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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it is arguable that advertisement appears so general that no one cares about them, some people say that advertising is successful in convincing others to buy the things it advertises. In my opinion, I support that one of the reasons people are tempted to buy something is because of the promotion they see.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for a country, while some think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The international sports event is being conducted for decades and whoever hosts these events are always beneficial in the form of economy and sportsmanship. On the other hand, A coin has always both sides - Good or bad so arranging the events cause some problems as well such as scams, crime etcetera. In my opinion, It has more pros than cons.

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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Economic growth has become one of the top priorities of every state around the world. However, some experts believe that rich countries with any additional increase in economic wealth are unable to create more satisfaction for their citizens. Personally, I hold a different perspective on this notion.

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t is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many educational institutions nowadays try to mix academic and practical skills. some people argue that more academic-oriented materials are rooted in the past, and not useful for preparing admission for their real-life tasks. they say that modern life problems require practical skills. I disagree with this point of view because I think that academic knowledge is very important and home management is acquired within the context of family.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of road safety is a controversial one in many countries. Some people believe that the right way to decrease the number of vehicle accidents is to increase the minimum legal age for taking a driving license. I completely disagree with this statement, and in the following essay, I will explain why.

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Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

It is true that in today's time there are too many chances to study abroad. It can help boost confidence as well as education level. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of foreign educational programs.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these viese views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some that sharing as much information as possible in the fields like inventing , firms and in classrooms are good whereas, others believe that some information is important as well as valuable to be shared . In the upcoming ,paragraph I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Many people think that students should be given homework every day. Others this that it will give them under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion

While it is often thought that students ought to be given homework every day because it helps them to understand the lessons, others think that this is going to make students more stressed. In my opinion, I believe that if teachers are given students homework, they will improve and understand the lessons clearly.

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Some people believe unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain individuals think community services should be free and mandatory part of secondary school courses such as working for a charity, developing the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger ones. I strongly agree as this will help them gain knowledge in different aspects and instil good motive of rendering service.

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Some people think learning history in school is important. Others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that studying history in school is crucial. While reasons can be given to justify this, I believe that learning subjects, which are relative to the future is more essential.

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All big business should give a percentage of their incomes with charities. Do you agree or disagree?

There are corporations that are successful and make profits every year so it is beneficial for the charities to be contributed by them. I strongly agree with this idea.

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Many people work long hours, living very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In this new era, people tend to earn more money for which they keep themselves engaged in work for long hours, leaving not enough time for other relaxing activities. This essay will discuss some merits and demerits of this public priority. And will argue why the disadvantages of this likeness outweigh the advantages.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is quite common these days that most people use social media to interact with others instead of arranging face-to-face conversations. It is my belief that the positive effects of this innovation could certainly offset its disadvantages.

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It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and grandparents are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Kids absorb information and traits like a sponge, and these characteristics reflect as they grow up. In many households, extended relatives play a major role in one's rearing and this is considered to be beneficial to the young one as wisdom is imparted through many minds. The old guard is the most experienced population on the planet and is always of great welfare to learn from them. I partly concur with this notion and in this essay, I will provide my views on the topic.

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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today, before buying any item, people usually refer to others' opinions about it. While it may be beneficial for some, others believe it is bad for business. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it. In my opinion, although I acknowledge the drawbacks, I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

In today’s world, it is believed that children should learn the difference between good and bad, especially at that age. punishment is required to teach them this important skill, which is knowing the difference between good and bad.

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Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly considered by many that practical skills like repairing cars,dealing with bank affairs and making handicrafts like knitting or even cocking, should be introduced in children's unit lessons. Regardless of the importance of theoretical curricula, I completely agree that adding some functional lessons as extracurriculars could play an important role as a booster in offspring's individual life skills.

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Modern technology is used in many workplaces today. How do you think technology changed the ways people work? Do you think there are any disadvantages of relying on technology at work?

Nowadays in workplaces, the way in which staffs work is changed due to using modern technology that might have a controversial issue about how we can rely on technologies and what disadvantages are concluded. From my point of view, with sophisticated technologies working has become more convenient and precisely than before might have a notable impact on employees.

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some people believe that isa good idea to express their points of views and ideas through social media while , other belive opposite . Who do you support or why ?

In this contemporary ,era social media and social networks are the best tools to express feelings and stand. Some people are extroverts who can share each moment of their personal and professional life on social media we called them bloggers. Whereas others are too shy to post anything or share their idea. I believe that until your view or content is not objectionable to society , this tool remarkably helps all.

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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people opine that government takes responsibility for increasing obesity among children. And I will give my own opinion about this statement.

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