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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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In your view, what is the most important thing for governments to spend money on: education, health, transportation, or something else?

The people present problems with the government’s decision on how they invest money in the health sector, which endangers their country’s health.
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Animal rights protesters strongly believe that any form of animal experimentation is not only cruel and inhumane but also immoral. Scientists, however, believe that it is justified when used to develop new medicines, which benefit the lives of humans. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Animal Scientific discoveries are not showing humanity and sympathy for animal species claimed by animal defender communities. Moreover, researchers strongly agreed that it is moral when it comes to ques of human lives animals are trialled. This essay will discuss both views, in my humble opinion.
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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

In the last decade, there are arguments relevant to punishment who committed a crime. So many people believe the punishment for death is a fair idea. On the other hand some people do not think that they believe this is not the best way to punish a crime. However, in my opinion, humans should give up the death penalty punishment of society’s psychology and misjudgments ıssues.
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Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents since their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?

Nowadays, people are busy and they do not have time to take care of their children as much as they would like to. That is the reason why they send their kids to the daycare or they allow their parents to take care of them. Those actions have an impact on children's development and family relations. I would like to present my point of view below.
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Today more and more people are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Thus, there is no need to print newspapers, books, or magazines anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the advent of technology, it is true that there is an increased use of digital devices when compared to newspapers, books and other traditional forms. While this is true, I completely disagree with the notion that the necessity of non-digital forms would die over time.
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Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is apparent that technology makes things that people do on a daily basis become more complicated; therefore, some people believe that we should get rid of technology in order to simplify our life. Personally, I strongly disapprove of the given statement. In this essay, I am going to cite some of the rationale behind my disagreement.
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• Some students found some subjects such as mathematics, philosophy are difficult, so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is known that some students face big difficulties learning such complex subjectss as math and philosophy, therefore, it is suggested to allow students to choice whether they want to drop these subjects or continue learning them. I partially disagree with the given statement, and I think that this policy could be applied only in the latest years of education (high school or college), when mature students have already chosen the major sphere.
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It could be argued that technology makes our lives easier and simpler. But there are certainly people who feel life has become more complicated due to modern inventions. Which opinion do you agree with? In your essay, include supporting details.

People are divided on the opinion, whether technical advancement can make our life smooth or it make our life more complex. I beleive that the technical upgradation makes our life way easier which helps us to ignore the complex side of technology. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss about the role of technology to make our life better.
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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The first vehicle appeared on British roads in 1888 12 years later everybody has their own car. The crowd should use alternative transport this essay will discuss both of views and give a conclusion. I agree with this idea because it leads air pollution and many diseases.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondarySome school. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning a foreign language at an early stage of life is more beneficial than grasping it in the later years of school life. I agree with the passage given.
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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

People should not be afraid to take risks or accept uncertainty in either their professional lives or private lives. From my point of view, although taking risks could improve life skills and create exponential growth in one's life, it may lead to vital failure and problems.
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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

There is a viewpoint which argues that, although agricultural techniques have developed compared to previous years, still there are a large number of humans who are suffering from poverty, and hunger. In my point of view, this issue is due to the area of the earth where they live , furthermore, they should choose a country or continent with fertile soil.
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Student perform better in school when they are reworded rather than punished. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

It is true that if students take more  recompense instead of  punishment and then it would help student’s mind to be more positively work and student may be way more active in the lessens. I more agree to this view and think that give a more prises to student for their activities to be better in classes is more beneficial rather than punish them.
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In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Alongside the development of industries, climate change makes the earth less ideal to live on. Some people, therefore, suggest investing more in the field of astronomy to find alternative planets. This may be true, but I believe this is not the only way to save our future. On the one hand, finding other planets to live on is a good idea. Firstly, many limited natural resources are many limited natural resources that are over-exploited nowadays. Once these resources are no longer available, we will have been lacking fossil fuels, such as charcoal or petroleum. Industrial and daily activities are considerably dependent on them, so it is necessary to start to find new planets that have these resources to exploit or even live in. Secondly, setting a goal of settling down on a new planet can force astronomy to grow faster. Becoming learned in the field, the scientists will figure out new places to live and other innovations, exploit the energy of the stars, and communicate w...
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Meat Production requires relatively more lands than crop production. Some people think as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce world’s meat consumption? What kind of problem such measures caused?

The area of land usage for animal husbandry is comparatively greater than that for crop manufacturing. Some suggest that global animal production usage be reduced. One of the first problems is the scarcity of land. Encouraging the utilization of more herbal goods by improving the quality of crop products and increasing the price of beef is the best measure to reduce beef utilization.
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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the topic of whether to have frequent short holidays or take fewer and longer trips has drawn the public’s attention which leads to a popular debate. In this essay, both views will be discussed in the following paragraphs , and my opinion will also be given.
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Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

Workers are no longer as committed as they once were to the companies that employ them. While people in our grandparents' generation would often job for a company for decades, or even their entire lives, nowadays people tend to change their workplaces every two or three years. In this essay, I will explain why this is the case, and suggest two ways that team can retain their staff for longer.
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Raising household electricity fees is the most effective solution to the problems associated with power generation and environmental pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective in reducing the environmental pollution caused by power generation?

As the energy demand has gradually increased due to the rising in population as a result of that, power generation is expanded and more investment is required to fill the gap between demand, and supply. one of the potential solutions is increasing bills of residential sector that ensures, wise use of electricity. Having said that I totally agree with this statement.
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Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The volume of international travel is increasing with globalisation and cheaper travel. As a result, it is argued that the environment is suffering and those restrictions should be imposed on such travel. I think that international travel does pose some risks for the environment, but the effects can be mitigated.
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Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people's lives in negative ways.To extent do you agree or disagree?

These days the news media have gained in popularity,but some people argue that electronic journalism has negatively affected people's lives.However,I disagree with the statement because in the current era we need it.In this essay,I will discuss why I completely disagree with this notion.
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