthen countries. I totally agree with this opinion and believe that governments should use their money to improve their states' Well being care facilities and also improve roads.
In recent decades,its practical functions, which is a way for students to find better employment has been increasing emphasis by the general public.Others,however ,still insist that there should be additional benefits for individuals and society.
People have different opinions over whether music just provides enjoyment to people or not. Regarding this, some assert that music has a great power that influent on society in contemporary society. This essay will outline why they support each side and my view.
The education system should not force our children to learn a new foreign language because not all of them are mentally prepared to learn it. To that extent, I am partly in agreement due to the following reasons that I will explain in this essay.
In these modern days, processed foods and fizzy drinks are quite popular and they contain high level of sugar which can cause multiple health issues. It is argued that their prices should be higher in order to reduce sugar consumption. I totally agree with that as it would help decrease causing multiple diseases as well as make the population pick up better choices for their health.
The issue of smoking in public is constantly raising . Some hold the view that it's so harmful as smokers badly affect the air and the health of humans surrounding them , others have a divers view that they can act the way they want neglecting others needs and situations . In my opinion , I agree that the government should restrict smoking even ban it in parks and public transportation .My convention will be further explained .
In this present world, some children watch films in order to educate themselves in many areas which have many positive effects on them. in my opinion, watching films for educational reasons, appears to have negatives as well as positives. In this essay, we will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this method of learning.
Students nowadays are under a lot of pressure to achieve academical success in order to get into a good university or secure a well paid job. For this reason some people argue that schools need to focus on academic subjects and vocational subjects should therefore not taught at schools. I would argue that while academic skills are important, schools need to teach a wide range of both academic and more skills-based subjects.
In today's world, crime rates are unprecedentedly high. There can be several reasons behind this, including unemployment and media influence, that I will elaborate on and provide some feasible solutions to in the following paragraphs.
TECHNOLOGICAL DEVICES HAVE BEEN ENTRANCED EVERY FIELD OF LIFE. IN RECENT YEARS, SOME PEOPLE HAVE BEEN ARGUING THAT THIS CHANGE HAS A DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON PEOPLE'S FAMILY AND SOCIAL LIVES BASED ON THEIR PREFERENCE OF WATCHING TELEVISION INSTEAD OF SPENDING TIME WITH OTHER PEOPLE. I TOTALLY DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT AND THIS ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN HOW TV SHOWS CAN ENHANCE PEOPLE RELATIONS.
Always advertisements try to impress with a new product that a business has just lounged. However, now, it is noticed that, they promote a product focusing on a special thing which might have. In my opinion, they are making an effort to appeal consumers, making them curious to try the product and personally speaking, this is a negative development, because we keep on buying things that we do not really need. This essay will discuss the reasons of this development and if that is a negative or positive one.
These days, many countries regard competitiveness as a quality that can make people more productive. Ironically, in my opinion, this trend leads to the opposite side instead of the positive effect. Under the pressure of competition, people are less likely to feel satisfied and need to put in more effort to achieve the same success as now.
Nowadays, As society grows, people have to do more work than before. This has led to mental and health stress. For that reason, there are many places that can help these people relax after stressful work hours. There are many places to reduce stress, but they can be classified into three types: sports places, fun places, and far away destinations.
In this modern world, as well as individuals come home only for sleep, and they have no time for cooking. Therefore, plenty of individuals tend to have fast food for their daily diet. In my opinion, I firmly believe that eating fast food is not an adventage things, because it makes illness and high cost.
Early childhood diseases is the major causes of death globally. Meanwhile, new discoveries of vaccines is essential to humankind. Mortality rate could be diminished once vaccination law is abided by the public however some parents are against with it.
Most people believe that excessive amount of patriotism are spreading hatred and many other disadvantages for the country. Others, however, argue that this thing is causing happiness in specific regions. In my point of view, there exist more advantages of patriotism over disadvantages.
A large number of physicians and educators are migrating to weatlhy nations and leaving their poor countries behind. This trend could cause serious problems, such as long waiting treatment periods or poor quality in the education field. These problems can be alleviated by implementing new salary regulations in the labour market.
Nowadays more and more pupils are choosing to study at university outside their home countries. Looking at this phenomenon, In this ,essay I will be discussing both the pros and cons of this shift.
Nowadays, there has been a widely spread problem on the internet. Copyright materials are easily used by others, this is resulting in the owners of the work losing money. As a matter of fact, I believe it is a big issue that we have the free will of using it.
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