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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

In recent years, it is assumed that the rapid advancement of artificial intelligence (AI) might replace human workers. While it is possible that all menial jobs will eventually be taken over by robots, it is unlikely that jobs requiring human connection will be substituted. This essay will discuss why I think not all jobs will finally be replaced by AI.

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"prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. to what extend do you agree?

It is true that many diseases cost a lot to be cured, but we can focus on staying healthy and avoiding dangerous situations, which could make us sick. I completely agree with the idea that we should take care of our bodies and stay healthy.

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Some people think that children should learn to paint and draw. Others believe that is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today, people have different opinions about young students learning painting and drawing, some believe that as a waste of time whereas others believe that it's important for kids to learn these arts. I personally believe that they should learn talents such as painting and drawing which can have a positive impact on children's mental growth.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the globalization of the world, many countries are competing with each other on a higher scale. The government mainly focus on prioritizing economical progression to build a nation. However, some disagree as they believe that it is crucial for governments to pay great attention towards other ways of progressive approaches. I strongly agree with the latter and in this essay, I will discuss both of these views.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Making up decisions can take up a long process time, with or without help from another group of humans. An urgent decision that someone thinks of, needs to be decided by a few people. However, this statement could be a contradiction by certain people. In this essay, I will argue that in settling something, we need other perspectives from our closest (eg. friends, family, and relatives).

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Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?

The phenomenon of a rising number of traffic accidents has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I believe that a server consequence can prevent humans make the wrong discussion as a barrier, so I completely agree that the punishment should be enhanced.

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Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some contend that unlawful music downloads have negative consequences on musicians, whilst others hold the view that they have minor to nonexistent consequences on music production. This essay will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs before drawing any judgements.t

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information. Therefore, there is no need to print books, magazines, and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With smartphones, tablets and e-readers reaching mass adoption over the past few years, many have predicted that printed books would soon become a thing of the past. And while it’s true that electronic devices are more portable and can store more information, I don't agree with this notion and believe that ink and paper are still irreplaceable.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more diadvantages?

It is irrefutable fact that these days more and more people are working long hours. After that, they are giving their less time for leisure activities. I personally believe that the benefits of the statement are far outweigh its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.

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Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theater and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement?

Due to the changing social demands, it is often controversial what kinds of skills and knowledge young people should gain for a better future. While some people argue that they should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre than playing sports, I strongly disagree with this view for the following reasons.

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Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some claim that communication between family members has declined recently. I completely agree with the statement and deem that it results from a busy lifestyle and social media addiction.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for a child having a larger number of toys?

Nowadays, a large number of toys are given to children by their parents. This allows them to play for hours and change the toy every time the children feel tired. However, parents need to be aware of what they buy and how they give toys to their children.

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is considered by certain individuals that reside in the suburbs have been a positive influence in terms of health, while some are of the opinion that life in cities supplies more health merits to the public. In my understanding, both locations have a remarkable impact on the well-being of the human population.

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Some people think that it is effective for students to study in a group at school, while others think it is better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an opinion that people are better off studying with their classmates rather than working alone. Personally, I believe that this idea is only relevant to some perspectives, who seem to be extroverts. For the vast majority of the crowd, it is rewarding to work with teammates, even ones that they do not enjoy.

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In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them?

* it is true that the majority of countries, saw a rapid increase in the average weight of individuals, while a decrease in their fitness and health, I think that many reasons are associated with this issue, mainly the current lifestyle, it can be solved by some regulations in this assay we will shade lights on.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there were fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Even though local languages are disappearing eventually, it is inevitable to avoid the growth and spread of the most spoken language as a means of communication. Consequently making socialisation easier. I advocate the idea of a single language in the world will take enormous number of barriers in society.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages

In this era, paying digitally has become a more prominent way of spending money. While it might seem that this invention has only been distinguished for only a handful amount of time, the more utilized programs like "Apple pay" have been around for almost a decade. Using your phone to make a purchase has many merits, however, the demerits still can’t be ignored.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating to the environment, population and education as well . What problems will your country face in the next 10 years? How can these problems be overcome

In the next 10 years, there are many significant problems such as the environment, population and education which will be faced by nations everywhere. While my country will be meeting some issues relating to the population and surroundings. This essay will examine the principal causes and possible solutions to this issue.

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some people say that the higher positions in any company should be given only to their own employees and not somebody outside the company and new worker. to what extent to you agree or disagree...

People prefer to give a senior position in the company only to their own employees rather than giving it to outside people. I agree with the view that only after serving for a certain time period higher position should be offered.

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Today people live away from their friends and family to find a job in other cities. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that in this day and age, there are an increasing number of young adults who tend to migrate to other places for occupation opportunities. While this trend may bring about some undeniable benefits, I would argue that they are eclipsed by drawbacks.

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