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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

In this modern world, there are ample people who face challenges while getting enough sleep. Insufficient sleep can cause mental disorientation and physical fatigue. There are various solutions to overcome sleeplessness at midnight. This essay will discuss the problems as well as solutions to the issue of lack of sleep.
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“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

Health problem prevention is more important than cure due to the high cost of medical experiments and treatment, so preventive intervention could be the one option. Overall, I totally agree with the statement due to the cost-effectiveness and improving the healthy lifestyle to increase the quality of life.
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are able to compete and local business will bring about the develop of local communities. However, I firmly believe that this expansion brings threats for local business in stead of chances.
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Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this?

People have different opinions about where will they live in the future. While many people find out that, old generations, especially those above 60 years old people tend to live in another part of the world.In my opinion, travelling gives a lot of benefits for people.However, this action may be risky for retirement.
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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many countries have a set of traditions from the past that creates who they are and how they approach actions which often conflicts with newer innovative ways of approaching problems. This essay will look into the balance of how much traditions should determine life and how much society should be open to innovation.
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Some people believe that government should decide which subjects students should take at university, while others feel that students should be allowed to apply for the subjects they prefer. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

It is often argued that higher authorities should control the selection of academic majors in the tertiary education, whilst others disagree and think that students should be given complete freedom to select the area of study they are passionate of. In my opinion, I believe that although subjects selection by the government negates the disparity among society, overall when students will undertake their own choice majors it will enhance their academic performance.
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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will able to read everything, they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We live in an age where everything we use and consume is digital and somehow dependent on technology. This has caused a lot of speculation in literary circles that print media namely newspapers and books is a dying industry. As a result, everything will be digitalized and available at no cost in near future. Herein, I present my case on disagreeing with this thought.
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Some people think that having a set retirement age for everybody regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive pension at an early age. Do you agree or disagree?

Generally speaking, retrirement age is 65 years old in this day and age. Regarding this, some people assert that it is not fair to set the same age for retirement as some jobs are more dangerous than others. I strongly believe that some specific employees who work in certain dangerous industries should retire earlier and be recieved pension earlier than other occupation.
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Large number of deaths are caused by road accidents. Why do so many road accidents occur? Make recommendations that would help to reduce their number.

Nowadays, transports are an indispensable part of human life. As a ,result, many society lose their life while on the road. This essay's causes of this appears to be focused on some areas, and a number of solutions also appear to be possible.
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With fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modertn era, fast-food restaurants are ubiquitous as they are indispensable for busy people. Regarding this, there are pros and cons to eat fast food. However, I strongly believe that the drawback of eating fast food overwhelm the benefit.
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Education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this.
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Write about the following topic: Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In this contemporary world, people are working from dawn to dusk for disposable money; however, there are a few who are managing to spare their time for leisure activities as well. In this essay, I will discuss how playing a sport or developing an art skill as a part of hobby can be benefitted individually as well as socially in general.
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The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries; others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It has been observed that the proportion of elderly persons increasing day by day.Some people have the opinion that these graphs are dangerous for our nation.However, others believe that senior citizen is more important for society.Before arriving at my position both the sides of the argument will be analyzed further.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is well known that many health issues are caused by overconsumption of sugar, which is on many proceed products. Many people suggest rising the price of these products to discourage consumers from buying them. In my opinion, this will not solve the problem, but the government should focus on people's education instead.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is well known that many health issues are caused by overconsumption of sugar, which is on many proceed products. Many people suggest to rise the price on these products to discourage consumers from buying them. In my opinion, this will not solve the problem, but the government should focus on people's education instead.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays it is well known that many health issues are caused by overconsumption of sugar, which is on many proceed products. Many people suggest to rise the price on these products to discourage consumers from buying them. In my opinion, this will not solve the problem, but the government should focus on people's education instead.
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In some countries it is illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Different countries have different legislations. Some countries have a law to restrict people of a certain age to work in some fields. That kind of restrictions may benefit the jobs that require physical fitness, but other intellectual works can have no age boundary, therefore, I believe such laws have positive as well as negative development.
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Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Happiness in human beings is a part of life. Some believe, it comes after getting economically success, but others say that, it can be achieved in different ways. In my opinion, I believe economic success as well as other criterias in a person's life bring happiness.
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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, mobile phones have become one of the essential factors for living in this era. The benefits of using this digital gadget are convenient application, availability and increasing utilities. To cessation mobile phone use might be very difficult, in this essay, the advantages and some disadvantages of mobile phone or smartphone usage will be explained.
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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money money on other things to benefit the nation . To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays exploring the galaxy has become increasingly common around the world. However, some people think that the funds used on these projects could be used to strengthen countries. I totally agree with this opinion and believe that governments should use their money to improve their states' Well being care facilities and also improve roads.
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